Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2019 August 29

= August 29 =

Draft:Awards_of_Angel_Locsin
CodeLyokobuzz CASSIOPEIA(talk) I already add some resources to the page, I am still in the process of adding links. I just hope the article will pass and can be posted now. Also, CodeLyokobuzz deleted the awards I put on Angel Locsin page. If you are questioning this awards, why not delete info with some other Filipino celebrities such as Marian Rivera and Toni Gonzaga who does not have any link on their awards page. You should be fair! Now, since there are links on the page I created, I am expecting it will be published anytime soon again. Thank you.


 * Do not remove AfC comments and templates from the draft page, this only complicates the review process. The draft is in the queue again, so someone will review it eventually.
 * Courtesy pings  —  HELL KNOWZ   ▎TALK 09:53, 29 August 2019 (UTC)
 * Had reply you on my talk page. CASSIOPEIA(talk) 11:41, 29 August 2019 (UTC)
 * Okay, I am done editing the page, just waiting for approval
 * As per my talk -  Good day. The "someone" is one of the reviewers in Wikipedia and they rejected the draft but not deleted it. If the award listed is incomplete then add what is missing into the page. Do note we dont list all the awards in Wikipedia just some important ones as Wikipedia is not a collection of WP:NOTREPOSITORY or WP:NOTDIRECTORY and Angel Locsin is only 34 years old, maybe when she is senior citizen, she might have many important/notable awards to list them on another page.Thank you. Pls keep discussion in place next time and not multiple places (AfC help desk, your talk page, and my talk page). Since the discussion is in AfC help desk, then continues the discussion here only and not other venues. Please remember to sign your posts on talk pages by typing four tildes .. CASSIOPEIA(talk) 12:40, 29 August 2019 (UTC)
 * Honestly, in my opinion, the page is not needed. You can add all the missing awards in the main page Angel Locsin in the awards section. I'll step away from the draft though and let someone else review it, but I can assure you your time will be better spent adding the missing awards to her main page and not creating a separate page. CodeLyoko  buzz  15:39, 29 August 2019 (UTC)

05:27:34, 29 August 2019 review of submission by AMPUMUZA DALTON
AMPUMUZA DALTON 05:27, 29 August 2019 (UTC)

A BETTER ME FOR ABETTER WORLD

Truth was found after a long time, a better me for a better world holds the matter. Two years back I realized there is nothing impossible for a willing heart, the time I will never forget when I joined Africa Youth Leadership Forum at Bishop Stuart University.

For any man to rise he must have a foundation, it was not just far that I realized my foundation was built from AYLF. Am a leader in the current guild government but I always wished but had never thought of this could happen. Before I saw myself incompetent always till I felt I was capable from the “The 21 Irrefutable Laws of Leadership” by John C Maxwell and the “7 habits of effective living” by Stephen Covey

From the third habit “Putting First Things First” I found it most important, for anyone to make a better world it starts with oneself. A habit of how you use your time…how you organize yourself.

It is about Prioritizing, execution and integrity of maintaining consistency It is the discipline of “Personal Management” or what some call “Self Leadership” As a student of computer science, innovation and creativity in information technology are my way to go but I realize just like a leader I have to live exemplary and this will help other people besides that I may inspire them for a better world not just in I.T but all friends.

The first law of leadership “law of lead” The ability to lead is the "lid" that determines a person's effectiveness. The lower an individual's ability to lead, the lower the lid on his potential. The better a person is at leading, the higher the lid on his potential for achievement.

But everywhere you look you can find examples of success being limited by lack of leadership. For example, Steve Wozniak was the brains behind Apple in the 1970s, but his leadership lid was low. By contrast, Steve Jobs' leadership lid was high, and he built a world-class organization out of Apple.

A belief of one person can transform the whole world, one does not always believe things because they are correct. Sometimes we believe things because they make us look good to the people we inspire, mentor and care about.

I thought Kevin Simler put it well when he wrote, “If a brain anticipates that it will be rewarded for adopting a particular belief, it's perfectly happy to do so, and doesn't much care where the reward comes from whether it's pragmatic (better outcomes resulting from better decisions), social (better treatment from one's peers), or some mix of the two.”

False beliefs can be useful in a social sense even if they are not useful in a factual sense. For lack of a better phrase, we might call this approach “factually false, but socially accurate.” When we have to choose between the two, people often select friends and family over facts. Therefore a better me for a better world starts with your belief and people besides you.

Making a better world is also about one’s success and being successful is luck but just like the Law of Gravity, which cannot be broken but rather will break us if we don’t respect it… in the same way success is like a law of life. It must be like a principle to live with. People always count on our successes and these will in turn go back to people.

