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= December 15 =

03:44:10, 15 December 2018 review of draft by Farooqahmadbhat
Farooqahmadbhat (talk) 03:44, 15 December 2018 (UTC)


 * - this draft hasn't yet had a review: it will be reviewed in the next few weeks. Nosebagbear (talk) 11:18, 15 December 2018 (UTC)

05:31:16, 15 December 2018 review of submission by Gladderstock
Dear Colleagues,

I work next to G.P. Gladyshev in the same organization for more than 20 years. I am interesting the work in the field of hierarchical thermodynamics. I follow the publications in this new field of knowledge. I have no joint works with Professor Gladyshev. I would like to draw your attention to the works of G.P. Gladyshev, which concern hierarchical thermodynamics. There are many references (independent sources) in well-known journals and books. The authors of the submitted works do not have joint publications with Professor Gladyshev. The greatest number of references concerns the monograph: Gladyshev, G.P. 1988. Thermodynamics and Macrokinetics of Natural Hierarchical Processes, Moscow: Nauka Publ., 1988, 288 p. ISBN 5-02-001424-9, Institute of Chemical Physics, USSR Academy of Sciences. (in Russian) https://www.twirpx.com/file/2329675/  https://www.ozon.ru/context/detail/id/135917727/ , As well as the underlying article: Gladyshev Georgi P. (1978). On the thermodynamics of biological evolution, Journal of Theoretical Biology, Vol. 75, Issue 4, Dec 21, pp. 425—441 (Preprint, Chernogolovka, Institute of Chem. Phys. Academy of Science of USSR, May, 1977, p. 46). Some examples of citation of Georgi Gladyshev's works In the textbook Physical chemistry of Kharitonov Yu Ya there is a section "The Law of the temporal hierarchies of Gladyshev". This law is the rationale for hierarchical thermodynamics. http://artlib.osu.ru/web/books/content_all/3042.pdf Yu. Ya. Kharitonov. - Moscow: GEOTAR-Media, 2013. - 608 p. : or; 21 cm; ISBN 978-5-9704-2390-5. https://search.rsl.ru/ru/record/01005501776

Professor V. A. Etkin repeatedly referred to the works of G. P. Gladyshev in the field of hierarchical thermodynamics in journals of the Russian Academy of Sciences. See: Etkin V. А. Energodynamika, “Nauka”, 2008 https://www.amazon.com/Energodynamics-Valery-Etkin/dp/0557955653 , Etkin V. A. Actual problems of thermodynamics (Actual problems of thermodynamics) http://samlib.ru/e/etkin_w_a/aktualnyezadachitermodinamiki.shtml

Professor V. S. Ivanova and her colleagues repeatedly referred to monographs and articles of G.P. Gladyshev in the field of hierarchical thermodynamics. For example: Metal Science and Heat Treatment September 2006, Volume 48, Issue 9–10, pp 390–396| Cite as V. S. Ivanova. An interdisciplinary analysis of dissipative state of physicochemical systems in the course https://link.springer.com/article/10.1007/s11041-006-0105-z V. S. Ivanova, V. U. Novikov, A. A. Oksogoev. Fractals, Applied Synergetics and Structure Design.

V. S. Ivanova, V. U. Novikov, A. A. Oksogoev. Fractals, Applied Synergetics and Structure Design https://books.google.ru/books?isbn=1590339649 https://www.amazon.com/Fractals-Applied-Synergetics-Structure-Design/dp/1590339649 Ivanova V.S. et al. Synergetics and fractals in material science 1 V.S. Ivanova, A.S. BaIankin, I.J. Bunin, A.A. Oksogoev.- Moscow: Nauka, 1994. - 383 p. ISBN 5-02-001818-X In the part 1.3, p. 14 there is the citation 3 times.

In the leading physical journal of Russia there are links related to macrothermodynamics (hierarchical thermodynamics). There are the quantitative calculations. - Козлов Г. В., Новиков В. У. Кластерная модель аморфного состояния полимеров (рус.) // Успехи физических наук — Т. 171, № 7. — С. 717—764. G.V. Kozlov a, V.U. Novikov b A cluster model for the polymer amorphous state https://www.ufn.ru/en/articles/2001/7/b/references.html http://iopscience.iop.org/article/10.1070/PU2001v044n07ABEH000832/meta

Dr. El-Diasty. F. discussed in detail the main provisions of hierarchical thermodynamics in the article: El-Diasty. F., 2011,  Origin of Order: Emergence and Evolution of Biological Organization as a Problem in Thermal Physics. Advances in Life Sciences, 1, 30-39 http://article.sapub.org/10.5923.j.als.20110101.06.html

Mathematician Eloshvili S. A. presented the mathematical substantiation of the hierarchical theory: Eloshvili S.A. (Tbilisi, Georgia). On the mathematical foundations of hierarchical thermodynamics http://ispcjournal.org/journals/2008/2008-1-9.pdf http://www.bazaluk.com/conference/o-matematiceskih-osnobah-ierarhiceskoy-termodinamiki.html

