Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2020 August 24

= August 24 =

04:15:56, 24 August 2020 review of submission by Sheshanks2020
I'm confused why it was rejected again. I had rewrote it so that it doesn't look like an "advertisement", but it looks like it was rejected for the same reason. Can someone help me? Sheshanks2020 (talk) 04:15, 24 August 2020 (UTC)

05:00:29, 24 August 2020 review of submission by Komalsharma664655
Komalsharma664655 (talk) 05:00, 24 August 2020 (UTC)
 * This needs relibale sources that are independent of the subject (no interviews or press releases) that have some coverage of the subject (not yust passing mentions). LinkedIn and other user generated content sites arent considered reliable. Victor Schmidt (talk) 07:26, 24 August 2020 (UTC)

06:24:59, 24 August 2020 review of draft by Rixle
It has taken a long time to get to where I am with my article, and on July 22nd it seems that all that was needed to be done was: "Please remove the external links in the text and convert them to wikilinks, if possible."

I did this and now I seem to be back to where it all started with a new rejection on August 22 based on: "This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article"

I was already pass this step, so it is very confusing that this is the reason for non-acceptance. (??)

Rixle (talk) 06:24, 24 August 2020 (UTC)
 * I generally don't know, but I would like to note that, who declined the draft for the external links, was blocked from editing for accpting drafts for pay. Victor Schmidt (talk) 07:21, 24 August 2020 (UTC)

Request on 07:23:54, 24 August 2020 for assistance on AfC submission by Jianmarin
Good day. I am writing to you regarding two articles I wrote about 2 Greek writers Maria Papayanni and Vassilis Papatheodorou. I wrote the 2 articles using identicall information and sources and (at least in my eyes) I wrote them "in the same way". the article for Mrs Papayanni was accepted while the article aboyt Mr Papatheodorou was declined twice. I would like to correct the article of Mr Papatheodorou but I do not know what more is needed (inline citations) especially when I compare it with Mrs papayanni article. Can you pleae advise?

Best regards John Marinos

Jianmarin (talk) 07:23, 24 August 2020 (UTC)

07:37:49, 24 August 2020 review of draft by Flooyd7
Dear Editors, My draft has been declined and it says I have undisclosed paid editing, can someone help explain what I should do next?

Thanks in advance! Best regards, Mate

Flooyd7 (talk) 07:37, 24 August 2020 (UTC)
 * You should read and make the declaration required by the paid editing policy, or if you are not paid, explain any conflict of interest you might have. 331dot (talk) 10:40, 24 August 2020 (UTC)

Request on 10:17:19, 24 August 2020 for assistance on AfC submission by Puffymuffinz9
Hello Wikipedia Staff, I'm really trying to make a wiki page for our upcoming game Scars of Honor. But it seems that I am not really able to make it properly. It is important for us to have a Wiki page so we can be more discoverable. I will really appreciate all help you can give me. I am directly involved in the project. Thank you in advance!

Puffymuffinz9 (talk) 10:17, 24 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Wikipedia does not have a "staff", just a community of volunteer editors. Wikipedia, to be frank, has no interest in helping you get the word out about your game or to help potential users of your game find it. Those are promotional purposes and not permitted on Wikipedia. This is an encyclopedia, where article subjects must be shown with significant coverage in independent reliable sources how the subject meets the special Wikipedia definition of notability.  Wikipedia has no interest in what an article subject wants to say about itself. Your draft reads as an advertisement for the game; any article about your game, if it meets the definition of notability, should only summarize what independent sources have chosen to say about your game.
 * I see you declared a COI, but if you are compensated in any way for your work with the game(not just money), you must make the stricter paid editing declaration required by Wikipedia's Terms of Use. 331dot (talk) 10:37, 24 August 2020 (UTC)

12:10:59, 24 August 2020 review of submission by Csvijay141987
Csvijay141987 (talk) 12:10, 24 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Wikipedia isn't for promoting or "spreading the word" about something. Victor Schmidt (talk) 12:15, 24 August 2020 (UTC)

14:48:07, 24 August 2020 review of submission by 0rk2
I have updated the references and strengthened citations to show that this topic is notable enough for inclusion. 0rk2 (talk) 14:48, 24 August 2020 (UTC)

15:26:08, 24 August 2020 review of submission by Peanutbutterwikipedia1230
Peanutbutterwikipedia1230 (talk) 15:26, 24 August 2020 (UTC) I recently created the page 2022 United States Senate Election in Ohio, and it was successfully approved. However, I now see that the correct capitalization, which is consistent with other pages about similar elections, would have been "2022 United States Senate election in Ohio", with a lowercase e for election. I attempted to move the page to reflect this change, but it will not let me. I think this is because the page 2022 United States Senate election in Ohio redirects to the Ohio section of the 2022 United States Senate elections page. Would a Wikipedia administrator be able to assist me and be able to move by changing the title to "2022 United States Senate election in Ohio". Thank you very much.
 * User:Peanutbutterwikipedia1230 - Sandwich created. Robert McClenon (talk) 02:06, 25 August 2020 (UTC)

