Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2017 October 18

= October 18 =

13:16:33, 18 October 2017 review of submission by Mikepotter
Could you please give me some more guidance as to why my page was rejected? The feedback says that it sounds more like an advertisement rather than an encyclopedia page. Could you please give me some advice on how I can improve it?

Mikepotter (talk) 13:16, 18 October 2017 (UTC)


 * Note The first link, Draft:Michael Potter is correct. The other one; Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Michael Potter redirects to a mainspace article about a different Michael Potter. Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 13:34, 18 October 2017 (UTC)


 * It's regarding the first link. I don't know where the second link has come from. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mikepotter (talk • contribs) 13:50, 18 October 2017 (UTC)
 * , No problem, it is because the name already exists, but if this draft is accepted then it will be renamed or DAB page created as appropriate. Ammarpad (talk) 13:55, 18 October 2017 (UTC)
 * It seems, it is not the user who is inserting it Ammarpad (talk) 13:57, 18 October 2017 (UTC)
 * Hi Don't worry about it. The links are automagically generated by a script, the "error" that happened here is because another draft page with the same title exists. My note is merely to inform other helpers about the issue. Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 14:20, 18 October 2017 (UTC)
 * So the "article is written like an advertisement" is the feedback from the reviewer. Your username makes people think that you may well be Mike Potter, which would be a conflict of interest on Wikipedia. It would need sufficient editing; as the article is written not from a non-biased point of view, which is also against C&D. I would also like to let you know that youtube can never be taken as a reliable source - even clearly showing something; it would suggest original research, which isn't what Wikipedia is for. Lee Vilenski(talk) 15:57, 18 October 2017 (UTC)

13:55:46, 18 October 2017 review of submission by Anawave

 * Hello, Anawave. Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia.  Our apologies for the delay in response.  Did you have a specific question?  NewYorkActuary (talk) 16:19, 20 October 2017 (UTC)

16:26:42, 18 October 2017 review of submission by Judah Rogan
Judah Rogan (talk) 16:26, 18 October 2017 (UTC)

Why was my page closed?
 * Draft:MOS was declined for the reasons stated in the big pink box on the draft, in short because it cites no independent, reliable sources. I've left a basket of links on your talk page that may help you understand what is expected for an encyclopedia article. --Worldbruce (talk) 22:49, 18 October 2017 (UTC)

16:40:12, 18 October 2017 review of submission by Richboy Brooks
Richboy Brooks (talk) 16:40, 18 October 2017 (UTC)

I'm requesting this because i need u all to make me a page?? you're article was declined as it wasn't an article. What is it that you need from wikipedia.? Lee Vilenski(talk) 18:14, 18 October 2017 (UTC)

20:10:20, 18 October 2017 review of submission by Atilab
I have updates for the entry, and want to supply updates - content creation Atilab (talk) 20:10, 18 October 2017 (UTC)


 * Draft:Victorino Tejera was deleted as abandoned. If you wish to retrieve it, please see WP:REFUND/G13. --Worldbruce (talk) 22:40, 18 October 2017 (UTC)