Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2019 January 4

= January 4 =

00:05:16, 4 January 2019 review of submission by Bethcarey
I want to know if my new revised References are ok. Feedback on my first submission said I required reliable, secondary references, which I've now added. I believe I should get this reviewed first, before 're-submitting', if I am correct. thankyouBethcarey (talk) 00:05, 4 January 2019 (UTC)

Bethcarey (talk) 00:05, 4 January 2019 (UTC)


 * Hi, Good day and welcome to AfC help desk. I believe you are were referring to Draft:Dagmar Evelyn Cyrulla. Comments see below.
 * remove all the external links in the body text (example - Wagner Contemporary Gallery and etc)
 * remove/delete Representation section
 * remove/delete Artist Residencies & Grants section
 * remove all unimportant solo, group exhibition and prize/competitions and except leave those are significant ones - provide sources please
 * remove all External links except one subject official web site - see WP:ELMIN
 * pls provide sources to support "Early life and education" section, if cant, pls remove the section.
 * subject is notable with the sources provided at present, when all the above have been done, pls let me know on to my talk page and I will review for you.

Cheers. CASSIOPEIA(talk) 03:49, 4 January 2019 (UTC)

00:46:30, 4 January 2019 review of submission by 81.104.142.198
The US aristocrats has a page of their own: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/S%26P_500_Dividend_Aristocrats

Why should the European aristocrats not have a page of their own?

What changes can I make to the article for it to be published? I've added a reference. I can add more. I've cross reference to and from other Wikipedia articles. 81.104.142.198 (talk) 00:46, 4 January 2019 (UTC)

05:21:45, 4 January 2019 review of submission by SeattleWriter2019
Hi, my draft was rejected because of a lack of citations. I added them and I was wondering if these are adequate. Thank you!

SeattleWriter2019 (talk) 05:21, 4 January 2019 (UTC)
 * See 's comment. Your draft has to be rewritten in a neutral tone. More information left on your talk page. ― Abelmoschus Esculentus  ( talk •  contribs ) 05:31, 4 January 2019 (UTC)

05:56:29, 4 January 2019 review of submission by Elgatoboo
Vive Studios is under the HTC Vive umbrella; however, its filmography is notable enough to be listed, in similar fashion to how competitor Occulus Story Studio has an independent article listing its filmography from its parent company's page, Occulus. Moreover, Vive Studios' filmography is expected to continue publishing new titles; whereas, Occulus Story Studio has ceased operations.

Additionally, a reviewer suggested there may be a conflict of interest; however, I have no personal or professional connection to the company. I'm just an avid VR news follower and am not sure how to prove otherwise. Please advise. Elgatoboo (talk) 05:56, 4 January 2019 (UTC)

06:30:57, 4 January 2019 review of draft by Joshuanigeria
My article keeps getting rejected even though the person is very popular in my country. The web respects American popularity, it should also respect that of Lebanese too. Joshuanigeria (talk) 06:30, 4 January 2019 (UTC)

06:34:05, 4 January 2019 review of submission by Joshuanigeria
People want to know about the person stated above from Lebanon. After all what he did. But since there are poor references about him, the article doesn't go through. Joshuanigeria (talk) 06:34, 4 January 2019 (UTC)

07:37:41, 4 January 2019 review of submission by 182.73.208.249
182.73.208.249 (talk) 07:37, 4 January 2019 (UTC)

Yogi Shihan Selvakumar. A Yoga and Karate Master in Trivandrum, kerala State. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Yogi shihan selvakumar (talk • contribs) 08:46, 4 January 2019 (UTC)

08:58:55, 4 January 2019 review of submission by Yogi shihan selvakumar
Yogi shihan selvakumar (talk) 08:58, 4 January 2019 (UTC)

09:12:59, 4 January 2019 review of submission by Bandrewb444
Bandrewb444 (talk) 09:12, 4 January 2019 (UTC)

11:12:07, 4 January 2019 review of submission by Yogi shihan selvakumar
Yogi shihan selvakumar (talk) 11:12, 4 January 2019 (UTC)

11:44:47, 4 January 2019 review of submission by Yogi shihan selvakumar
Yogi shihan selvakumar (talk) 11:44, 4 January 2019 (UTC)

11:49:10, 4 January 2019 review of submission by Wikiwel
STOP sign rejection looks total! Is this advice to completely abandon Tris Penna article..? Wikiwel (talk) 11:49, 4 January 2019 (UTC)

13:02:00, 4 January 2019 review of submission by Klafkowski
Hi hope you're well,

I understand that some parts of my article do read like an advert, but I'm just hoping to narrow down if there are any parts in particular, or, if it's the entire thing, that I need to rewrite?

Many thanks

Klafkowski (talk) 13:02, 4 January 2019 (UTC)

15:38:44, 4 January 2019 review of submission by Arash142
Arash142 (talk) 15:38, 4 January 2019 (UTC)

15:47:37, 4 January 2019 review of draft by 62.232.255.249
62.232.255.249 (talk) 15:47, 4 January 2019 (UTC)

Hi, I entered the text for this page (ISO 11064) in November and clicked to get it published but it's still in draft. How can I get it reviewed and published please? Thanks, Tina.

17:45:40, 4 January 2019 review of submission by Schmied15
Schmied15 (talk) 17:45, 4 January 2019 (UTC)

I want to make sure that I have all of the proper information here...

1. I was denied because of lack of "reliable sources". I am not sure which specific area you are referring to? (I have since added some links and a second source apart from the SPTOR website).

2. This is still a work in progress, and I have plans to go through and upload the theme, photo, and rendering for every year that I have it, but don't want to waste the time doing that until I know that we are OK to proceed. (The first 3 years are completed as an example for what I want to do everywhere.)

3. I have made edits to the Cal Poly Rose Float page (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cal_Poly_Universities_Rose_Float) many times, and am trying to mimic that page for the South Pasadena page. If there is a specific area of the page that is requiring edits or additional sources, please let me know. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Schmied15 (talk • contribs) 19:25, 4 January 2019 (UTC)


 * Hi Good day and welcome to article for creation help desk. I believe you were referring to Draft:South Pasadena Tournament of Roses Association . Pls take your time to read the below for the answers of your question above and re-read it if you needed as there are a lot of info provided. Please click on the "blue high lighted text" for details information. Also pls read WP:Your First Article on how to write an article in Wikipedia.


 * Subject needs to meet notability requirements with significant in dept coverage (at least 3) of independent, reliable  sources that would be verified where by the sources  talk about the subject in length and in depth  to merit a page in Wikipedia mainspace.


 * If anything is unclear above, please read The answer to life, the universe, and everything. Thank you. CASSIOPEIA(talk) 06:49, 5 January 2019 (UTC)

21:44:54, 4 January 2019 review of submission by KKacir
While I understand that COI editing is discouraged, I believe that the person in question meets Wikipedia's notability standards. I would greatly appreciate it if an editor could indicate which specific statements violate Wikipedia's neutrality policy. KKacir (talk) 21:44, 4 January 2019 (UTC)
 * You were warned almost a month ago about disclosure of paid editing, but have failed to follow our instructions. -- Orange Mike &#124;  Talk  23:04, 4 January 2019 (UTC)
 * I'd add the subject while he appears to be a compontent professional he is not necessarily notable. Hell in a Bucket (talk) 23:34, 4 January 2019 (UTC)

22:39:55, 4 January 2019 review of draft by Rlittlesii
Rlittlesii (talk) 22:39, 4 January 2019 (UTC)

I want to add references to a page I am trying to submit. When I click the edit icon by references the only thing I see under references is. How do I interact with reflist to add more references to it?!