Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2016 July 3

= July 3 =

04:54:48, 3 July 2016 review of submission by AussieScholar
I would like some help with clarifying what is missing from this article to make it suitable for publishing. Originally I was advised the in text referencing did not meet wikipedia standards and to use footnotes. As requested I have used footnotes following wikipedia guidelines, I have also changed the headings and format of the article to make in line with wikipedia guidelines. Was it just a formatting issue, or do I need to broaden the range and type of references used in my article? Thanks, Brendan
 * I have tone issues with the draft. It seems to be written in order to praise him rather than to describe him neutrally and let the readers decide to praise him.  Robert McClenon (talk) 17:38, 4 July 2016 (UTC)