Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2019 November 23

= November 23 =

00:26:43, 23 November 2019 review of submission by PapayaWiki105
Hi -

As it relates to my previous question, by "We" I meant "QC Entertainment", the company. I work for Ray Mansfield, Sean McKittrick, and Ted Hamm.

Look forward to hearing what I can do to get the page approved.

PapayaWiki105 (talk) 00:26, 23 November 2019 (UTC)
 * , Howdy hello! Soo: you appear to have a conflict of interest here. You must disclose if you've been paid to make these edits in anyway, by following the steps at WP:PAID. Do that, and then we can talk further. Captain Eek Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 03:16, 23 November 2019 (UTC)

00:34:44, 23 November 2019 review of submission by Ashtronautz
I want to understand how to publish my wiki page, either getting to learn better citations, references, etc. Ashtronautz (talk) 00:34, 23 November 2019 (UTC)
 * , Howdy hello! So here's the issue: this article is unlikely to be published at all, as the subject isn't notable. I.e., there is not suitable coverage of the subject. Usually, at least 3 reliable and independent sources are needed, such as articles in the media. But this seems to be about just an average person, like you or I. We don't write articles about anyone, just those folks who have had significant coverage in published sources. Captain Eek  Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 03:07, 23 November 2019 (UTC)

04:05:46, 23 November 2019 review of submission by Anne Delong
Bobby Watson (musician)

I drafted the above page some time ago, and, because it's about a person I know well, I submitted it to AfC for neutral review. It was recently accepted, but I noticed that a request for a photograph was added. Another long-time friend of the subject has taken many pictures of him over the years, and at my request he's now uploaded two of these to Commons; a closeup:

https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Bobby_Watson_with_his_Stratocaster.jpg

and a picture of one of the bands he was in early in his career:

https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Bacon_Fat_in_1973_at_Trent_University.jpg

However, we both have a conflict of interest and shouldn't add to the article now that it's in mainspace, so I am asking for a reviewer to look at the images and decide if they are appropriate.

&mdash;Anne Delong (talk) 04:05, 23 November 2019 (UTC)

04:22:46, 23 November 2019 review of submission by 108.247.107.100
This is part of a National DAR Service Project to write a Wikimedia article about our DAR Revolutionary War Patriot. I followed instructions provided by our National Board....I am extremely disappointed at the response that a man who served for the freedom of our Country was not deemed to be "notable". I would like this to be reviewed.

108.247.107.100 (talk) 04:22, 23 November 2019 (UTC)


 * Hi . Thank you for your interest in improving Wikipedia. Unfortunately, the encyclopedia's requirements may not have been accurately transmitted from Wikipedia, through the Daughters of the American Revolution, to you. Few people who fought for freedom are notable (meet Wikipedia's criteria for a stand-alone article); probably fewer than one in a thousand. Primary sources, such as those available through Fold3, do not demonstrate notability. To show notability, one needs significant coverage in secondary sources, such as history books written by historians and published by academic presses.


 * Creating a new Wikipedia article is one of the most difficult, time consuming, and frustrating tasks a novice editor can attempt. Instead, try improving existing articles. Heman Swift and Return J. Meigs Sr., for example, have been assessed as lowest quality and "C" quality respectively, so there is much room for improvement. You also may be interested in joining WikiProject United States History. --Worldbruce (talk) 16:24, 23 November 2019 (UTC)

17:04:43, 23 November 2019 review of draft by Brett125
Brett125 (talk) 17:04, 23 November 2019 (UTC)

Could you create a Bio-stub for "Wilmot Max Ramsay, Jamaican American politician and Civil Rights leader"? Thanks.


 * Hi . This page is for questions about the Articles for creation process. To request that an article be written, consider asking at Requested articles. You will need to show that the topic is suitable for inclusion in the encyclopedia. Articles must be about notable topics: those that have received significant coverage in independent, reliable sources. We have a fairly precise definition of what is considered a "reliable source", as well as detailed inclusion guidelines. --Worldbruce (talk) 18:12, 23 November 2019 (UTC)

17:17:45, 23 November 2019 review of submission by Claudette De Ville
Hello and thanks for your advice. I am going to adapt the page accordingly. As for the references, there are photographs of some of the articles on the site www.pol-fraiture.be. I spent many days at the National Library (Belgium)looking for other articles. Most of them are in French... only few in English. Pol died in 1981 and the Internet was not what it is today... newspapers were not on the net. May I ask you to help me find my draft? Thanks in advance. Claudette De Ville Claudette De Ville (talk) 17:17, 23 November 2019 (UTC)

18:35:39, 23 November 2019 review of draft by Ivor Speedwell
I have reworked the article I submitted, 'Reginald Paul', to include source references where possible and to make minor changes to the text. This revised version is in my sandbox: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ivor_Speedwell/sandbox. Is there anything else I need to do to get this version of the article reviewed and / or published ?

Ivor Speedwell (talk) 18:35, 23 November 2019 (UTC)


 * Hi . When a draft is declined (Draft:Reginald Paul), do not create a new version of it in a different location (User:Ivor Speedwell/sandbox). Simply edit the declined draft, below the decline notice and reviewer comments. Then, when you are ready, use the blue "Resubmit" button on the draft to request a review of the revised version. --Worldbruce (talk) 13:34, 24 November 2019 (UTC)

20:30:21, 23 November 2019 review of submission by Balusingh
Balusingh (talk) 20:30, 23 November 2019 (UTC)

Balusingh (talk) 20:33, 23 November 2019 (UTC)


 * Do you have a specific question about this? The decline and reject reasons link to the pages that explain in detail what sources are needed. You resubmitted the draft for re-review without adding any new sources. — HELL KNOWZ   ▎TALK 12:58, 24 November 2019 (UTC)

21:13:03, 23 November 2019 review of submission by 71.145.217.237
The article on Weyl Semimetals is in urgent need of work with several popular science articles referencing them. The page meanders, is too complex for laypersons to comprehend and references too many technical terms that lack links out of context

I left my thoughts in their talk page but I thought they might get more visibility here.

A variation of the articles referencing it is here: https://www.livescience.com/axion-found-in-weyl-semimetal.html

71.145.217.237 (talk) 21:13, 23 November 2019 (UTC)


 * The draft was accepted for publication five years ago, so it is long out of scope of Articles for Creation. Posting here is unlikely to have the effect you desire. Talk:Weyl semimetal is the correct place to discuss the article. See Help:Talk pages for conventions, especially regarding where to place threads, how to sign posts, and how to notify others. --Worldbruce (talk) 13:47, 24 November 2019 (UTC)