Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2020 April 24

= April 24 =

Request on 03:57:05, 24 April 2020 for assistance on AfC submission by S.K.Upadhyay100
S.K.Upadhyay100 (talk) 03:57, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
 * , Di you have a question? Sulfurboy (talk) 04:00, 24 April 2020 (UTC)

Request on 04:10:06, 24 April 2020 for assistance on AfC submission by Continental clip Traditional Poodle haircut
Hello, It is my last hope I am failing here. I do not understand why everybody is thinking that I am advertisement. I am sorry for my language English it is my second language so I maybe have not very perfect English.

I need help, please. I am actually crying here. I am student and i have an assignment task to create little small wikipedia page, if I not do it I have failed. and i have to repeat the course for another year i an crying here. I am not a business I am a person this is not the advertisement. I have Read books they was real paper books i processed information and most of my referencing from the actual books i have read. I am very new for wikipedia and I created my own home made illustrations, I am ex dog groomer with 15 years of experience, now student but I have a lot of knowledge about poodle grooming and I wanted to share it. I never had have time to figure how to fix if as my new pages just disappearing in 4 seconds. I have any mistakes because it just gets deleted. I believe when i finish this article it would be helpful to anyone wants to groom a Poodle in continental clip. I am very new to Wikipedia, it is my first article it that i do not know how can i fix all of the problems or what is that problems are ... I am just have to do it for my studies. Can you help me pretty please???? I have image which i have created myself with all detailed mapping for Continental clip but i can not add it to the article can someone show me how to do the image ,please? Kind R. I have tried but any of my articles getting deleted in 4 seconds i never had have time to work on one i am only starting and it is gone. Continental clip Traditional Poodle haircut (talk) 04:10, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
 * , We do not approve articles just to help people pass a class. Our requirements for notability do not change for any individualized circumstance. I would recommend you have your teacher read WP:ASSIGN. Also, if English is not your first language, you might want to consider creating a page on your home language's wikipedia. Sulfurboy (talk) 05:33, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Just noting that it could be for an English class, so editing their home language version would not help. 331dot (talk) 09:17, 24 April 2020 (UTC)


 * I'm sorry for your difficulty. It is extremely unfair to you for your teacher to make you write an entire Wikipedia article as a class requirement.  This is because it often takes a long time, well beyond any deadlines set by a teacher, and other aspects that are beyond the student's control. Feel free to show your teacher this message and direct them to read WP:ASSIGN as noted by Sulfurboy.
 * In the case of your draft, you have cited the technical aspects of the style of dog grooming you discuss, but that is not enough. Wikipedia articles must do more than tell about a subject; they must show with significant coverage in independent reliable sources how the subject meets Wikipedia's special definition of notability.  You haven't done that with your draft at this time. 331dot (talk) 09:17, 24 April 2020 (UTC)

07:03:37, 24 April 2020 review of draft by Dr.sergio.rs
Hi, I would like to understand the process better. I understand the comment of the reviewer. However, there are clearly some topics - such as the one proposed in the draft - that are of interest of a rather niche audience. How is an administrator deciding what is 'significant' and 'independent' coverage? In academic work, citations from other (independent) articles certainly count as independent coverage. Thanks a lot for your input!

Dr.sergio.rs (talk) 07:03, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Hi . Academic journal articles or chapters in books from academic publishers, by authors other than Sergio Sparviero, would be independent. Significant coverage is less of a bright line, but reviewers have many years experience judging it in many thousands of cases. For example, Jabloński and Jabloński's 2020 chapter "Conceptualization and Operationalization of Social Business Models in the Digital Economy", is significant coverage with respect to Business Model Canvas. It also cites Sparviero, but all it says about The Social Enterprise Model Canvas is two sentences referring to two figures from Sparviero. That doesn't constitute significant coverage of the template. --Worldbruce (talk) 12:25, 24 April 2020 (UTC)

Thanks.

