Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2016 September 28

= September 28 =

10:47:06, 28 September 2016 review of submission by Jonas96313
I need to find out why my article about a basketball player is getting declined. The reviewer said that i need some reliable sources, even though i had added them

Jonas96313 (talk) 10:47, 28 September 2016 (UTC)


 * I'm afraid an interview of the subject and a Youtube video are nowhere near compliance with the standards for independent and reliable sources. Please read the guidelines at those two linked pages and also the Referencing for beginners guide. Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 11:07, 28 September 2016 (UTC)

So you are telling me if that player played for more than 10 clubs during his career, I need to go and find all the articles from those teams, to prove that he played for them? It is not a big problem, but i have never seen a wiki article about a basketball player where in the reference section there would be more than 5 references — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jonas96313 (talk • contribs) 12:37, 28 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Did he play for any of the leagues listed in the basketball notability guidelines as fully professional? If so, please indicate which league and provide a reliable source.  Robert McClenon (talk) 03:24, 29 September 2016 (UTC)

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12:12:25, 28 September 2016 review of submission by Shadowexcel
Shadowexcel (talk) 12:12, 28 September 2016 (UTC)


 * If you are here because of your sandbox submission that was recently declined, please read the reasons why it was declined. Your submission was directly copied and pasted, resulting in a WP:Copyright violation. Please read through WP:CV and the comments left on your sandbox.  JTP ( talk • contribs) 01:18, 29 September 2016 (UTC)

13:49:13, 28 September 2016 review of submission by Vincent L Gilbert
Looking for clarification on why the page Vincent_L_Gilbert (Username Vincent L Gilbert) was declined. The reviewer suggested reviewing the "What Wikipedia is not" section which I have. I did notice that an advisement given to another user stated "Wait for someone else to create the article", I am assuming this is the reason. If this is the case, I am confused, the article here Wikipedia:An_article_about_yourself_isn't_necessarily_a_good_thing begins "Are you planning to write an article about yourself? Before you proceed" which is a strong indicator that the practice is allowed, of course lower down it does state "No auto biographies"...thus the confusion. I followed the COI policy very carefully, my page is factual and not biased. Certainly I am not the most notable musician to have been involved in the 80's metal explosion, but I am one of the few keyboardists, I am mentioned in multiple books recently published as well as films, and several of the people I am playing with at this time have Wikipedia pages. At one time I toured with what was at that time one of the biggest bands on the world. There is no self promotion, it is really simply a history. My page was annotated, far more than existing pages of individuals I know personally. So is it a matter of content editing, or am I not allowed to start a page?

Thanks in advance!

Vincent Gilbert

Vincent L Gilbert (talk) 13:49, 28 September 2016 (UTC)

15:59:47, 28 September 2016 review of submission by KER1M
KER1M (talk) 15:59, 28 September 2016 (UTC)

may i know why my article is rejected

1 Malaysia People's Welfare Association, known as KER1M, was established on 18 November 2013 with the approval of the ROS registration PPM-005-18112013. KER1M Society Publications also obtained approval from the Ministry of KDN PP18539 / 07/2014 (033,954). In 2015, Unity KER1M been registered with the Department of National Unity (JPNIN) under the Prime Minister Department. YAB Dato Sri Najib fully supported KER1M towards the ground services which has been providing to various communities especially for those stay at rural area. The numberous programme conducted was " 1 Malaysia Wheel Chair Aid Programme ( BKR1M)', HIV/AIDS Awareness Programme, Publication of YAB Dato Sri Najib 40 Years Celebration in Politic, Crime Awareness with PDRM dan RELA and more to come.

Here are the goals of the Association KER1M: -


 * 1) 1 Run the program and activities towards the development of character and self-esteem.
 * 2) 2 Implement programs and activities related to social welfare.
 * 3) 3 Cultivate good values ​​to children and adults to create a generation of virtuous.
 * 4) 4 Encourage programs and health activities with the purpose of giving birth to a healthy society.
 * 5) 5 Provide programs and activities to create a generation of educational quality and can contribute towards the country's progress.
 * 6) 6 Running charity work for the welfare of disabled people are too poor, neglected, abused (Abuse) and who do not have academic subjects (Illiteracy) Through the mission and vision of the Association KER1M, we hope that people will always support and provide commitment to further develop our state of life in a more comfortable and secure.

We hope that many more volunteers will join us for the success of the noble goal over time. Please visit www.1malaysia.info


 * User:KER1M/sandbox/KER1M- 1 MALAYSIA WELL BEING ASSOCIATION doesn't have any references. Also, please do not use Wikipedia to try to promote your organization, even if it is noble and charitable.  Your draft has tone issues and reads promotionally.  Robert McClenon (talk) 03:17, 29 September 2016 (UTC)

19:48:11, 28 September 2016 review of submission by Words1011
Words1011 (talk) 19:48, 28 September 2016 (UTC) Why was mine not approved theres not much info on him so...
 * If there is not much info on your subject, it is not notable enough for a Wikipedia article. See WP:N for more information. Happy editing!  JTP ( talk • contribs) 01:14, 29 September 2016 (UTC)

2017 in baseball
Well I Hope by Monday There will be more team articles so that the 2017 in baseball can start but I still don't know how to create them. 2600:8803:7A00:19:4089:9E6B:E460:AFF8 (talk) 21:03, 28 September 2016 (UTC)

2600:8803:7A00:19:4089:9E6B:E460:AFF8 (talk) 21:01, 28 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Create an account and play The Wikipedia Adventure to learn how to edit. Robert McClenon (talk) 03:18, 29 September 2016 (UTC)

I Don't Know How To Create An Account. 2600:8803:7A00:19:4089:9E6B:E460:AFF8 (talk) 14:40, 29 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Click on the tab in the upper right of the screen that says Create Account. Robert McClenon (talk) 01:50, 30 September 2016 (UTC)