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= November 7 =

05:44:22, 7 November 2016 review of submission by 14.142.81.39
 JTP ( talk • contribs) 15:43, 7 November 2016 (UTC)
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07:37:19, 7 November 2016 review of submission by Ebbaberia
May I have tips on how to make my article good enough for publication? The subject has many online pictures, shows, etc but was still rejected Ebbaberia (talk) 07:37, 7 November 2016 (UTC)
 * The draft in question is Draft:Jong Cuenco. The reviewer said that your subject may not be notable enough for a Wikipedia article.  JTP ( talk • contribs) 20:56, 7 November 2016 (UTC)

Request on 09:55:29, 7 November 2016 for assistance on AfC submission by Riazqadeer91
I submit an article about my company, but my article not approved. Please can you fix changes that need in my article to make it publish. I really a great thanks.

Riazqadeer91 (talk) 09:55, 7 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Hello, Riazqadeer. Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia.  Comments about your submission have been left by another reviewer at the top of your draft.  NewYorkActuary (talk) 18:16, 7 November 2016 (UTC)

Request on 18:28:46, 7 November 2016 for assistance on AfC submission by Pamignite
HI I have read the comments and suggestions and wonder if perhaps for this article to be initially approved it would be better to simply state that he is an Australian Rock climber and list all of the cited routes that he has done. Looking at pages of his contemporaries, most lack in-depth coverage or are based on interviews, or their own books. Any tips as to which of the sources I cited are good would be helpful.

Pamignite (talk) 18:28, 7 November 2016 (UTC)

Draft:Apaches Entertainment
Just a question, why did you reject my draft: Draft:Apaches Entertainment? I'm just curious. Superchunk22 (talk) 20:26, 7 November 2016 (UTC)
 * A declination summary is at the top of your draft.  JTP ( talk • contribs) 20:55, 7 November 2016 (UTC)

23:43:19, 7 November 2016 review of submission by RacingSunset
I've submitted a page and it has been declined, but I am not sure why? What can I do to have my page accepted? Any assistance would be appreciate, or at very least, a reason it was declined so I know what I need to change.

Thanks RacingSunset (talk) 23:43, 7 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Hello, RacingSunset. Thank you for your contribution to Wikipedia.  The reason your submission was declined is given in the box at the top of your draft.  The best source for further detail is the reviewer who looked at your submission, and that person can be contacted using the Talk page button that appears at the top of your draft.  But I did take a look at your draft myself and can readily see what that reviewer was concerned about -- you really do need to tell the reader where you are getting each bit of information that appears in the draft.  This is what we call "in-line citation".  You can read more about it at our introduction to referencing, WP:REFB.  I hope this was helpful.  NewYorkActuary (talk) 00:25, 8 November 2016 (UTC)