Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2016 May 21

= May 21 =

14:46:54, 21 May 2016 review of submission by 62.194.104.217
I do believe the article is somewhat adequately referenced. Which referneces are lacking, and what is required to establish notability?

62.194.104.217 (talk) 14:46, 21 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Be crystal clear, in the first sentence or two, which notability criteria the band satisfies. Prove it with arms-length, reliable, secondary sources. 3voor12 doesn't help establish notability because it lets musicians tell their own stories. In other words, it isn't independent. Whether XITE is an arms-length source is unclear. Their business is attracting listeners, and they are playing the band's music, so it's in their interest to promote the band. --Worldbruce (talk) 00:21, 22 May 2016 (UTC)

18:07:02, 21 May 2016 review of submission by Codyharrell
I was wondering why my page was not approved at this time. How does it need to be improved ? Codyharrell (talk) 18:07, 21 May 2016 (UTC) P
 * As the reviewer said, the issue isn't notability but tone. Go through the draft and rework all of the language that can even remotely be seen as praising rather than describing the organization and put it in neutral form.  Robert McClenon (talk) 01:03, 22 May 2016 (UTC)

21:03:30, 21 May 2016 review of submission by Theboxny
Hi, I am asking since I placed so many sources and all reliable.. thank you Theboxny (talk) 21:03, 21 May 2016 (UTC) Theboxny (talk) 21:03, 21 May 2016 (UTC)
 * I've commented on the draft. --Worldbruce (talk) 23:19, 23 May 2016 (UTC)
 * What should I do now? Theboxny (talk) 14:47, 23 June 2016 (UTC)