Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2017 August 5

= August 5 =

Request on 13:34:35, 5 August 2017 for assistance on AfC submission by Sunil dhakare
sunil 13:34, 5 August 2017 (UTC)
 * Hello, Sunil. Did you have a specific question?  NewYorkActuary (talk) 14:46, 5 August 2017 (UTC)

15:50:17, 5 August 2017 review of submission by M0h1t
The reason for rejection was stated as my not so neutral writing. Well, I can not write on something big as such as Wikipedia. Second, my language is not good. So, if anybody else from Wikipedia team can write few sentences about that person, that will be enough for me, as I have submitted proper sources.

Please let me know what can be done to create a page on Wikipedia about that person. M0h1t (talk) 15:50, 5 August 2017 (UTC)


 * You can ask at Requested articles for someone else to write the article. I've had at least one article created that way, but don't expect quick results. --Worldbruce (talk) 05:27, 7 August 2017 (UTC)

16:02:24, 5 August 2017 review of submission by AmiBwell
In full disclosure, I was asked to publish the article by the company as a PR professional. I did not create any of the content or reference materials. I have had that issue in the past since I am an entertainment publicist and was referencing material I had written and distributed to the press. In moving forward, how should the copy be changed to avoid it sounding like an advertisement? Are the references acceptable? Would adding the links to the companies listed help at all? Would removing quotes from the owner make it appear less like an advertisement or spam? AmiBwell (talk) 16:02, 5 August 2017 (UTC)


 * The tone of the writing could be corrected. Establishing that the subject is notable is more likely to be an insuperable problem. You will need several citations of reliable independent published sources with in-depth discussion of the subject. I looked at the first three sources cited: the first is to the company's own web site, and so not independent; the second, I could find no mention of the subject; the third gave me a list of "0 roofing contractors near Oxford, Eng." I gave up looking after that. I don't know if the article does cite any sources that help to establish that the company is notable. If not, you will need to find and add some. And either way, I recommend removing the worthless citations like the first three, that just make it harder for a reviewer to find the good ones. Maproom (talk) 07:41, 6 August 2017 (UTC)

19:12:56, 5 August 2017 review of submission by 92.19.39.69
Big companies use Hotjar.com technology, there is no article at present. I'm suprised there is no article. I wanted a reliable source of information. 92.19.39.69 (talk) 19:12, 5 August 2017 (UTC)
 * Hello, IP address. Our apologies for the great delay in response.  As for your comment, you might try writing the article yourself.  Or you can request that one be written by posting at Requested articles.  I hope this response has been helpful.  NewYorkActuary (talk) 10:43, 7 August 2017 (UTC)