Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2019 November 30

= November 30 =

03:34:31, 30 November 2019 review of submission by Ndcrevolution
I am requesting a re-review because I have put two more articles as reference as I had been notified that only one article in The Times of India is not sufficient. Thank you. Ndcrevolution (talk) 03:34, 30 November 2019 (UTC)
 * , You have only one sentence. That is not sufficient. You need more content. Captain Eek  Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 21:28, 30 November 2019 (UTC)

12:58:47, 30 November 2019 review of draft by Flavia567
Flavia567 (talk) 12:58, 30 November 2019 (UTC)
 * , You need more sources. It also needs to be written from a neutral point of view. Find at least 3 more sources before asking for more assistance. Captain Eek  Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 21:11, 30 November 2019 (UTC)

14:33:43, 30 November 2019 review of submission by LouiseVincent
LouiseVincent (talk) 14:33, 30 November 2019 (UTC)
 * , The person is not notable. You should seek another area of Wikipedia to edit. Captain Eek  Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 21:09, 30 November 2019 (UTC)

16:00:51, 30 November 2019 review of draft by Bsseifer
I am a Wikipedia newbie. I need guidance on how to change the title of a draft article. Among many suggestions made by DGG was the suggestion to change the title of the draft  to something like . Must I move the article to rename it? Bsseifer (talk) 16:00, 30 November 2019 (UTC)

Bsseifer (talk) 16:00, 30 November 2019 (UTC)
 * , A "move" is what we call renaming. Its a bit weird, but we "move" pages because we don't just give them a new title, we also move the entire history of the page to that new title. You should be able to move the page yourself, but if not, let me know and I can do it for you. Captain Eek  Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 21:00, 30 November 2019 (UTC)

Many thanks Captain Eek  Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ Thought that might be it but didn't want to break anything. Will attempt DYI and revert if that fails. Onward. Bsseifer (talk) 15:31, 1 December 2019 (UTC)
 * Two comments. First, my compliments on the proper use of the cite journal template in the reference, that isn't easy. Secondly, the biggest problem with the article is the lack of a header paragraph prior to the section basically explaining what this is. The jump into the technical is too great and it doesn't seem to have a good flow for a Wikipedia article. I'm not sure what to suggest as a model page, but you may want to look around for pages on similar topics.Naraht (talk) 20:18, 1 December 2019 (UTC)

Thank you Naraht (talk) Wikipedia is the most complex and extensive online text tool I've ever encountered. The tool and its user interface are challenging, but the skills are definitely worth acquiring. What is most impressive is the constructive tone and quality of the feedback from the community. I have great respect for the quality and integrity of the site now. Onward to the edits. Bsseifer (talk) 20:41, 1 December 2019 (UTC)

20:58:24, 30 November 2019 review of submission by Willis2755
I am a brand new wikipedia creator and I just want to publish something for public info. Please simply explain what is wrong with my submission. Willis2755 (talk) 20:59, 30 November 2019 (UTC)
 * , The average Youtube channel is not notable. We cannot cover this item. Sorry. Captain Eek  Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 21:08, 30 November 2019 (UTC)