Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2019 May 5

= May 5 =

02:17:30, 5 May 2019 review of draft by Davismichira
Davismichira (talk) 02:17, 5 May 2019 (UTC)


 * Blatantly advertorial page Nosebagbear (talk) 10:42, 5 May 2019 (UTC)

02:18:04, 5 May 2019 review of submission by Davismichira
Davismichira (talk) 02:18, 5 May 2019 (UTC)


 * Duplicate Nosebagbear (talk)

04:30:51, 5 May 2019 review of submission by Lalisekhon
I tried to make it less a resume. I am working on it! Welcome any edits. Lalisekhon (talk) 04:30, 5 May 2019 (UTC)

04:32:06, 5 May 2019 review of submission by Lalisekhon
Lalisekhon (talk) 04:32, 5 May 2019 (UTC)i've re-edited it. working on it!

13:27:06, 5 May 2019 review of draft by INeedSupport
Looks like I found a secondary, reliable source from Arkansas. This is also far away from the location of the main restaurant chain, which is Indiana. Is the business notable enough for me to submit for review or is it not notable enough? Thanks!  I Need Support  :3 13:27, 5 May 2019 (UTC)
 * Hi . The page in the book, a guide to Indiana restaurants, satisfies the requirement for at least one regional, statewide, national, or international source. It also helps that it's from an academic publisher. The draft has some significant holes, although they need not prevent acceptance. The chain used to have locations in Michigan and Ohio too. It also has or had a trucking division, restaurant equipment division, and catering division. If you don't have access to the sources I added to "Further reading", and want to use them to expand the draft, you can get them through WP:RX. --Worldbruce (talk) 07:03, 10 May 2019 (UTC)
 * Hi there! I see that you already added some sources and added the "Further reading" section. Furthmore, I see that you fixed some accuracy errors. Thanks for that!  I Need Support  :3 14:02, 10 May 2019 (UTC)

14:41:06, 5 May 2019 review of draft by 197.14.134.219
197.14.134.219 (talk) 14:41, 5 May 2019 (UTC)

14:51:11, 5 May 2019 review of submission by Webplanet12345
Am unable to over-ride previous draft post that was rejected by editors for new once. Kindly help out with correction... koya (talk) 14:51, 5 May 2019 (UTC)


 * Hi . Sure, glad to help. I've corrected the draft by removing the masses of unsupported content, and have added a few sources that were missing, about his arrest on suspicion of DUI. That seems to be the only thing in his life that has attracted much attention from reliable sources. It probably isn't enough to justify an encyclopedia article about him. --Worldbruce (talk) 16:22, 5 May 2019 (UTC)

20:40:09, 5 May 2019 review of draft by WIKIrestrict
Hello, I was just wondering if someone could proof read a draft I have created and give me some advice about what to fix. Thankyou! WIKIrestrict WIKIedit 20:40, 5 May 2019 (UTC)
 * Hi. Are you able to add any inline sources? The sources that the article already has only apply to the article in general, rather to any of its specific information, and as such are not as valuable. -Lopifalko (talk) 10:19, 6 May 2019 (UTC)