08:50:43, 24 April 2020 review of draft by NiciWest
Hi there, I'd like clarification on why the article for Georgia de Chamberet is being rejected please. The subject appears to have lots of external sources. Is someone able to specify please? Best, Nici

NiciWest (talk) 08:50, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Hello. Is there something specific about the advice you have already been given that you do not understand? I can say that many of the sources seem to be from the person themselves, which does not establish that this person meets the Wikipedia definition of a notable person. 331dot (talk) 09:09, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
 * You say she was "managing editor of the Quartet Encounters series" this is not supported by the source and would in itself confer no notability,

You say "Chamberet was one of the original founder-members of English PEN's Writers in Translation committee" this is not sourced, you say "She launched the BookBlast Celebrates Independent Publishing initiative via online journal The BookBlast Diary in 2016." this is not sourced. "he was a judge for the The Saif Ghobash Banipal Prize for Arabic Literary Translation" this is not a notable prize and only has a primary source. "publishing world writing in translation, including titles by Aharon Appelfeld, Stig Dagerman, Giorgio Bassani." is just unsourced name dropping. Please be aware that you need to disclose any conflict of interest too. Theroadislong (talk) 09:19, 24 April 2020 (UTC)

10:01:30, 24 April 2020 review of submission by Deshaanandii
Dear Team,

I would like to know the exact reason as to why the article was declined, request you to please help me so that I can start following your suggestion and make the content more suitable for publishing. Since this is my first ever post would like some support from your end, rest ensured will publish high quality content for the audience Deshaanandii (talk) 10:01, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
 * You were given the exact reason by the reviewer- you do not meet Wikipedia's definition of a notable actress, as shown with significant coverage in independent reliable sources. No amount of editing can change that.  Please read the autobiography policy to see why writing about yourself on Wikipedia is not advisable.  Wikipedia is not social media where people tell about themselves, this is an encyclopedia.  If I am in error and you are not Deshaa Nandii, you will need to change your username at Special:GlobalRenameRequest or WP:CHUS. 331dot (talk) 10:05, 24 April 2020 (UTC)

11:44:42, 24 April 2020 review of draft by Glammazon
Glammazon (talk) 11:44, 24 April 2020 (UTC)

I am writing an article on the superhero lnferno and l need to find reliable secondary sources online.
 * Are you asking a question? We can't find your sources for you.  I suggest that you reverse your submission of the draft until you find such sources, otherwise it will be declined again. 331dot (talk) 12:32, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
 * (edit conflict) Hi . You may find WikiProject Comics/References useful. The listed references are not necessarily online, but an article may cite offline sources. If you need help accessing an offline source, WP:RX may be able to help, although with much of the world locked out of libraries right now you might have to wait a month or eighteen. --Worldbruce (talk) 12:37, 24 April 2020 (UTC)

The notability of my new article on the MLJ character Inferno is in question. Can you help me?Glammazon (talk) 12:54, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Follow up comments should be placed in the same section, please do not create a new section(just click "edit" in the section header if using a computer). We can't help you confer notability on your subject, you must find the sources with the information required.  Please read Your First Article. 331dot (talk) 12:57, 24 April 2020 (UTC)

13:35:59, 24 April 2020 review of draft by Via Leopardi
i just wanna ask if what Proof of citation needed to my article when is everything valid on the criteria and measurement you required... like it’s all came from a reputable newspapers

Via Leopardi (talk) 13:35, 24 April 2020 (UTC)

14:47:15, 24 April 2020 review of submission by 210.6.22.101
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Jiri_Prochazka_(martial_artist)

Has there been any update on this? I have resubmitted. I have already explained how this Martial Artist is a significant figure.

The MMA notability criteria has been met

1.Have fought at least three professional fights for a top-tier MMA organization, such as the UFC (see WP:MMATIER);

Has fought 12 times for Rizin FF which is considered a top tier organization.

