Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2019 May 3

= May 3 =

Request on 07:17:47, 3 May 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by CCFBROWN
An article about Cambodian Children's Fund (CCF) Founder and Executive Director, Scott Neeson, has been declined on the basis of not having enough content. The article has much more content than other similar articles (i.e. Scott Harrison). It was suggested that more information be added to the CCF page instead. Can the Scott Neeson article get approval if more content is added? Is there a specific type of content that is missing.

The previous article (later deleted due to referencing) did not have as much content as this current one.

Thank you for your help. CCFBROWN (talk) 07:17, 3 May 2019 (UTC)

CCFBROWN (talk) 07:17, 3 May 2019 (UTC)

08:51:30, 3 May 2019 review of submission by LewisManz
LewisManz (talk) 08:51, 3 May 2019 (UTC) I'm trying my hardest to make it neutral and not like an advert, I thought my 3rd iteration as better than my first and second, but now it has been completely denied. Should I return to the 2nd iteration and try reworking again?

Thanks in advance


 * Hi . No, stop working on the draft. The company is not notable. Any article about it could only be promotional. Rejection is meant to be final, to convey that no amount of editing will make the topic acceptable. If you're here to build an encyclopedia, you're welcome to edit something else. See Community portal for ways to help. --Worldbruce (talk) 12:25, 3 May 2019 (UTC)

11:21:28, 3 May 2019 review of submission by Badal Saboo - Connect the dots
We have made the required changes with the inclusion of appropriate references. Badal Saboo - Connect the dots (talk) 11:21, 3 May 2019 (UTC)


 * Hi - there's a few issues here, both with the draft and with your username/activity.


 * Critically, your phrasing indicates that you have paid involvement/employment with the site. Please have a read of which sets out how to disclose these links. Disclosure is obligatory if there is any paid connection, even if you aren't specifically linked (such as an employee or intern doing it in their own time)


 * You also have said "we have made" - wikipedia accounts need to be individual. So if you're in a team, each member who edits Wikipedia will need to have an account (e.g. Worker1@Badal Saboo) etc. (You can pick whatever you feel like)


 * In relation to the draft, it currently reads heavily as a press release, rather than a neutral generalised report on the subject.


 * The draft also only has 1 reference atm, and in almost all circumstances more are needed - 3 high quality ones is best.


 * Please let me know, or ask at the Teahouse if you are having difficulties with the first two aspects. Nosebagbear (talk) 12:17, 3 May 2019 (UTC)

13:08:30, 3 May 2019 review of draft by Gshallo
Hello - I'm just trying to get a feel for the status of the SNA Displays page submission. Thanks.

Gshallo (talk) 13:08, 3 May 2019 (UTC)


 * pending paid editing disclosure, see User talk:Gshallo. --Worldbruce (talk) 03:28, 4 May 2019 (UTC)

17:13:28, 3 May 2019 review of submission by Makingeditsandwhatnot2018
Lotame is actually a fairly large global company with many big name publisher and brand clients. They also have the largest DMP in the world! I edited with more information to help justify that. Thank you! Makingeditsandwhatnot2018 (talk) 17:13, 3 May 2019 (UTC)

19:55:05, 3 May 2019 review of submission by OR Marine Reserves
I'm trying to update the Oregon Department of Fish and Wildlife's page by creating pages for each of the marine reserves (they are listed, but say that a page hasn't been created for any other than one - Cape Falcon Marine Reserve). I tried to create one for Cape Perpetua Marine Reserve, but was declined because a page for Cape Perpetua already exists. "Cape Perpetua" is a general region, versus "Cape Perpetua Marine Reserve" is a place overseen by the Oregon Department of Fish and Wildlife. Any ideas to help get these pages created under the Oregon Department of Fish and Wildlife's page would be helpful. Thank you!

OR Marine Reserves (talk) 19:50, 3 May 2019 (UTC)

23:09:07, 3 May 2019 review of submission by 2601:280:4E00:23C2:2DA6:DEBD:1CBC:BEF4
Hopefully, the removal of the content has made the article acceptable? 2601:280:4E00:23C2:2DA6:DEBD:1CBC:BEF4 (talk) 23:09, 3 May 2019 (UTC)

23:50:04, 3 May 2019 review of draft by ShyhBCRaps
ShyhBCRaps (talk) 23:50, 3 May 2019 (UTC)

Is it okay if you guys approve the article about ShyhBRaps PLEASE, PLEASE hes my favorite of all time can you guys?