Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2019 December 6

= December 6 =

01:50:46, 6 December 2019 review of draft by Waveygrapes1001
I want this to go through to main page. Waveygrapes1001 (talk) 01:50, 6 December 2019 (UTC)
 * , Two words of content does not an article make. You need prose, you need references. You need to actually have content before it can be published into the main space. Captain Eek  Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 05:37, 6 December 2019 (UTC)

05:20:25, 6 December 2019 review of draft by Rajanm99
I request more editors to review and verify the facts and publish in article space.

Rajanm99 (talk) 05:20, 6 December 2019 (UTC)
 * , Your initial reviewer was correct. Heed their words and improve your article, then resubmit it. You have only one source that is not independent. You need at least 3 reliable and independent sources, and currently have zero. Captain Eek  Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 05:39, 6 December 2019 (UTC)

05:51:03, 6 December 2019 review of submission by Jpncan
I have added some references in order to pass the check, so please review again. Jpncan (talk) 05:51, 6 December 2019 (UTC)
 * , He still does not appear to be notable. Please see the notability guidelines for academics. Captain Eek  Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 06:48, 6 December 2019 (UTC)

06:59:00, 6 December 2019 review of submission by Sanjaysingh4334
Sanjaysingh4334 (talk) 06:59, 6 December 2019 (UTC)
 * , This person is not notable, per our guidelines. We don't cover everybody. I suggest you find another area of Wikipedia to work on. Captain Eek  Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 09:21, 6 December 2019 (UTC)

07:36:36, 6 December 2019 review of submission by Linda dominic
Linda dominic (talk) 07:36, 6 December 2019 (UTC)
 * , Has no sources, and no obvious reason why they are deserving of an article per our notability guidelines. Captain Eek  Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 09:19, 6 December 2019 (UTC)

Request on 07:50:56, 6 December 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by Sucker28
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I am requesting an assistance because the recent article that I Published was rejected.
 * It had no content, and was of course rejected. If you'd like to make some edit tests, you should use your sandbox, accessible in the top right of your browser. If you'd like to write an article on a notable subject, we can guide you. But if your article has nothing meaningful in it, we can't do much. Captain Eek  {{sup|  Edits Ho Cap'n!  }}⚓ 09:16, 6 December 2019 (UTC)

Hari Krishnan Nair born on 11/10/1976 in India. He completed his Masters degree from Mumbai. He is the son of late K K Nair a profound trade union Leader from Naval Dockyard Mumbai. Mr.K K Nair is well know among the trade union leaders he also served as Naval Dockyards Co-operative bank's Director Post in the year 1988. He worked very closely with other famous trade union leaders like Samuel Augustine and Datta Samanth who was the leader for Kamghar Agadi union. Mr. Hari krishnan Nair also followed his father's principles but he was quite good at writing. He is the Author for WHO AM I which is been published on Kindle bookshelf even had pen down few Life Inspirational Quotes on kindle bookshelf. His passion towards singing and even released an Album called Ormakal which got above fifty thousand views on social media and over 1000 comments. He is the founder for an eCommerce platform in India called Jummanji.

His vision is to build the future infrastructure of commerce. Aim is to enable hundreds of millions of commercial and social interactions among the users, between consumers and merchants, and among businesses every day. Quite Aggressive person and razor focused towards his target.

Early Life Hari was born in mumbai, India, on october 11, 1976.[3] His father use to work in Naval Dockyard and mother, a homemaker.[8] Hari krishnan Nair attended R K Talreja college and graduated as a BA in economics in 1994. He even completed MBA from Indian Institute of Business Management.

Work profile: Currently in Kenya(Nariobi) working with a Office Automation company since 2015. He is passionate about writing composing and singing.He is the author for "WHO AM I" and "My Best Friend" which is published in amazon Kindly bookshelf. Even written few Life Inspirational Quotes can share one quote “We experience our lives like able persons. But end up with inability of taking the risk” ― Hari Krishnan Nair, He is even the founder for eCommerce platfrom in India called jummanji

Personal life

Hari Nair is married to,Prinitha a gold medalist in Master of Commerce from Salem Periyar university(Tamil Nadu). They have two kids a daughter and son. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Linda dominic (talk • contribs) 11:16, 6 December 2019 (UTC)
 * {{u|Linda dominic}}, Please don't post article content here, only links to pages with content. Are you asking a new question? What do you need? Captain Eek  {{sup|  Edits Ho Cap'n!  }}⚓ 19:34, 6 December 2019 (UTC)

Request on 11:29:38, 6 December 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by Bibeksijapati
Bibeksijapati (talk) 11:29, 6 December 2019 (UTC)

11:32:18, 6 December 2019 review of draft by Smwoolen
Can someone please help me with this article? I’m new to drafting articles and not really sure why it has been declined. I very much would appreciate any help given. Thank you.

