Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2016 May 18

= May 18 =

05:45:40, 18 May 2016 review of submission by Andreiabrazier 78
Hi. we are Team Andreia Brazier who manages and handles Andreia Brazier profiles and business coordination. We are the one responsible and builds Andreia Brazier website http://andreiabrazier.com/.. We could provide all necessary documents to prove that the article was truly the personal background of Ms. Andreia Brazier...


 * Please clarify what you mean by "we". The policy on Wikipedia is "one user—one account". Usernames should not be shared by multiple individuals. --Worldbruce (talk) 13:57, 18 May 2016 (UTC)

06:54:01, 18 May 2016 review of submission by Mahmoodyaqub
Hi I've advised to rewrite the History section in Prose format which i have done. I've submitted it again for review can someone assist me more with doing a better job of this page.

Mahmoodyaqub (talk) 06:54, 18 May 2016 (UTC)

07:03:40, 18 May 2016 review of submission by Vandy 1987
The reason mentioned to delete the article was with regards to the references cited. The references have been taken from reliable 3rd party sources in the media. Please help.

Vandy 1987 (talk) 07:03, 18 May 2016 (UTC)


 * Moving to article space a draft that wasn't approved was not a good idea. It would have been wiser to improve the draft here until a reviewer accepted it. --Worldbruce (talk) 13:47, 18 May 2016 (UTC)

08:15:06, 18 May 2016 review of draft by 105.184.210.240
Please help me with editing and proofreading. Fact check the article, as I have provided as much citation as possible 105.184.210.240 (talk) 08:15, 18 May 2016 (UTC)

105.184.210.240 (talk) 08:15, 18 May 2016 (UTC)

10:56:44, 18 May 2016 review of submission by Sfisher32
I am just looking for guidance before I request a re=review.

I am not sure how "best" to add the lede sentence "The Insider was a Northern Virginia music magazine between 1989 and 1994." (suggestion by Robert McClenon) My best guess is that I go to the history, select the last version I submitted, then add the "lede sentence" in the "subject" field and finally request a re=review. Is this correct?

Robert also asked "Can additional references to national or regional reliable sources be found?" - I am still doing research, but the reference sources listed in the article include 4 regional, 3 national and all 50 or the original publications as sources. How many more sources are needed?

Any help is greatly appreciated.

FYI: I have also obtained permission from the copyright owner to reprint the reviews, but my research is limited to collecting a list of musicians and bands from this era. I am also trying to get in contact with the editors and writers from some of the other publications from the area. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sfisher32 (talk • contribs) 10:56, 18 May 2016 (UTC)


 * Hi . There is no need to go through the history tab. You want your changes added to the most recent version, no matter who edited it. Simply click the "Edit" (or "Edit source") tab across the top and between  and   insert the additional text "was a Northern Virginia music magazine between 1989 and 1994."
 * The Insider is an obscure publication. Worldcat.org shows no holdings of it in any libraries. The concern about the references is that they too are obscure. There's no obvious record of Maryland Musician Magazine, Rox Magazine, or a Washington, D.C. published The City Paper. The references give no authors, no article titles, no page numbers, and no quotes from the articles. This makes it difficult to verify the information and evaluate whether The Insider is something that has garnered significant attention from the world at large (the criteria for inclusion in Wikipedia). Worldbruce (talk) 12:40, 18 May 2016 (UTC)

Request on 12:37:59, 18 May 2016 for assistance on AfC submission by 52.30.29.110
I am trying to create an article on the Actor. I know I am doing something wrong, but I can't see where.

52.30.29.110 (talk) 12:37, 18 May 2016 (UTC)


 * Hi, IP editor. I've left a comment that may be useful on the draft. Worldbruce (talk) 13:16, 18 May 2016 (UTC)

Request on 14:37:25, 18 May 2016 for assistance on AfC submission by Hecmen84
I want to create an article about my friend Ricardo Raúl Montoya, he is a soccer coach. I need help to avoid bein declined

Hecmen84 (talk) 14:37, 18 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Please either write it in English or translate it into English. Also see association football notability guidelines and general notability guidelines as to his notability once the draft is in English.  Robert McClenon (talk) 14:50, 18 May 2016 (UTC)

15:10:44, 18 May 2016 review of submission by Moriaed
Hello, I do not understand how can this article be declined... I placed many cites and also links. Dalit is a very important person and have achieved a lot in her life. I would love someone to review it again since this is clearly a mistake.. Thanks Moriaed (talk) 15:10, 18 May 2016 (UTC)
 * First, please do not annoy the reviewers by saying that the decline was a mistake. The original article was so full of overlinkings to common English words that it was difficult to read for someone whose first language is English.  I see that the overlinking has been removed.  Second, in order to get the article reviewed again, just resubmit it.  It hasn't yet been resubmitted.  Also, please do not refer to her, in accordance with our standards, as Stauber, not as Dalit.  Israeli names are Western-style, with a first name followed by a family name, and, in Wikipedia, family names are used after the full name has been provided.  Robert McClenon (talk) 15:32, 18 May 2016 (UTC)