Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2016 September 15

= September 15 =

[full-text paste of User:Uncertainty3214/sandbox has been removed --Worldbruce (talk) 05:16, 15 September 2016 (UTC) ]

— Preceding unsigned comment added by Uncertainty3214 (talk • contribs) 03:20, 15 September 2016 (UTC)


 * Hi . There is no need to paste the text of your draft here at the help desk. If you want a question answered, however, it would help to state your question. And please remember to sign your communications with four tildes. If you are wondering why the draft was not accepted, the big pink box at the top of the draft explains why it had to be declined - it cites no sources. --Worldbruce (talk) 05:22, 15 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Also, your draft is duplicated. Most of the text of your draft is present either three or four times.  Also, your draft does not have section headings to divide and organize it.  See WP:Markup on how to mark up section headings.  Robert McClenon (talk) 00:12, 17 September 2016 (UTC)
 * It appears that you have repeatedly added the text of your draft to your draft, causing it to be duplicated. A helpful editor then deleted the duplications, leaving only one copy of your draft.  However, you went ahead and added the text two more times.  Please don't continue duplicating your draft.  It won't get it accepted; in fact, the duplication may be a reason in itself for it being declined.  Robert McClenon (talk) 00:21, 17 September 2016 (UTC)

15:23:23, 15 September 2016 review of submission by KenDickey

 * Your draft was declined in June 2016 for tone reasons, because it reads like an advertisement. It is now waiting for those issues to be addressed and to be resubmitted.  Robert McClenon (talk) 23:40, 16 September 2016 (UTC)