Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2019 September 18

= September 18 =

03:29:12, 18 September 2019 review of submission by Lifelonglearning1
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Request on 04:42:45, 18 September 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by Ada Wan
Hi Wiki, I do not understand why this article is being rejected because it is not significant enough. As I see Wikipedia is a platform to share knowledge and information and there always will be some topics or articles that are not interesting or significant for others. Please assist me. Thank you.

Ada Wan (talk) 04:42, 18 September 2019 (UTC)
 * pending paid editing disclosure, see User talk:Ada Wan. --Worldbruce (talk) 13:11, 19 September 2019 (UTC)

05:52:13, 18 September 2019 review of submission by Ka1591915
I would like to request assistance with this page because the topic covers a prominent cultural practitioner of the Hawaiian community who deserves to have his story told. Could I please receive some additional information as to why this was rejected? Ka1591915 (talk) 05:52, 18 September 2019 (UTC)


 * - it was rejected because the sources weren't suitable. To prove notability you need sources that are: in-depth, reliable, independent (which also rules out interviews) and secondary (newspapers, books etc). The Genealogy documents, the census and kaananiau's site are all primary, and also aren't in-depth (on Nunes himself) or fail independent (in the case of the site). The interview is also not independent because most of the content would come from a non-independent source. The obituary causes warnings to crop up all over my laptop so I've not seen that, but even as a good source, it wouldn't be enough on its own. Have a look at WP:GNG for a good summary of what you need. Nosebagbear (talk) 16:06, 18 September 2019 (UTC)

06:12:57, 18 September 2019 review of draft by MaroonFrogbh
The following article is an introduction to readers to know about Al Salam Bank in Bahrain. and all the information in the article are informative and does not advertise anything related to Al Salam Bank. Could you kindly advice me on how can I improve the article pleas. Thank you! MaroonFrogbh (talk) 06:12, 18 September 2019 (UTC)


 * Greetings. May I know what is your connection with the bank?  CASSIOPEIA(talk) 14:07, 18 September 2019 (UTC)

This is Anwaar from www.maroonfrog.com. We are a Marketing Agency based in Bahrain. Our client Alsalam Bank Bahrain has asked us to create online content on Wikipedia & the top online directories and other websites. This is the first time we create a Wikipedia page and we are not sure how we can do it right to get accepted. — Preceding unsigned comment added by MaroonFrogbh (talk • contribs) 05:48, 19 September 2019 (UTC)


 * Post the mandatory disclosure to your user page at User:MaroonFrogbh. The template Paid can be used for this purpose – e.g. in the form: . --Worldbruce (talk) 13:22, 19 September 2019 (UTC)

06:31:34, 18 September 2019 review of submission by Chirag-Behre
Hello,

Thank you for your feedback. We have added a few reliable links for the content as reference.

Regards, Chirag-Behre (talk) 06:31, 18 September 2019 (UTC)

13:38:18, 18 September 2019 review of submission by Briannaburns123
Here is the code I submitted that was denied, can anyone give me any advice?

[copy of draft removed, the link above is sufficient --Worldbruce (talk) 14:21, 18 September 2019 (UTC)]

Briannaburns123 (talk) 13:38, 18 September 2019 (UTC)
 * Please read the declination reason at the top of your draft, as it contains helpful links for you to improve your draft.  JTP (talk • contribs) 18:21, 18 September 2019 (UTC)

19:12:11, 18 September 2019 review of submission by Shaikh7977741665

 * - Wikipedia isn't a "how-to" guide (WikiHow might work), but also the tone isn't correct - we don't use "We" or "our". There's also a concern that this would be a US-centric article: documents would range heavily region to region. Finally the article doesn't have any references. Nosebagbear (talk) 19:55, 18 September 2019 (UTC)
 * and I don't think anyone will accept Copyright violations. 09:08, 19 September 2019 RHaworth talk contribs deleted page User:Shaikh7977741665/sandbox (G12: Unambiguous copyright infringement of https://www.compareclosing.com/blog/documents-for-refinance/ ) (thank) Victor Schmidt mobil (talk) 09:40, 19 September 2019 (UTC)
 * Indeed! Nosebagbear (talk)

19:12:11, 18 September 2019 review of draft by Shaikh7977741665
Shaikh7977741665 (talk) 19:12, 18 September 2019 (UTC)

Please see the above Nosebagbear (talk)

20:43:01, 18 September 2019 review of submission by Shaikh7977741665
Shaikh7977741665 (talk) 20:43, 18 September 2019 (UTC)

23:19:38, 18 September 2019 review of draft by SamanGorilla
I think this article is being denied unfairly and the reason for denial is totally personal. I need a second eye for it.

SamanGorilla (talk) 23:19, 18 September 2019 (UTC)
 * Hi . Most companies, including Elago, are not notable (not suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia). You may find WP:BFAQ informative. --Worldbruce (talk) 00:32, 19 September 2019 (UTC)

Briannaburns123 (talk) 00:25, 19 September 2019 (UTC)

00:35:20, 19 September 2019 review of submission by Briannaburns123
I don't understand the "declination reason" for my article submission denial, can someone actually give me some help in the help desk? Help that I can actually understand so that I can correct it? Can anyone help me? Briannaburns123 (talk) 00:35, 19 September 2019 (UTC)


 * - of course. Inline citations are the little blue numbers that appear at the end of sentences in many articles (e.g. Fairness Project). In most articles, they are only needed for potentially controversial or disputable statements or quotes. However, for biographies of living persons, stricter rules apply. Any potentially contentious material, at all, needs to have an inline citation.


 * Conveniently, you've already written your sources in a suitable format. I've cut the first one from the bottom and used it as an inline ref.


 * It's worth knowing you can name references. For example, I've named the example inline reference so it reads  at the start of the citation. If you want to use that reference again, elsewhere in the article, you just need to write instead of writing out the whole citation again. Nosebagbear (talk) 08:49, 19 September 2019 (UTC)