Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2016 July 31

= July 31 =

21:25:38, 31 July 2016 review of submission by RobbieIanMorrison
Hello AfC helpdesk. My draft article was rejected for being too essay-like, but no further explanation was given. Could someone review the draft and suggest ways in which it could be improved and made more acceptable. I would be very grateful for that. Kind regards. RobbieIanMorrison (talk) 21:25, 31 July 2016 (UTC)