Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2018 August 10

= August 10 =

05:33:04, 10 August 2018 review of submission by Hoodadjacent
I've made changes with more sources and remained neutral in my wording. Hoodadjacent (talk) 05:33, 10 August 2018 (UTC)


 * Hi . The draft cites one list (which does't say much about Champagne) and two primary source interviews (Champagne in Champagne's words, with little or no independent analysis by the interviewer). Such sources do not demonstrate that he is notable, as reviewers have explained six times. It may be unrealistic of you to think that an article can be written about an actor who began their career this year and has had one supporting role in a television series. If he continues on to greater successes, then try the topic again in a few years. --Worldbruce (talk) 14:01, 10 August 2018 (UTC)

12:44:12, 10 August 2018 review of submission by Cylu.e
12:44:12, 10 August 2018 review of submission by Cylu.e

I do not understand why my Draft has been declined since it is in no case offencive or shocking. Could you give me the reasons to why it has been declined twice please? Since I see a lot of wikipedia of artists with the same criterias as mine. Kobel really deserves this article. Cylu.e (talk) 12:44, 10 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Hi . Wikipedia is a summary of what has been published in reliable sources. A draft about Kobel should be based mainly on such sources that are also independent of him (not taken from anything he has written or produced). The draft has been declined twice for failing to show that any suitable sources exist. You write, The informations were collected by watching Kobel's lives and by accomplishing personal researches. You'll have to be more specific about where you found the information during your research. For example, did it come from page such-and-such of so-and-so's book Kobel: A Biography published by Random House? If there are no such sources, there will be no article about Kobel on Wikipedia. --Worldbruce (talk) 13:42, 10 August 2018 (UTC)