Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2019 August 3

= August 3 =

03:22:59, 3 August 2019 review of submission by Kimhancey
Below this line, tell us why you are requesting a re-review. Take as many lines as you need.-->}} I added many inline links for the notable persons with whom Daniel Doen Silberberg has studied and taught. I added more references and sources. Thank you for taking another look at this. Kimhancey (talk) 03:22, 3 August 2019 (UTC)

03:49:18, 3 August 2019 review of draft by Carrolquadrio
I am trying to submit for review an article on the Hollywood Hotel in Sydney Australia but it seems to be rejected on the basis of an article already existing. The thing is that the article that already exists is in California not Australia. How should i proceed please? Should i change the name of the draft or otherwise? Thankyou--Carrolquadrio (talk) 03:49, 3 August 2019 (UTC) Carrolquadrio (talk) 03:49, 3 August 2019 (UTC)

I seem to have resolved the issue and it is now awaiting review, thank you.--Carrolquadrio (talk) 04:18, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
 * (edit conflict) Hi . Are you referring to the message "Warning: The page Hollywood Hotel already exists. Please ensure it is not a copy or that this page is located to the correct title"? That isn't a rejection, just a warning in case people didn't know that there is already an article with that title. You know that, aren't writing about the same hotel, and as a brand new editor can't change the draft's title, so there's nothing for you to worry about. If a reviewer accepts the draft, they'll note the warning and move the topic to a new title to distinguish it from the other Hollywood Hotel. --Worldbruce (talk) 05:16, 3 August 2019 (UTC)

Thanks so much. Actually I got the title wrong, the title is Hotel Hollywood not Hollywood Hotel. None of the work is copied and it was just declined as seeming like an advertisement with too many issues relating to tonality. I want to delete the page with the name Hollywood Hotel (but I am not sure how to do this) and I have created the new article Hotel Hollywood taking out any phrases that might imply value. What is noteable about the Hotel is the publican is iconic and just died.Perhaps I should make the article about her and not the hotel? If so, how would I do this? What is your opinion please?--Carrolquadrio (talk) 06:09, 3 August 2019 (UTC)


 * . When one starts reasearching something that seems to have the makings of a Wikipedia article, it isn't always easy to see what the core topic will be. It looks like your research has led you to focus on Draft:Doris Goddard. A review is likely to take a while, the current backlog is 21 weeks. You may continue improving the draft while you wait, or check out Community portal for other ways to help. --Worldbruce (talk) 15:12, 6 August 2019 (UTC)

06:03:41, 3 August 2019 review of submission by Jayanagas
GrabOn is a coupons and deals platform with six years of standing in the market with proper attirbutes and credentials. It can be compared with Groupon. The article is not an advertisement nor is it an undue publicity to the company. Since it provides deals and discounts on almost every purchase and they are genuine and authentic, I request you to review it once again. Jayanagas (talk) 06:03, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
 * The reason it was declined is because it has a serious advertorial tone. The draft reads more like the website "about" page than a Wikipedia page. Wikipedia is an encyclopedia and should not be used as a means to promote the company. --CNMall41 (talk) 20:38, 3 August 2019 (UTC)

08:57:49, 3 August 2019 review of submission by Tarab Khan
If I remove the external link (www.tarabkhan.in), hope my article will get published or do I need to remove any other link? Please guide !!

Tarab Khan (talk) 08:57, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
 * Hi . User:Tarab Khan/sandbox was deleted for being unambiguous advertising. Drafts usually have to be egregiously promotional to be deleted for that reason. So no, evidently removing the external link would not have been nearly enough. If Tarab Khan is notable enough to warrant an article, and you wish to avoid the appearance of a conflict of interest, the best thing to do would be to provide any useful sources and request that an independent editor create the article. Specifically:
 * On your user page, disclose any connection you have to the person.
 * Go to Requested articles and find a category under which to list your request.
 * Describe the very basics of who Tarab Khan is, no more than a couple of lines, and avoid puffery. Be up-front about your conflict of interest by mentioning it in the request.
 * Find a number of independent reliable sources that have substantial information about the topic, and provide links to them in the request. The only really good one I found is, but there are also some weaker sources, such as and.
 * Wikipedians are always on the look out for topics to write about. If the topic has promise, an editor with no connection to Tarab Khan may eventually start an article based on your sources. --Worldbruce (talk) 15:24, 3 August 2019 (UTC)

