Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2018 May 9

= May 9 =

02:23:13, 9 May 2018 review of submission by SkywardDavid
Hi, earlier today I made a page for singer Shawn Mendes' upcoming tour "Shawn Mendes: The Tour" but it was not accepted because the reviewer said there is already a page for it. I have not been able to find it. When I search "Shawn Mendes The Tour" it redirects me to the page for Shawn Mendes. Then when I scroll down to the "Tours" section and click on it, it redirects me back to the top of the page. Can someone tell me if the page actually exists? SkywardDavid (talk) 02:23, 9 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Hi . If you click Shawn Mendes The Tour, you will be redirected to the article about the musician. Under the title, in small print, will be the notation (Redirected from ) . If you click that link, you'll be taken to the tour page without redirection. Amanda-1995 created it a few days ago. Another editor turned it into a redirect because it's far in advance of the tour dates, and no reliable sources have written more about it than the list of planned dates and locations. Revisit the topic nearer (or, better yet, after) the date, at which point reliable sources may have said more about the tour. --Worldbruce (talk) 13:27, 11 May 2018 (UTC)

02:47:06, 9 May 2018 review of submission by Shesielle
Shesielle (talk) 02:47, 9 May 2018 (UTC)

Hello, I need help with my submission, I had edited the draft to make the subject neutral. I also used credible sources. Thank you. Shesielle (talk) 02:47, 9 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Hi . Examining the cited books and a random selection of the sources in the citation overkill at the end, all but one (ynetnews.com) are passing mentions. If you eliminate the more than 90% of sources that are poor, and use as the draft's foundation at least three sources as in-depth and reliable as "Shuki Zikri shuts down beauty salons", then you might be able to construct an acceptable draft. --Worldbruce (talk) 14:02, 11 May 2018 (UTC)

12:26:04, 9 May 2018 review of submission by Personale
Hi I spent more than an hour in this article and don't know about secondary sources and can anyone help me both with changing too grammar thx, this is a notable game played for years with famous youtubers and etc.
 * If there are no reliable sources covering that game, you should at least be open to the idea that it's not quite as notable as you think it is. Significant coverage by multiple independent reliable sources is a requirement (WP:GNG/WP:V), not an option. Kleuske (talk) 12:32, 9 May 2018 (UTC)

But there are many source about this game,thats why I asked help maybe I need post help from wikiproject video games, so if anyone can help can be appreciated thanks if not I will  edit it. Personale (talk) 08:33, 9 May 2018 (UTC)

16:41:24, 9 May 2018 review of submission by Mapsan
Mapsan (talk) 16:41, 9 May 2018 (UTC) The title of the page is User:Mapsan/sandbox, but it should be Moses Apsan, Attorney at Law.

How can I correct the title, because of that it's written, does not reflect my true name. Thanks
 * Deleted for advertising. MatthewVanitas (talk) 00:04, 10 May 2018 (UTC)