Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2017 May 22

= May 22 =

06:57:42, 22 May 2017 review of submission by Sufi Rani Khanam
Sufi Rani Khanam (talk) 06:57, 22 May 2017 (UTC) Why My article submission was declined again and again?
 * Your submission was a duplicate of Draft:Rani Khanam. Please only have one submission about the same subject going at the same time.  JTP (talk • contribs) 14:14, 22 May 2017 (UTC)
 * User:Sufi Rani Khanam - Also, your drafts contain peacock language and are non-neutral. I understand that you are writing the drafts in order to praise the subject (yourself), but that is not what Wikipedia is for.  Also, it appears that you are writing the drafts about yourself.  Wikipedia strongly discourages autobiographies.  Robert McClenon (talk) 17:31, 22 May 2017 (UTC)

Request on 07:57:24, 22 May 2017 for assistance on AfC submission by ChytilMario
Dear Wikipedia!

Thank you very much for the review and for your remark. I'm sending you this note in order to get assistance for the improvment of my article. Could you please help me and specify what should I change in my article? The reason I got for the rejection is that "submission reads more like an essay" and also that it "should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research". As many articles and research documents (from reliable sources as listed by references) are dedicated to this topic, I decided to create this entry aimed to define and explain the term with examples. None of the explanation(s) or examples is based on my opinion or originates from (my) original research. I kindly ask for your support to make this more obvious if necessary. Thank you very much in advance,

ChytilMario (talk) 07:57, 22 May 2017 (UTC) Mario Chytil ChytilMario (talk) 07:57, 22 May 2017 (UTC)
 * User:ChytilMario - Unfortunately, I am pessimistic. I don't see the title or subject matter as being that of a neutral article.  The whole topic of "Drivers of success" sounds to me like the sort of topic that a business coach would give seminars about.  I don't think that the problem is only with the presentation, but with the whole topic.  Maybe someone else will give more constructive advice, but my thought would be that the whole topic is motivational.  That is my opinion.  Robert McClenon (talk) 23:41, 22 May 2017 (UTC)