Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2019 March 30

= March 30 =

01:25:34, 30 March 2019 review of submission by 119.92.13.175
Hello, after my fail of my draft, I would like to know 5 reasons it has been declined. I wanted it accepted by my term just to share a review of the official gme. I want to know. 119.92.13.175 (talk) 01:25, 30 March 2019 (UTC)
 * Wikipedia is not for random game cruft. Topic is not sufficiently notable for inclusion in Wikipedia. Sources are not reliable. Sources do not show significant coverage. See What Wikipedia is not particularly INDISCRIMINATE. Theroadislong (talk) 10:47, 30 March 2019 (UTC)

07:37:10, 30 March 2019 review of submission by 2405:204:200B:DB8:4519:B0AE:AD3A:9526
2405:204:200B:DB8:4519:B0AE:AD3A:9526 (talk) 07:37, 30 March 2019 (UTC)

09:27:31, 30 March 2019 review of submission by Heubergen
Hi, my very first article on the en_wikipedia was just declined as it appears to "read more like an advertisement". The review didn't go into details about which sentences or paraphrases need to be re-written so I'd like to have some help here. I tried to include different sources and make the article as neutral as possible. I didn't include any (negative) critics because I didn't really find one. As to my motivation for this article; I listen to her music and was looking for a Wikipedia article but didn't find one so I decided to start one. I contacted the management of her during the article process but ask them to not intervene with the article writing. Heubergen (talk) 09:27, 30 March 2019 (UTC)

Request on 14:10:29, 30 March 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by Wmwgriffin
felt that the intent for creation of information on the von braun rotating space station had merit and should be searchable on wiki.. open to responses on how to accomplish that ??? regards. and thanks in advance

Wmwgriffin (talk) 14:10, 30 March 2019 (UTC)


 * Draft is fragmented sentences and so is this question. Please learn to write coherently. Legacypac (talk) 20:19, 30 March 2019 (UTC)

14:21:05, 30 March 2019 review of submission by WikiWiki5678
WikiWiki5678 (talk) 14:21, 30 March 2019 (UTC)

Why Zee Keralam page has been rejected? Zee Keralam is a newly launched Malayalam language television channel in India. But in Wikipedia, no page are alloted for Zee Keralam. Kindly reconsider it. https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Zee_Keralam


 * Needs to pass WP:BROADCAST Legacypac (talk) 20:17, 30 March 2019 (UTC)

15:10:51, 30 March 2019 review of submission by X3Kemono
I believe that this band deserves more recognition for what they do. Also, I believe that people should be able to learn about the history of The Coils, along with learning about their origin and possibly having people discover a new type of music genre that they might love. Thank you in advance. X3Kemono (talk) 15:10, 30 March 2019 (UTC)
 * No evidence this band meets WP:NBAND Legacypac (talk) 20:14, 30 March 2019 (UTC)

18:48:08, 30 March 2019 review of submission by BletchleyPark
Would an article about Nataal web site and it's associated Magazine (circulation circa 3,000) be of interest / acceptable? The Web site has been published since early 2015, the magazine was first published a year ago and the second edition is due out in May this year. Nataal is concerned with Black fashion, music and culture and is primarily aimed at the Afro-American, sub-Saharan African and Afro-Caribbean reader. The Web site has nearly 600 articles spread across all 3 categories. Pages in the web site are cited 8 times in the reference sections of various Wikipedia articles.

I have 3 potential conflicts of interest
 * My daughter, Helen Jennings, is the editor and a major share holder.
 * I am a minor (5%) share holder.
 * I do not make contributions to the actual site contents, but I have been responsible for creating all of the pages from raw copy and images for the past 2 years and other technical matters.

If deemed suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia, who should write the article? Obviously my daughter, as a journalist, could do a good job, but also obviously she has a major CoI.

BletchleyPark (talk) 18:48, 30 March 2019 (UTC)
 * Likely not suitable. Needs to have multiple reliable sources discuss the topic in detail. Don't write about stuff you are closely connected too. If some independent user determines the topic is notable they will write it up. Legacypac (talk) 20:16, 30 March 2019 (UTC)