We must know and accept change if we want a better world, Therefore, it is high time each of us decides to become an agent of change, and by that, I mean to be the person you want others to follow and respect. We can all contribute to making this world a safer, happier and more joyful place by living our lives to the best of our ability and leading by example. And there are a few ways of doing this

Be true to yourself ·        Live in the moment and appreciate all that you have. ·        Actions speak louder than words. Therefore, act in a positive manner, no matter what. ·        Find a cause or mission you truly care about and get involved. ·        Lend your hand to those who don’t have one. If you see someone who needs help but is afraid to ask, don't be afraid to offer a hand. ·        Interpersonal skills, emotional intelligence and feedback loops, measure, compare and Adjust ·        If something bothers you, speak up. Especially if you witness someone being mistreated. Don't be too afraid to voice your opinion in important situations. ·        Last, but not least, be the change you wish to see in the world. It is really that simple. If we choose to be a spectator, just imagine how many in this world choose to do the same? Instead, choose to act. Progress often hides behind boring solutions and underused insights. You don’t need more information. You don’t need a better strategy. You just need to do more of what already works for a better a better world.


 * Wikipedia is not the place to promote yourself or have a profile page. — HELL KNOWZ   ▎TALK 08:09, 29 August 2019 (UTC)

How is this relevent too Wikipedia? Devokewater (talk) 11:47, 29 August 2019 (UTC)

08:29:00, 29 August 2019 review of draft by Nishibe0121
Please help me improve my draft. Thanks. Nishibe0121 (talk) 08:29, 29 August 2019 (UTC)
 * You need to add more sources about the person outside this one event per guidelines of sustained notability. A single event, even widely-reported, is contrary to Wikipedia's purpose. Perhaps some of the extra author notability criteria may apply. — HELL KNOWZ   ▎TALK 09:46, 29 August 2019 (UTC)
 * I added one more source to the draft. Please let me know what can I do to improve the draft.Nishibe0121 (talk) 10:42, 30 August 2019 (UTC)

08:47:10, 29 August 2019 review of draft by CompVisExp
Hi there!

I tried to contribute a short article defining the term "Screen Content" and giving some related applications. Unfortunately, my submission has been declined by reviewer AngusWOOF, There is a comment: "Wikipedia is not for posting journal article abstracts or textbook excerpts". However, I am not aware of copy-pasting an abstract. So, I need some direction how I can modify this article to get it published. Is the text too short? What is wrong with the text in detail?

Many thanks for your help! CompVisExp

CompVisExp (talk) 08:47, 29 August 2019 (UTC)

12:24:27, 29 August 2019 review of submission by Infrarot
all the seasons before were accepted, the actually is not? could someone please explain? Infrarot (talk) 12:24, 29 August 2019 (UTC)


 * - the draft was correctly declined for having no sources. I'm not quite sure why the others were accepted - if they had no sources AfC should have declined them. This one is also subject to decline for another reason - it talks about something yet to begin. It almost certainly will, but it can exist, but there's more of an obligation to show that it's already being covered by media. Nosebagbear (talk) 12:54, 29 August 2019 (UTC)

14:56:23, 29 August 2019 review of submission by Juanestebanp94
A few months ago I made an article that was rejected related to traffic modeling software Aimsun, I received some comments from you about how to correct it to be approved, but I have not received any response since then. Can you tell me what to do? or which is the next step?

As for the article, I could write about the benefits of traffic modeling software in daily life, and make it a bit more general, we have no intention of using Wikipedia as an advertising medium, we just want to show people how we help improve traffic in countries around the world.

Thank you. Juanestebanp94 (talk) 14:56, 29 August 2019 (UTC)
 * You haven't received further comment because the reviewer concluded that Wikipedia won't host this article. Wikipedia is not the place to showcase or promote a product, regardless if it's useful or not. We base our articles on reliable independent sources and all sources in the draft are directly related to the topic, which inevitably makes it read and sound promotional (even if that wasn't your intention). Given that no content in the draft is based on secondary sourcing, there is nothing that can be approved or changed, because it would need to be rewritten ground-up. I don't think such sources exist (or you would have already used them), so the topic is not (yet) notable for Wikipedia. — HELL KNOWZ   ▎TALK 15:33, 29 August 2019 (UTC)

Request on 22:29:53, 29 August 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by MSTurbine
Hello RoySmith,

Thank you for reviewing my page https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Water_Wall_Turbine I would like you to review it in light of the following information. The totally independed sources are named in references and are scientific papers by: - National Research Council Canada; - University of Southampton, UK; - Fachbereich Bauingenieurwesen, Germany; - University of Rostock, Germany; - Darmstadt University of Technology, Germany; - University of Technology Lanna Tak, Thailand.

The above work was not initiated or requested or paid by Water Wall Turbine Hydrostatic Pressure Converter inventors or a company.

This type of Turbine, a Hydrostatic Pressure Converter, differs in design from the old fashin water wheel and delivers efficiency between 60 - 86% versus 12% of water wheels.

In other Wikipedia pages such as Francis, Pelton etc. names of inventors are also mentioned. This is not a promotion, but information for engineers to use globally.

If secion "WWT/ HPC Technology Features" indicates a promotion, it could be removed.

Kindly, please be specific about the obstacle to publish this article.

MSTurbine (talk) 22:29, 29 August 2019 (UTC)