Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2016 May 25

= May 25 =

09:51:22, 25 May 2016 review of submission by AhaGuru BS
I created a page "Balaji Sampath" but it has been deleted. Im not sure how to rewrite the content. Any help is appreciated. Thaks in advance. AhaGuru BS (talk) 09:51, 25 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Your page has not been deleted. It has been declined.  I will note that it reads promotionally, like an advertisement for his classes.  (By the way, are you working for him to advertise his classes, or are you merely a satisfied student who benefited from his classes?  If the former, you need to make the conflict of interest declaration and maybe the paid editing disclosure.  Unless you can find independent reliable sources about him, it is not clear to me that it can be rewritten to be accepted.  Maybe other editors can be less pessimistic.  Robert McClenon (talk) 17:23, 25 May 2016 (UTC)

11:44:11, 25 May 2016 review of submission by Kennyung6
please i need a reviewer to review this article i created https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Clement_Dzidonu User Dodger67 reviewed it the first time the article was submitted, he said Much of the content has no references that was around april, i just added more references to the article.

Kenny Dabiri 11:44, 25 May 2016 (UTC)
 * It reads like a resume rather than an encyclopedic draft. Language such as "He is a Futurist and leading thinker in the area of the technological advancement" is peacock language and should be toned down.  Robert McClenon (talk) 17:25, 25 May 2016 (UTC)

20:57:27, 25 May 2016 review of submission by TTSDonahue
TTSDonahue (talk) 20:57, 25 May 2016 (UTC)

Could someone help me edit my submission, military grade and military-grade? Don't know how to do the references although I have listed them.

21:39:04, 25 May 2016 review of submission by Prisencolin
Prisencolin (talk) 21:39, 25 May 2016 (UTC)

I'm attempting to recreate an article that was deleted via an AfD (Articles for deletion/Trevor Henry (sports announcer)). Would it also be a good idea to use WP:DRV as well?--Prisencolin (talk) 21:39, 25 May 2016 (UTC)


 * Welcome to the AfC help desk, . Your question is outside the scope of Articles for creation. The answer is, "it depends." You haven't shown a reason to take it to WP:DRV, and there's no indication that you've discussed the matter with the closing admin, as required. It may be worth discussing it with them, but so far no evidence has been shown that the result of the deletion discussion should not have been delete. --Worldbruce (talk) 14:21, 27 May 2016 (UTC)