Professor Stanley N. Salthe repeatedly referred to the works of G. P. Gladyshev. He considered the principle of substance stability, which is an integral part of hierarchical thermodynamics. For example: Stanley Salthe, Toward a Natural Philosophy of Macroevolution, In book: Macroevolution, February 2015, DOI: 10.1007/978-3-319-15045-1_5. https://www.researchgate.net/publication/302498445_Toward_a_Natural_Philosophy_of_Macroevolution ; Stanley Salthe, Hierarchical Structures, September 2012, Axiomathes 22(3), DOI: 10.1007/s10516-012-9185-0 https://www.researchgate.net/publication/257522907_Hierarchical_Structures

Professor Yuri Lipatov outlined the brief foundations of G.P. Gladyshev and gave them an estimate: Yuri S. Lipatov, Book Review «G.P. Gladyshev, Thermodynamic Theory of the Evolution of Life Forms»,   J Biol Phys . 1997 г .; 23 (2): 129—131

Professor V.N. Anisimov, President of the Gerontological Society of the Russian Academy of Sciences, points out several main theories of aging. The "Science" site of all the theories of aging highlights the thermodynamic theory of aging G. P. Gladyshev, which is based on hierarchical thermodynamics. Professor V. N. Anisimov repeatedly refers to the work of G. P. Gladyshev. See pleas in English: Theory of Aging Biological Organisms | Science | FANDOM ... Translate this page

The book by Yuri Zuev is devoted to the principle of relativity, which is discussed from the standpoint of hierarchical thermodynamics. Book published: LAMBERT Academic Publishing Omni Scriptum GmbH & Co. KG. ISBN 978-3-659-47125-4 Findbook.ru

There are many sites on the Internet in Russian, where links to hierarchical thermodynamics are given (for example, http://mash-xxl.info/info/738014/ ) However, in many works (Western and Russian researchers) the basics of hierarchical thermodynamics (as well as classical thermodynamics) are distorted. This is the result of numerous errors in thermodynamics and unprofessional authors. In this regard, in my opinion, the article "Hierarchical Thermodynamics" should be published in Wikipedia.

Gladderstock (talk) 05:31, 15 December 2018 (UTC)

08:28:48, 15 December 2018 review of submission by ImprovedWikiImprovment
It is only salted because kids were making terrible articles, and it was rejected purely on the basis that it was salted so I request a re-review. This series has over 1 billion views, inspired an award winning documentary, and was nominated for an award itself so I can’t reasonably see that A7 still applies here.  IWI  ( chat ) 08:28, 15 December 2018 (UTC)
 * As I noted this page needs a review by an Admin. I suggest finding an Admin and posting you case on the Draft talkpage. Legacypac (talk) 09:30, 15 December 2018 (UTC)

11:21:00, 15 December 2018 review of draft by Caw35slr
My initial submission was rejected:

"A substantial amount of this is a copyvio from https://www.heraldscotland.com/opinion/17295328.obituary-c-r-whitfield-professor-of-midwifery-known-for-his-pioneering-work-in-fetal-medicine/ You must rewrite that section, and ensure that nothing is copied or closely paraphrased from any other source"

Some background:

- The subject of the Wikipedia article in question is my father. - The obituary cited in the submission rejection was written by one of his colleagues.

So, my father worked mainly in Belfast then in Glasgow. I had gone some way into the draft of my wikipedia article (I had all but completed the Belfast section, had gaps in the Glasgow section, and had all but completed the Royal College of Obstetricians and Gynaecologists section.

We were then told that a chap called Alistair Miller, who worked with the subject in Glasgow, had been asked to write an obituary. I sent him the link to my draft Wikipedia article so that he could fill in his early life and the Belfast part of his career.

When the obituary was published on 13 December it was clear that Alistair had copied some of my text (which I was not unhappy about).

Question: does this remain a barrier to getting my article published?

Second, I then copied some of Alistair's text to flesh out the Glasgow section of the Wikipedia article. I have since revised or deleted those sections.

Question: is this section satisfactory now?

Finally, I have included two quotes made by my father, in both cases I have referenced the article/journal containing the quote.

Question: is this permissable?

Your assistance appreciated. Thank you very much!

caw35slr (talk) 11:21, 15 December 2018 (UTC)

20:26:37, 15 December 2018 review of submission by IlkinShukurov
IlkinShukurov (talk) 20:26, 15 December 2018 (UTC)

So far the only submission was a blank page. Legacypac (talk) 21:20, 15 December 2018 (UTC)

Request on 21:58:18, 15 December 2018 for assistance on AfC submission by Danceawe
I am making a Briar Nolet page and I don't think I can make it publish worthy unless someone helps tell me the exact parts that need to be removed or re worded for it to be published. please help. Also, how do you request an article. One of my friends created an Alec Gray wikipedia page that has been removed and she told me to ask why. Please help with my 3 queries. Danceawe (talk) 21:58, 15 December 2018 (UTC)

22:49:51, 15 December 2018 review of submission by Piercav
Piercav (talk) 22:49, 15 December 2018 (UTC)

22:53:27, 15 December 2018 review of submission by Piercav
I am not a young man, and find the coding system a bit difficult. i am not certain why this page on Artist Phillip Martin has been rejected. Also, i find it difficult to insert photographs.

thank you Piercav (talk) 22:53, 15 December 2018 (UTC)

As it says at the top of your draft, it is not supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see referencing for beginners. Theroadislong (talk) 17:20, 16 December 2018 (UTC)