09:32:06, 3 August 2019 review of submission by Akram.altameemi
Akram.altameemi (talk) 09:32, 3 August 2019 (UTC)

Akram.altameemi (talk) 09:32, 3 August 2019 (UTC) Hi I want help to fix the errors found in the articles I wrote if I found a mistake - I have a draft I wrote today but I do not know how to bring it to the audit did not show me notice lifting to the audit Akram.altameemi (talk) 09:34, 3 August 2019 (UTC)Ali Ramzi Neamah Thanks to all Akram.altameemi
 * The poster also asked at Help desk, and was given good advice there. --Worldbruce (talk) 14:54, 3 August 2019 (UTC)

11:44:43, 3 August 2019 review of submission by Dextergonzalez
I've edited the page and added more sources of information. This page has a lot more to improve but please consider publishing this page. Kindly indicate the things that needed to change, thank you. Dextergonzalez (talk) 11:44, 3 August 2019 (UTC)


 * Hi . Malls can be notable for their economic, social, or architectural importance, but they require significant coverage over a period of time in independent, reliable, secondary sources. Robinsonsmalls.com and parent company jgsummit.com.ph are not independent. The remaining three sources are all from the week of the mall's opening, so they don't demonstrate lasting significance. Moreover, Philstar and BusinessWorld are plainly regurgitations of the same press release, so not independent of the mall. ABS-CBN also has echoes of the press release and of jgsummit's announcement of the opening, but there may be some original reporting there.


 * The reason for the STOP sign on the draft is that rejection is meant to be final, to convey that the topic is not notable (not suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia) at this time. No amount of editing can fix that. At the moment, the mall merits only a line in Robinsons Malls and a sentence or two in the economy section of San Pedro, Laguna. There is no option to re-submit the draft because volunteers do not intend to review it again in the foreseeable future. You may re-examine the topic in a year or two, by which time more may have been written about the mall in suitable sources. --Worldbruce (talk) 13:54, 3 August 2019 (UTC)

14:01:36, 3 August 2019 review of submission by Vyrussbeatz
I'm requesting for a review due to the first catastrophic mistake by making information seem promotional, which wasnt intended. Neccesary correction has been made by reading through the proper guidelines. Thanks.

Vyrussbeatz (talk) 14:01, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
 * Hi . The draft is wildly non-neutral. Why doesn't it mention his defeat in the 2015 election to represent the Asa/Ilorin West Federal Constituency? Why doesn't it mention the Economic and Financial Crimes Commission investigation of the alleged N50m ($138,000) bribe paid to him, allegedly to manipulate the outcome of the 2015 Nigerian general election? Based on my searches, that's the only way in which he might be notable (suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia). --Worldbruce (talk) 14:49, 3 August 2019 (UTC)

15:32:00, 3 August 2019 review of submission by TransporterMan
I fixed the refs in this draft at the request of the author and advised them to resubmit it for further review. I'm not sure they did the resubmission right since it does not appear in https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Category:AfC_submissions_by_date/22_July_2019. Could someone check to see if it's been resubmitted properly? TransporterMan ( TALK ) 15:32, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
 * Yes, it has been. The big yellow box at the bottom of the draft tells us it is in the pool to be reviewed. Thanks for giving them a hand. --Worldbruce (talk) 17:50, 3 August 2019 (UTC)

21:29:22, 3 August 2019 review of draft by Moonstar36
Moonstar36 (talk) 21:29, 3 August 2019 (UTC)

How do I delete the page I started Ronnie Jacques... silly me not spelling it right...Thank you!! :)
 * Hi . You may delete the draft by adding the code  to the top of it; it will be deleted shortly thereafter. --Worldbruce (talk) 21:41, 3 August 2019 (UTC)

22:56:33, 3 August 2019 review of draft by Teachingtool
Hello I have edited the article on Helmi Sharawy in response to Dan and would like it to be checked for approval please if possible? Many thanks!

Teachingtool (talk) 22:56, 3 August 2019 (UTC)