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= June 11 =

00:11:50, 11 June 2019 review of draft by AWRcore
Why did my draft for Emma Boettcher get denied? Seems like Jeopardy contestants with similar references were approved on the page https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_Jeopardy!_contestants

AWRcore (talk) 00:11, 11 June 2019 (UTC)
 * Hi . The draft paints Boettcher as someone notable for only one event. If similar articles exist, and cannot be improved, they should be considered for deletion. The essay WP:OTHERSTUFFEXISTS may help you understand why. --Worldbruce (talk) 00:43, 11 June 2019 (UTC)

Thank you. --AWRcore (talk) 01:48, 11 June 2019 (UTC)

09:50:16, 11 June 2019 review of submission by 5.227.6.183
Sorry, but I have 3 valid references 5.227.6.183 (talk) 09:50, 11 June 2019 (UTC)
 * Hi . The cited references are all from those organizing/coordinating/supporting the event. They are not independent of it; they have a vested interest in promoting it. Independent sources are required in order to demonstrate notability (suitability for inclusion in an encyclopedia), and the bulk of any article should come from independent sources. If you can add three independent, reliable, second sources that contain significant coverage of the event, you may resubmit the draft. --Worldbruce (talk) 14:31, 11 June 2019 (UTC)
 * Ok, thanks! Added 3 more independent sources: World Art Nouveau Day Dadamanda (talk) 14:48, 11 June 2019 (UTC)

09:52:16, 11 June 2019 review of draft by Klichnerska
Hello. This is the first time I've created an article by myself. Although I have edited many articles before, including Russian article on crowdshipping Краудшиппинг I have trouble finalizing the English version for crowdshipping. Please help me with edits and source edits. Thanks. you.

Klichnerska (talk) 09:52, 11 June 2019 (UTC)

Request on 13:49:28, 11 June 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by Bunnies959
Hi, I have created a draft article for Serato DJ and was not accepted as it appears to "be a test edit", is there any way that I can change and improve this.

Bunnies959 (talk) 13:49, 11 June 2019 (UTC)
 * Hi . User:Bunnies959/sandbox was declined as a test edit because it contains only a link. Draft:Serato DJ has not been declined, you have not submitted it for review. Add  to the top of it in order to ask for it to be considered for publication. When you save it, a large mustard yellow "Review waiting, please be patient" box will appear, probably at the bottom. The current backlog is approaching 16 weeks. --Worldbruce (talk) 14:19, 11 June 2019 (UTC)

Thank you I have done that now — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bunnies959 (talk • contribs) 00:06, 12 June 2019 (UTC)

15:01:30, 11 June 2019 review of draft by Gigi298
I am creating a biography page on someone  who is in the DWAA hall of fame and is on live television. I have provided many sources about him and the work he has done, yet it is not published. I need help with what specific kinds of sources I need to  get it  published.

Gigi298 (talk) 15:01, 11 June 2019 (UTC)
 * I've commented on the draft. --Worldbruce (talk) 17:57, 11 June 2019 (UTC)
 * I was editing it to fix it as was commenting. TechnoTalk (talk) 17:58, 11 June 2019 (UTC)

16:39:47, 11 June 2019 review of submission by Swordswfriends
I have revised the rejected page (Draft:Distillerie_Neisson) to address the objections of the reviewer and on the advice of other editors. First, the article was originally categorized as a product entry — this was an error, as it was written as a company entry. In addition, I have included additional significant coverage (with justification in Talk) and removed links to retailers (except for one, included because it's the only available reference for a particular fact; this is also addressed in Talk). On these grounds, I believe the article now meets Wikipedia standards.

Swordswfriends (talk) 16:39, 11 June 2019 (UTC)


 * ❌ - - Advertisement for a non-notable product line. This won't go anywhere right now. Please review the red box at the top of your draft. Snowycats (talk) 20:32, 11 June 2019 (UTC)

17:24:34, 11 June 2019 review of submission by Andremartinsc
Been trying to create a page for a former football player and current coach named Ricardo Raúl Montoya from Costa Rica. He works in USL League Two for Daytona SC as an assistant coach (https://goaliesoccer.com/us-soccer/pro-soccer-has-moved-to-town-daytona-soccer-club/), have worked for Atlanta Silverbacks as assistant coach in USL Championship (https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/2013_Atlanta_Silverbacks_season), as scout for Atlanta United in Major League Soccer and as performance analyst of El Salvador national team (https://www.dirtysouthsoccer.com/2017/1/10/14205500/local-atlanta-coach-joins-el-salvador-national-team-staff).

Here are links of matches he played: http://wvw.nacion.com/ln_ee/1997/abril/07/carmelita.html http://wvw.nacion.com/ln_ee/1997/marzo/06/carmelita.html http://wvw.nacion.com/ln_ee/1997/abril/10/liga.html http://wvw.nacion.com/ln_ee/1998/febrero/19/deportes3.html

He's referred as Raúl Montoya on these links above. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Andremartinsc (talk • contribs) 18:27, 11 June 2019 (UTC)

Andremartinsc (talk) 17:34, 11 June 2019 (UTC)
 * Hi . Being assistant coach, scout, and performance analyst doesn't make him notable. If you can add a source that supports his having played in a competitive game between two teams from fully-professional leagues, that would demonstrate notability according to WP:NFOOTY. --Worldbruce (talk) 18:11, 11 June 2019 (UTC)

17:44:18, 11 June 2019 review of submission by 42.113.193.220
42.113.193.220 (talk) 17:44, 11 June 2019 (UTC)
 * Subject does not appear to be notable. Theroadislong (talk) 18:36, 11 June 2019 (UTC)
 * - Please see the draft page. Snowycats (talk) 20:27, 11 June 2019 (UTC)

17:44:38, 11 June 2019 review of submission by 42.113.193.220
42.113.193.220 (talk) 17:44, 11 June 2019 (UTC)
 * ❌ No draft in contribs. Please let us know how we can help! :) Snowycats (talk) 20:26, 11 June 2019 (UTC)

22:35:50, 11 June 2019 review of submission by Porygon-Z474
You say my Porygon article needs to have "Independent notability" to be spun off? What does that mean? Porygon-Z (talk) 22:35, 11 June 2019 (UTC)