Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2018 May 30

= May 30 =

01:53:26, 30 May 2018 review of submission by Adarrah
I have already put in a request for help, but it appears that this is where I should have done that. I am trying to replace the photo of Frank Schreider with a better one, one that Helen Schreider has just provided to me, a photo that had been taken by Helen. I deleted the original photo but have been unable to replace it with the new one,listed as FrankScan 2.pdf. Could someone please help me with this.

Actually the new photo is just an enlargement (of Frank's head) of the photo that had already been posted, which I deleted

Adarrah (talk) 01:53, 30 May 2018 (UTC)


 * Hey Welcome to AfC helpdesh. I believe Helen and Frank Schreider is the targeted page you mentioned above.
 * Photo/images need to upload into Wikimedia Common instead of Wikipedia site.
 * Since you did NOT take the photo yourself, you do NOT have the copy right of the photo.
 * You could ask Helen Schreider if she is willing to release the photo to you under a free license such as CC-BY-SA, or you could get Helen Schreider to upload the photo herself. All she has to do is register as a user and go to Wikimedia Common to upload the photo (click upload button at the top right page of Wikmedia Common main page -.
 * Once the images has been uploaded,follow the steps in the picture tutorial to place the image in an article.

Thank you.  CASSIOPEIA(talk)

06:44:42, 30 May 2018 review of submission by ThoughtNoodle
I made all the revisions as per one moderator and deleted content and citations deemed inappropriate as per the guidelines. Another moderator has raised the question on the notability of the organization. I think all the citations and content provided in the revised version are appropriate. Need help on understanding what exactly seems to be wrong so that I can improve on it. ThoughtNoodle (talk) 06:44, 30 May 2018 (UTC)
 * - Assuming the copyright issue has been addressed, there are two main concerns:
 * Notability (organizations and companies) - does the company meet our Notability criteria for corporations? Based on your sourcing, much of which comprises basic listings, I don't think it does.
 * Conflict of interest - do you have a connection to the company? You've been asked before but I don't think you've responded. If you do have a connection, this needs to be declared and you need to comply with our conflict editing policy. KJP1 (talk) 07:24, 30 May 2018 (UTC)

07:48:08, 30 May 2018 review of submission by KanyiEric
KanyiEric (talk) 07:48, 30 May 2018 (UTC)
 * - There are a number of issues:
 * Notability - does the school meet our Notability criteria? With current sourcing it doesn't;
 * Sourcing - you've only got one as the YouTube doesn't work, though it wouldn't help if it did. The one source you have is the school's own website which clearly isn't independent;
 * Copyright - the draft is 44% copied from your single source;
 * Promotion - as it stands, the draft reads like an advert for a for-profit school, e.g "Our Nursery, Baby class, and Pre-Unit levels offers a family touch to the kids";
 * Conflict of interest - do you have a connection to the school? If you do have a connection, this needs to be declared and you need to comply with our conflict editing policy. KJP1 (talk) 08:05, 30 May 2018 (UTC)

08:10:17, 30 May 2018 review of submission by Suresh Reddy Kuncham
how to submit my draft for review

Suresh Reddy Kuncham (talk) 08:10, 30 May 2018 (UTC)


 * Hi, Welcome to AfC help desk. To summit the draft fro review, please add the code  to the top of the draft.  Thank you and cheers.  CASSIOPEIA(talk) 11:22, 30 May 2018 (UTC)

15:57:14, 30 May 2018 review of submission by Weehome
Weehome (talk) 15:57, 30 May 2018 (UTC)


 * This seems to be a promotional web page for a children's magician. The references are PR and notices, not substantial coverage, so it would almost certainly be deleted in main space.  DGG ( talk ) 08:46, 31 May 2018 (UTC)