Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2019 December 10

= December 10 =

00:40:10, 10 December 2019 review of draft by Ahjazzer
I would like to continue working on this draft (I wasn't aware that I was submitting an incomplete draft that was supposed to be complete—I thought I was submitting an incomplete draft for advice). I would hate to do this all over again and have it rejected b/c I had too many format mistakes yet again. Is there anyway I can get the text that I submitted today back so I can work on it again? Ahjazzer (talk) 00:40, 10 December 2019 (UTC)

01:04:15, 10 December 2019 review of submission by Eugenia Sawin
I would like to add images to the article David Sawin. Also I would like to add more important biographical information about the subjects's gallery representation in New York at the Virginia Zabriskie Gallery and that he is in a book about the gallery's 50th anniversary.Eugenia Sawin (talk) 01:04, 10 December 2019 (UTC)

Eugenia Sawin (talk) 01:04, 10 December 2019 (UTC)
 * , Howdy hello! I see that your article is no longer a draft, so you're better off asking for help at the Teahouse. But since you've asked, I'd say that you can go ahead and make those edits. For the picture, if you have a free image (i.e. an image you took yourself, or have permission from the photographer to use) you can upload it using File Upload Wizard. If he is in a book about the 50th anniversary, you could probably use that as a source in the page. Captain Eek  Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 02:33, 10 December 2019 (UTC)

01:31:53, 10 December 2019 review of draft by Ahjazzer
I would like to continue working on the submission that I erroneously submitted earlier today. Is there anyway that it is still available? Ahjazzer

Ahjazzer (talk) 01:31, 10 December 2019 (UTC)
 * , Are you referring to your sandbox? If so, you are free to keep editing it. It was declined as a test, but you are free to remove the AfC tag and improve it. You could then re-add the AfC tag at a later date when you want it to be reviewed. Captain Eek  Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 05:18, 10 December 2019 (UTC)

Mmitin
I need a help to create the article.

I took as examples 2 existing pages:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anglo-American_School_of_Moscow https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/International_School_of_Moscow

And I created an article about the third international school in Moscow in the image and likeness.

What else do I need to add?

Mmitin (talk) 04:13, 10 December 2019 (UTC)
 * , Well, you need more sources for one. Those sources need to be reliable and independent, i.e. not affiliated with the school. You also need to remember that this is an encyclopedia, not an ad platform. We aren't trying to sell schools, we're trying to present a neutral and formal take on them, in a context that is useful to the general reader.
 * By the way, are you affiliated with the school in any way? Captain Eek  Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 05:21, 10 December 2019 (UTC)

06:35:55, 10 December 2019 review of submission by Prachurapp
Prachurapp (talk) 06:35, 10 December 2019 (UTC)
 * That's not an article. Also, it's against policy to write an article about yourself.— Naddruf (talk ~ contribs) 06:58, 10 December 2019 (UTC)
 * , for reference, it is strongly discouraged, but not strictly prohibited. COI alone wouldn't be a reason to delete an article, but it tends to lead to a lot of other problems that typically are.  Oxon Alex    - talk  12:38, 10 December 2019 (UTC)

08:13:05, 10 December 2019 review of draft by 123.49.14.217
I created a draft article on Bangladesh Competition Commission. I added much information, content, references as well as data from many websites. Still my article got declined. I need to know why this is happening and also need help in the same.

123.49.14.217 (talk) 08:13, 10 December 2019 (UTC)
 * Please see referencing for beginners on how to properly use and format references. References need to be included inline next to hte information they support. Captain Eek  Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 19:37, 10 December 2019 (UTC)

09:19:02, 10 December 2019 review of draft by Gorlapraveen123
For the article submitted (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:IndiaRxiv) to wikipedia, please help me where i need to rectify. I have provided all the reliable resources. As I was one of the core member in organisation, in which the articles describe, I have given best resources and needed references.

Gorlapraveen123 (talk) 09:19, 10 December 2019 (UTC)
 * , For starters, you have a conflict of interest. I have posted more info on your talk page about how to deal with that.
 * For the article, most of the sources are just from the subject's website. That is not tenable. You need independent sources. In order to show notability, you need independent coverage in at least 3 reliable sources. It also seems overly promotional to me. The language should be neutral. An encyclopedia covers a subject from a disinterested perspective, and formally. It does not seek to show off any part of the subject. Captain Eek  Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 19:36, 10 December 2019 (UTC)

09:21:41, 10 December 2019 review of draft by Amit Srivastava
Amit Srivastava (talk) 09:21, 10 December 2019 (UTC)

Why you are purposefully declining articles on Pushpendra Kulshrestha? Whereas you immediately approve the articles on Islamic terrorists. What is your agenda?