Smwoolen (talk) 11:32, 6 December 2019 (UTC)
 * , Please see Fall Out Boy for an example of a good article on a band, which you could in part emulate. Your article does not currently meet our standards for formatting, writing quality, and neutrality. Captain Eek  Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 19:35, 6 December 2019 (UTC)

14:18:33, 6 December 2019 review of draft by Emery.geyer
Greetings, I am trying to get an article published that is just a factual statement about Vola Guitars and their CEO Shawn Cho. Although they do not have the historical background as other guitar manufacturers such as Fender, Gibson, etc., they still are a guitar brand led by an industry pro in Shawn Cho. Plus, since they are a younger company, the internet is not littered with third-party articles that I can use as references, but there are a few.

I understand that "notability" and "reference-able" information is required, however, if you look at some other guitar brands on Wikipedia - Caparison Guitars as an example - their Wiki article was accepted, but is now flagged as "contains content that is written like an advertisement", yet is still up & live. I just think that a double-standard exists here and would love some help on creating a factual article, that passes the requirements to be accepted and published as a Wiki article.

I have updated my last denied article. Where can I show people this updated article and get some help on it without it being deleted before someone can help?

Please understand, I am not trying to be difficult and I LOVE Wikipedia!!! Maybe I am just bad at word-smithing ?? :/

Thank you!!!

Emery.geyer (talk) 14:18, 6 December 2019 (UTC)


 * Hi . Wikipedia is forever a work in progress. It contains high quality articles and poor quality articles. The existence of an article does not mean it meets Wikipedia's requirements, has been "accepted", or should exist. It may mean only that no one has gotten around yet to fixing it or deleting it. Existence is not a good excuse to create additional unsuitable pages. The essay WP:OTHERSTUFFEXISTS may help you understand why. Wikipedia is not a business directory and may not be used for advertising, promotion, or public relations. --Worldbruce (talk) 15:37, 7 December 2019 (UTC)

14:30:31, 6 December 2019 review of draft by Aryeh2
Aryeh2 (talk) 14:30, 6 December 2019 (UTC)

Hi, this draft article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:International_Association_of_Coaching

appears linked to the profile for Thomas J. Leonard: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Thomas_J._Leonard

There is another organisation this man founded which also has a profile on wikipedia: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/International_Coach_Federation

The page above, named 'Draft:International_Association_of_Coaching' appears to be set for a review. I have added to the original draft and wonder whether it is best to await a Review, or simply delete it and recreate it as a new page??? Haven't dealt with a Draft page before so don't fully understand the best way to proceed.

Thanks. --Aryeh2 (talk) 14:30, 6 December 2019 (UTC)
 * Hi . You many continue to improve the draft while you wait for it to be reviewed. There is no reason to delete it. You can find more information about drafts at Drafts. --Worldbruce (talk) 14:58, 7 December 2019 (UTC)

15:38:41, 6 December 2019 review of submission by Sucker28
Sucker28 (talk) 15:38, 6 December 2019 (UTC)
 * Do you have a specific question?  JTP (talk • contribs) 19:07, 6 December 2019 (UTC)

19:00:56, 6 December 2019 review of draft by Grasarlia
My favorite color is the color of the clouds during sunset. I eventually decided I should name it, so I was going to put it on Wikipedia for the world to see. But I'm wondering if I should scrap it because it seems that if I'm going to make a new article, it must be about something that already exists. Grasarlia (talk) 19:00, 6 December 2019 (UTC)
 * Wikipedia is not for things made up one day.  JTP (talk • contribs) 19:06, 6 December 2019 (UTC)

Thanks for the advice! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Grasarlia (talk • contribs) 19:17, 6 December 2019 (UTC)