Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2018 January 1

= January 1 =

17:28:24, 1 January 2018 review of submission by HeleneMaes
To whom it may concern,

I have tried to publish an article on French artist Eric Baudelaire, on whom I have made serious, well-documented research, yet my submission has been declined. The reviewer wrote me that the tone might not be neutral enough, that it doesn't mean the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. I am writing you to seek advice to get to know what are the elements to change and/or improve to make that article "publishable".

I thank you by advance, and look forward to be reading your tips and recommandations to better understand what Wikipedia expects from its user. (and Happy New Year ! ) Hellonmars 17:28, 1 January 2018 (UTC)
 * as the reviewer can you provide further advice to on their draft Draft:Éric Baudelaire? Curb Safe Charmer (talk) 17:39, 1 January 2018 (UTC)