15:48:08, 24 August 2020 review of submission by 2409:4054:215:674B:1139:9E61:9F61:BC3B
2409:4054:215:674B:1139:9E61:9F61:BC3B (talk) 15:48, 24 August 2020 (UTC)
 * You don't ask a question, but what you wrote is not an encyclopedia article. 331dot (talk) 15:56, 24 August 2020 (UTC)

16:29:17, 24 August 2020 review of draft by Glammazon
Glammazon (talk) 16:29, 24 August 2020 (UTC)

Why has my entry for the earlier Mark Saber series been rejected? It's not a duplicate but rather a new entry entirely.
 * Well, it probably was a bit confusing that you were writing about two series with similar names, and that one of the titles has an 11 in parentheses, which looks like a Roman numeral 2, which could be look to someone like a duplicate. You know how when you create multiple files on your computer desktop it will often number them, like New folder, New folder (2), etc? It probably also didn't help that none of the web references you added seem to resolve and none of the other references seem very certain. I personally thought these were hoax articles until I happened to find a Mark Saber video at archive.org. So what I'd recommend, is that you try to beef up the references in the article and establish proper notability before resubmitting. That might mean having to go to the library or something. Regards, Cyphoidbomb (talk) 18:08, 24 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Minor tweak to the above, I guess they're lower-case Ls, not 1s. Still confusing, though. Cyphoidbomb (talk) 18:09, 24 August 2020 (UTC)

16:40:36, 24 August 2020 review of submission by Humanrabbit96
Hey i created the {[Draft:collegeinsider.in]] but it was rejected for notability reasons i read about the notability but i am unable to understand it someone kindly help me to how to make it as article what changes i have to do to make it as article Humanrabbit96 (talk) 16:40, 24 August 2020 (UTC)
 * our general notability guideline can be found at WP:GNG. The more specific guideline for corporations can be found at WP:NCORP. They both basically say that in order for a subject to be notable, you have to demonstrate that several mainstream sources independent of the subject (no interviews, no press releases, etc.) have written extensively about collegeinsider.in. We want to see bona fide news or magazine articles from known sources, for example, not dead links to Google Play or links to a web hosting Whois page. I performed a Google News search and found nothing on the site, so I think it will be very hard for you to demonstrate notability. Cyphoidbomb (talk) 17:44, 24 August 2020 (UTC)

very much thanks you cyphoidbomb i am very much glad that u made me understand how it works thank you so much love from india. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Humanrabbit96 (talk • contribs) 17:48, 25 August 2020‎

17:34:07, 24 August 2020 review of submission by Alex Rutu
Hi,

This article is not about promotion. This article about a person. I know that person closely that's why i write a article about his and want to publish this article please review the article and publish it. Or advise me how to write the perfect article for publishing I need to publish an article.

Thank you.

Alex Rutu (talk) 17:34, 24 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Subject is a 17-year-old. How exactly is he notable? I don't see any hits at Google News. Looks like a vanity article. Cyphoidbomb (talk) 17:49, 24 August 2020 (UTC)

22:36:28, 24 August 2020 review of submission by Soibangla
I tried to created a shortname, TRUMPECON, to redirect to Economic policy of Donald Trump administration. On other database systems, shortnames are routine and, while they may not be initially widely known to many, they become known as others use the system more. Also, the shortname would be picked up by googlebot such that googling the shortname would take a user straight to the article. For example of what I'm getting at, googing USPRIV takes a user directly here on FRED, while googling TRUMPECON would take a user directly to Economic policy of Donald Trump administration. Isn't that the point of shortnames? I'd like to create a whole bunch of them. It would be nice if, as on FRED, an article's shortname would be displayed at the top of the page (upper-right corner?) so users could see it and learn it. soibangla (talk) 22:36, 24 August 2020 (UTC)

soibangla (talk) 22:36, 24 August 2020 (UTC)
 * I don't think that Wikipedia is the right place to create a bunch of neologistic shortcuts, especially ones for implausible search terms like "TRUMPECON". Who uses that? Also, per your USPRIV example, there is no USPRIV redirect at Wikipedia, (note the red link) so whatever algorithm Google is using to point to the article you desire to wind up at, has nothing to do with Wikipedia as far as I know. I guess I'm just generally confused as to what value this would have here. 22:43, 24 August 2020 (UTC)
 * I suggest that the reason people would not use such shortnames is simply because they are unaware they exist. If they become of their existence, they discover shortnames are an enormous time-saver and adopt them, then wonder how they ever got along without them.  And, as on FRED and other database systems, the shortname is displayed on the page as a cue to users that it’s a faster route to find what they’re seeking. I used USPRIV simply to illustrate this concept, which is widely used elsewhere; I did not mean that it’s a WP shortname. soibangla (talk) 17:59, 25 August 2020 (UTC)

23:50:23, 24 August 2020 review of draft by Lwazilwenkosi Mpofu
I am wondering if a ZIMA award (among many others) won by a Zimbabwean music artist is not enough to warrant a Wikipedia article? I ask because the article Draft:Sandra Ndebele has been rejected several times yet it is backed by a lot of independent sources from Zimbabwe

lwax malax (talk) 23:50, 24 August 2020 (UTC)