 * The draft was indeed purposefully declined - every decline is done for a reason
 * Our "Agenda" is whether a draft meets our notability requirements
 * The draft's secondary (newspaper, books etc - not court papers) sources don't cover Pushpendra himself in enough detail. You need multiple, secondary, in-depth (10+ lines on him) sources that are also independent (which also rules out most interviews) and reliable.
 * I hadn't noticed an AfC-wide plan to prioritise articles about Islamic terrorists, presumably ones without suitable sourcing - please give examples so I can review them. Nosebagbear (talk) 11:11, 10 December 2019 (UTC)

10:58:32, 10 December 2019 review of submission by TonyWestling-Dataspelsbranschen
Hi David.moreno72.

I followed your guideline and advice on talk page, and tried to follow WP:LISTN with companies only listed on Wikipedia. I deleted all URLs.

Can I resubmit Draft:Swedish Video Game Industry? Please can you tell me what else I need to do in the article?

Wish you all the best

Tony TonyWestling-Dataspelsbranschen (talk) 10:58, 10 December 2019 (UTC)
 * , as it seems to have become more of a list article, rather than a directory, I've resubmitted it. There are no guarantees the reviewer at the end agrees with me though.  Oxon Alex    - talk  12:31, 10 December 2019 (UTC)
 * I've also moved it to Draft:List of Swedish video game developers, which I think better reflects the content.  Oxon Alex    - talk  12:34, 10 December 2019 (UTC)
 * Why is this list necessary when we have List of video game developers? (VG project consensus has established to allow only notable articles/entries.) This article would be a split from it but I don't see a clear reason why it's needed. — HELL KNOWZ   ▎TALK 16:22, 10 December 2019 (UTC)

15:36:45, 10 December 2019 review of submission by Caraalee
I made adjustments to make the language as unbiased as possible and reduce the amount of promotional language. Any further suggestions would be helpful. Caraalee (talk) 15:36, 10 December 2019 (UTC)

15:57:10, 10 December 2019 review of submission by 87.238.210.51
87.238.210.51 (talk) 15:57, 10 December 2019 (UTC)

Note: Previously-deleted A7 and expired draft, copy-pasted and AfC banner removed by IP. Probably a G11. — HELL KNOWZ   ▎TALK 16:18, 10 December 2019 (UTC)

16:46:41, 10 December 2019 review of submission by Frakes928
Adjusted the notability based on wikipedia musician notability standards. This should satisfy #6 & #7 of the notability standards based on being a prominent member of at least two individually prominent ensembles, and showing the prominence of Freestyle Kingz.

Frakes928 (talk) 16:46, 10 December 2019 (UTC)
 * , You still only have three sources. That is not sufficient. Also, if his ensembles do not have articles currently, you must prove that those ensembles are notable. In general, most of the article lacks inline citations, which needs to be remedied. If sources backing up the info cannot be found, then the article is not notable. Captain Eek  Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 19:26, 10 December 2019 (UTC)

16:58:03, 10 December 2019 review of submission by Slasher2point1
Slasher2point1 (talk) 16:58, 10 December 2019 (UTC)
 * , Our way of changing the title of a page is to "move" it. We call them moves because we move the page and its history to a new title. Its based on how the server backend works. You can move a page if you have made enough edits and been around long enough by using the "more" dropdown menu near the top of a page and changing it. Luckily, I see you've figured out how to do that already! Captain Eek  Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 19:18, 10 December 2019 (UTC)

To whom it may concern,

I was wondering if you could help fix the title for my page. I made a page for actor Tommy Nelson, but the heading is listed as "Thomas Daniel Nelson" his full name, but I meant for it to be "Tommy Nelson." I am having trouble fixing it and was wondering how I go about doing so? Thank you.

Sincerely,

Slasher2point1

20:10:52, 10 December 2019 review of submission by 2.30.139.228
2.30.139.228 (talk) 20:10, 10 December 2019 (UTC)

22:20:17, 10 December 2019 review of submission by Frakes928
Added yet another news story in the T Town Music section with a Dallas Morning News article about the ensemble's notability

Frakes928 (talk) 22:20, 10 December 2019 (UTC)
 * See response to . --Worldbruce (talk) 15:35, 13 December 2019 (UTC)

23:10:29, 10 December 2019 review of draft by Monmouth1946
I need help placing the citations by number in the actual text of the article. I have no idea as to how to proceed. Also I was informed that it reads like an obituary. I have made it a much smaller submission and have tried yo keep it as much plain fact as possible. Any help in correcting the article would be greatly appreciated Thank You

Monmouth1946 (talk) 23:10, 10 December 2019 (UTC)


 * Hi . I've left a welcome basket of links on your talk page that you may find useful, particularly the ones in the Policies and Guidelines section related to sources and biographies of living persons. Another handy resource is Help:Referencing for beginners. --Worldbruce (talk) 15:31, 13 December 2019 (UTC)

23:16:03, 10 December 2019 review of submission by Lilymj42
I wrote an article on Trudy Comiskey, and it keeps getting declined, so I fix the error and resubmit. The latest review, someone told me that it wasn't a good topic for an article, though I believe it would be as she has many followers on TikTok, and is very funny (in my opinion at least), and is a star vball player

Lilymj42 (talk) 23:16, 10 December 2019 (UTC)