Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2017 January 17

= January 17 =

Request on 08:34:43, 17 January 2017 for assistance on AfC submission by Shweta Chandrakant Pawar
Shweta Chandrakant Pawar (talk) 08:34, 17 January 2017 (UTC)
 * Hello, Shweta. Thank you for your interest in Wikipedia.  You don't seem to have actually submitted a draft for our review.  Are you asking us to treat the material on your User page as your draft?  NewYorkActuary (talk) 08:48, 17 January 2017 (UTC)

13:24:21, 17 January 2017 review of submission by Archer1401
Hi, I tried to create a page. This is the link:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Shannon_Burke_(writer)

In the comments section when the page was rejected it said that it did not adequately show the subject's notability. There were references from the New York Times, The Guardian, Le Monde, and Le Figaro, among others. There are links to major literary prizes and distinctions. I feel as if I'm using the references in the wrong way. Can someone help me here and tell me what I'm doing wrong? Thanks.
 * Hello, Archer. Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia.  Later today, I'll leave some comments on your draft.  NewYorkActuary (talk) 13:51, 17 January 2017 (UTC)

15:47:41, 17 January 2017 review of submission by Pipkin2.0
Re. Chartered Institution for Further Education/https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Chartered_Institution_for_Further_Education

I'm struggling to see why the sources I have cited aren't judged to be reliable or verifiable. They are:
 * FE Charter - an institution which has gained royal ascent in the UK
 * The Department for Education - a Governmental department
 * The Times Education Supplement - part of the Times newspaper
 * FE Week - an educational weekly newspaper
 * The LEP Network - a member organisation for Government-formed Local Enterprise Partnerships
 * GOV.UK - a Government website, here quoting the Minister for Skills at a recent conference (which I attended)
 * Cumbria Crack - a regional website

Please can you be of assistance as I am completely at a loss. I don't know what other sources I could use. This is a genuine article which adds in an institution which is missing on Wikipedia.

Thanks

PS Also now added another reference from Companies House to verify the organisation exists, in case this is the problem. This is now 9 references for a short article.

PPS Made some additional changes and now resubmitted for review for the last time. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Pipkin2.0 (talk • contribs) 10:00, 19 January 2017 (UTC)

Pipkin2.0 (talk) 15:47, 17 January 2017 (UTC)

19:48:44, 17 January 2017 review of submission by Hespeb
I just submitted an article, "Paradise Garden, Howard Finster's Vision". The text I submitted was formatted into indented paragraphs, but the text appeared as a single block without indentations. Pls let me know how to correct this. Thanks, Bob

Hespeb (talk) 19:48, 17 January 2017 (UTC)

20:21:59, 17 January 2017 review of submission by UND08844
I am asking for a re-review following the advice to stick to just the facts. To that end I have tightened up the text to be factual and fully referenced. Please let me know if any remaining phrases should be deleted or modified to improve the content. Thank you for your guidance. UND08844 (talk) 20:21, 17 January 2017 (UTC)


 * Hi to request another review simply click the "Resubmit" button in the pink review box at the top of the draft page. Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 20:50, 17 January 2017 (UTC)