Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2016 October 18

= October 18 =

Request on 07:45:20, 18 October 2016 for assistance on AfC submission by Drjijopaul
Drjijopaul (talk) 07:45, 18 October 2016 (UTC)


 * There was no need to duplicate your submission here on this Help page, so I took the liberty of removing it. The submission from your Sandbox has been declined, both for failing to demonstrate notability and for failing to provide any references from reliable sources (or, indeed, from any sources whatsoever).  If you wish to resubmit, you might want to first read our introduction to referencing, which can be found at WP:REFB.  NewYorkActuary (talk) 12:20, 18 October 2016 (UTC)

23:59:53, 18 October 2016 review of submission by Wpmarina
Wpmarina (talk) 23:59, 18 October 2016 (UTC) Hello! I submitted an article as draft and it was not approved. I would like to know the reason. I am knew at wikipedia and I wish to learn from my experience and mistakes. Thank you.
 * Hello, Wpmarina. Thank you for your contribution to Wikipedia.  The person who can best answer that question is the reviewer who looked at your submission.  You'll find the reviewer's name and talk-page button at the top of your submission.  NewYorkActuary (talk) 00:12, 19 October 2016 (UTC)
 * The draft is Draft:Chilitos Valenzuela. It was declined as not supported by reliable sources.  You did not provide any references.  Also, it has tone issues.  It is not written in the formal neutral tone that is expected in Wikipedia; parts of it have a breezy informal tone.  Robert McClenon (talk) 02:06, 19 October 2016 (UTC)