Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2016 June 3

= June 3 =

Request on 13:01:33, 3 June 2016 for assistance on AfC submission by Rachelpewsey
The content keeps coming back saying it sounds like an advertisement. I have tried editing the content so it's from a neutral perspective and added in links from external sources, along with facts to make it informative. However, the changes are still not approved. Can you please help, or explain where the content is not appropriate please?

Many thanks in advance. Rachelpewsey (talk) 13:01, 3 June 2016 (UTC)