The list https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:WikiProject_Mixed_martial_arts/MMA_notability#Current_list_of_notable_MMA_organizations_and_promotions is outdated. If rules are consistent then https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Angela_Lee should not have a wikipedia page because she has only fought at ONE Championship which is second tier according to the list

or 2.Have fought for the highest title of a top-tier MMA organization

He is currently Rizin FF Light Heavyweight Champion and has vacated the title to fight for the UFC which is a top tier organization.

210.6.22.101 (talk) 14:47, 24 April 2020 (UTC)

Request on 17:02:21, 24 April 2020 for assistance on AfC submission by BrandiBostonTea
Hello!

A Wikipedia page draft of mine was recently rejected due to our references not proving that we have been significantly covered/are eligible for a Wiki page. Of the 22 references on our page, 12 are from news sources, but unfortunately half of them don't have web links because they are from the early 2000's (we had scans of the articles on our computer files, but there is no way to access the articles from the news sources' websites). Is there a way to keep these sources in while having no way to electronically prove they exist? Would we be able to link to the news site in the reference as a way to prove the the news site exists/is legitimate?

Thanks!

BrandiBostonTea (talk) 17:02, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Who is "we" Wikipedia accounts are strictly for single person use. Theroadislong (talk) 17:23, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Another problem is that the draft is stuffed with promotional marketing, puffery "Due to the stadium's status as one of the most iconic landmarks in Boston", "The orchestra's missions were to highlight the city of Boston's rich history ", "The organization's Breaking Down Barriers Initiative ", "15,000 tickets were put on sale for the concert and sold out within four days", "with the full blessing of the King Estate.". etc etc. I suggest you give back any money you have received for editing this, because you have done a very poor job! Theroadislong (talk) 17:31, 24 April 2020 (UTC)

Untitled post about Victor Mbarika
Greetings! Please I need clarification on what an orphan article is? I removed the orphan tag placed on Victor Mbarika because it is linked to ICT University's Wikipedia page but a user "GSS" reversed it. I had earlier checked the rules guiding the use of that tag and discovered its appropriate to remove the tag from the article. Please clarify this. Thanks! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Opeinoluwa101 (talk • contribs) 21:16, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
 * This page is for questions about the Articles for creation process. Pages in article space are outside our scope. You are correct that the article is no longer an orphan. Another editor removed the orphan tag on 20 April, but if you still have questions about it you can talk to GSS directly on their talk page, or ask at the Help desk, where editors will try to answer any question regarding how to use Wikipedia. Please remember when you add content to talk pages and Wikipedia pages that have open discussion (but never when editing articles), to sign your posts. This information is necessary to allow other editors to easily see who wrote what and when. --Worldbruce (talk) 00:35, 25 April 2020 (UTC)

22:00:01, 24 April 2020 review of submission by Erikgwagner
Hello, I have been trying to get feedback on this article draft. What would you recommend I do to have it reviewed? Have a great weekend, Erik EW 22:00, 24 April 2020 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Erikgwagner (talk • contribs)
 * There is now a gray box at the top of the draft. It contains a blue "Submit your draft for review!" button that you may click to put the draft into the pool to be reviewed. Wikipedia has very little appetite for new articles about small private companies, especially startups whose history consists of raising venture capital, so don't expect it to be accepted for publication. --Worldbruce (talk) 00:50, 25 April 2020 (UTC)

Request on 22:42:10, 24 April 2020 for assistance on AfC submission by NgetVuthyPNN
VEHA is famous branding in Cambodia. You can check our website https://vehanews.com/. Also we have good communication in social media. Also in google search https://www.google.com/search?q=veha+media&rlz=1C5CHFA_enKH891KH891&oq=veha+media&aqs=chrome.0.69i59j0j69i59j0j69i60l3.3673j0j7&sourceid=chrome&ie=UTF-8

NgetVuthyPNN (talk) 22:42, 24 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Your draft does nothing other than state the existence of your company. Wikipedia articles must do more, they must summarize what independent reliable sources say about article subjects. You offer no sources at all. 331dot (talk) 22:46, 24 April 2020 (UTC)