Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2018 May 21

= May 21 =

00:49:52, 21 May 2018 review of submission by Melayat85
I have created an article about a new pastry in Egypt. I would like to know if the article i have wrote is good or needs improvement for approval. Could you please advise? Melayat85 (talk) 00:49, 21 May 2018 (UTC)
 * - I'm afraid it's already been declined as lacking sources. KJP1 (talk) 05:45, 21 May 2018 (UTC)

03:15:02, 21 May 2018 review of submission by Elvin mail
Elvin mail (talk) 03:15, 21 May 2018 (UTC)

03:15:02, 21 May 2018 review of submission by Elvin mail

Elvin Baruah a social activist, a politician, member of some organisations like AASU (All Assam Students Union), AAROHAN (NGO), HAWO at AWBI (Animal Welfare Board of India), WTI (Wild Life Trust of india), Assam Science Society, PFA. He born on 16th December 1985, at Army Hospital, Beltola, Guwahati, Assam. His father name was late Pradip Kumar Baruah, Mother name Alaka Baruah, younger brother name is Enton Baruah (Sonu). He also had a younger sister name Babli, who passed away on March, 2007. He belongs to a precise family now..

He took his study from PanBazar Adarkha Prathamik Vidyalay (class-1st to 4th) at Panbajar, Guwahati. Panbajar means an area's name, Adarkha means IDEAL,PERFECTION. He use to go with his younger sister to that same school together, that school was co-ed. He was in Scout and Guide too when he was in class 3rd and 4th. He was also culturally active in Playing TABALA for Music in Same School. He had completed his secondary education from Sonaram Higher Secondary School, Bharalumukh, Guwahati. Then he got admitted to Xt. Xaviers Commerce college, Ulubari, Guwahati and he completed his class 12th from NIOS, Chandmari, Guwahati. He is also a Diploma Holder of Computer Hardware Engineering course from Epitom Computer Institute, Silpukhuri, Guwahati. He is now also pursuing his Graduation in Mass Communication from Krishna Kanta Handique State open University (KKHSOU) Guwahati, Assam. Its too interesting that from his schooling time he was socially active and so he join in All Assam Students Union on 1999 by class nine(9). After his Fifteenth years of Students Political Life in All Assam Students Union, he joined to AAP. He is working for Anna Hazare Agitation with India Against Corruption by online only from Assam by the suggestion of Raja deori, who is founder member of AAP. After completing Student Political life Elvin Baruah officially worked for AAP in Malviya Nagar with MLA and ex law Minister Mr. Somnath Bharti on 2015 election by the direction of AAP central office.Elvin mail (talk) 03:15, 21 May 2018 (UTC)


 * You may edit Draft:Elvin Baruah and copy the above content to it, if you wish to develop it further, but nothing suggests that Baruah is notable (suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia). Also no draft will be accepted unless it cites reliable, independent, published sources, see WP:REFB for how to cite. --Worldbruce (talk) 02:16, 22 May 2018 (UTC)

04:13:08, 21 May 2018 review of draft by Emoritz2017
Hi, I submitted

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Proposed_Encyclopedias

For review. The submission-received box IS NOT SHOWING UP  the bottom of the page, so it seems like I missed something and the system is not recognizing my draft as ready for review. What should I change to make it actually show up as submitted for review?

Thanks

Elan Moritz

Emoritz2017 (talk) 04:13, 21 May 2018 (UTC)
 * your Draft is displaying the Gray "not yet submitted" box at top; have you tried clicking the Submit button located on the Gray box? That should enter your article in the queue and turn the box Yellow. MatthewVanitas (talk) 10:14, 21 May 2018 (UTC)
 * I submitted using your name on your behalf, be patient and we will get to you soon. now you have to wait for someone to review. Quek157 (talk) 13:24, 21 May 2018 (UTC)

Thanks,

much appreciated.

Elan — Preceding unsigned comment added by Emoritz2017 (talk • contribs) 14:14, 21 May 2018 (UTC)

05:13:20, 21 May 2018 review of draft by ChefNitin
I need to educate people about Eiscnlebkuchen, I may not be able to do this alone and I need more editors to submit to this article ChefNitin (talk) 05:13, 21 May 2018 (UTC)
 * - It'll get reviewed in time but its chances of being accepted are close to zero as you've got no sources. KJP1 (talk) 05:42, 21 May 2018 (UTC)
 * ✅ do read the decline carefully and WP:RS are needed for it to be approved Quek157 (talk) 13:22, 21 May 2018 (UTC)

07:56:21, 21 May 2018 review of submission by Lide Magde
The article that I submitted for Louise Stanger was declined and erased ASAP. However, the text was 100% original because I worked together with Dr. Stanger herself. Could you explain me which part of the text was copied? Thank you! Lide Magde (talk) 07:56, 21 May 2018 (UTC)
 * I can't see the page since copyvio pages are hidden, but the deleting admin said the page was copied from https://www.allaboutinterventions.com/about-dr-stanger/ ; does that seem to make sense? MatthewVanitas (talk) 10:16, 21 May 2018 (UTC)

11:09:55, 21 May 2018 review of submission by Suraj Chiluwal
Suraj Chiluwal (talk) 11:09, 21 May 2018 (UTC)

Suraj Chiluwal (talk) 11:09, 21 May 2018 (UTC) please suggest me the necessary edits for the approval, i had did my best as per my knowledge. Thnak you help
 * Your username and the name of the article appear to be the same. Wikipedia discourages Autobiographies, see WP:AUTOBIO.Naraht (talk) 13:47, 21 May 2018 (UTC)

16:33:06, 21 May 2018 review of submission by Arunbandana
This is to request the editors/admin to guide me as to what more is required to improve the article.

arunbandana 16:33, 21 May 2018 (UTC)


 * for the reasons explained on the draft. --Worldbruce (talk) 02:07, 22 May 2018 (UTC)

16:34:03, 21 May 2018 review of submission by Nicolejolma
I'd like to understand why this was not accepted. If there is additional work that needs to be done to the article I'd like to make those updates. Thank you! Nicolejolma (talk) 16:34, 21 May 2018 (UTC)
 * pending paid editing disclosure, see User talk:Nicolejolma. --Worldbruce (talk) 19:46, 21 May 2018 (UTC)

18:46:35, 21 May 2018 review of submission by Apricotnectar
The article was deleted as an unambiguous copyright violation, but its source code header is explicitly commented to identify the source, with note that (1) the article in question is a mirror of the original Wikipedia article (2) the entire site is covered under blanket C.C. BY 4.0 license. No copyright violation occurred. Apricotnectar (talk) 18:46, 21 May 2018 (UTC)
 * To have a draft restored, begin by leaving a message at the bottom of the talk page of the administrator who deleted it, explaining why Draft:Christopher Altman shouldn't have been deleted on 21 May. That's usually enough to clear up any misunderstanding fairly quickly. --Worldbruce (talk) 01:46, 22 May 2018 (UTC)


 * Thank you! Apricotnectar (talk) 05:25, 22 May 2018 (UTC)

20:17:27, 21 May 2018 review of submission by Wlindars
I'm trying to figure out why this article was rejected in order to change it to meet Wikipedia guidelines. I provided source material for reputable news organizations. Is it the content? What exactly do you require because I don't understand the rejection.

Wlindars (talk) 20:17, 21 May 2018 (UTC)
 * I've left a detailed comment on the draft. It may be impossible to make it meet Wikipedia's guidelines. If it is possible, it will take a lot of work. --Worldbruce (talk) 01:30, 22 May 2018 (UTC)