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= December 29 =

04:53:41, 29 December 2020 review of submission by ChrisMat2020
Mohamed Mrad is a Tunisian actor. He played important roles in many films and TV series. My article is translated from French Wikipedia. There are Arabic and French wikipedia and I cited several notable sources like Kapitalis, Mosaïque FM, Africultures, Tuniscope, Assabah News and others. You can consult administrators or users from Tunisia. ChrisMat2020 (talk) 04:53, 29 December 2020 (UTC)
 * This is also at The Teahouse. Victor Schmidt (talk) 08:17, 29 December 2020 (UTC)

06:54:21, 29 December 2020 review of submission by Stardust8543
Not looking for a re-review. Would like this draft permanently deleted.

Stardust8543 (talk) 06:54, 29 December 2020 (UTC)
 * ✔️ Cyphoidbomb (talk) 22:55, 29 December 2020 (UTC)

07:26:01, 29 December 2020 review of submission by MonaliB
I am writing in reference to the current rejection with the MR. IQBAL QAZI draft. Mr. IQBAL QAZI is one of the popular entrepreneur in NAVI MUMBAI, and richest among the Muslim community. Thousands of people know him because of his good will. Today, hundreds of people have jobs under his companies.

Here is list of companies websites where he is director/owner http://www.oceangate.in/index.html (CFS-container fright station. Near JNPT PORT) http://takecarelogisticpark.com/ (CFS-container fright station. Near JNPT PORT) https://www.takecareglobalservices.com/ (ISO TANK DEPOT) https://www.iqrasteelandtubespvtltd.com/ (STEEL TRADER) https://pesenglishschoolandjuniorcollege.com/ (He is president at Panvel Education Society(PES). under pes there is three education campus as following places- Panvel City, Taloje, Panvel and Barapada,Panvel )

He is involve in many charitable events unfortunately, I didn't find references on internet.

In year 2019 flood in Maharashtra(Kolhapur, Satara and Sangli) He was help flood victim by providing them emergency fund and supplies.

In April 2020. due to the covid19 lockdown people are suffering. He helps needy people by providing them fund and food.

He helps poor and needy students by providing them scholarships.

This are the number of reasons why I wrote this article. Previously when I summited this draft I thought Wikipedia accept this draft. unfortunately, I face rejection.

Respected Wikipedia reviewer, Can you please help me to improve this draft and I am also appreciate if you confirm that following draft(Iqbal Qazi) fit the criteria for Wikipedia.

MonaliB (talk) 07:26, 29 December 2020 (UTC)

10:18:09, 29 December 2020 review of submission by Writerforfuture14
Hello there,

I would like to ask for a re-view to this article. A friend of mine tried to creat a wikipedia article about VAVA Eyewear, but we didn't put any references to the text that we wrote.

I did some research and found some newspappers and magazines that verify the text that he wrote before.

I hope everything is in order right now.

All the best. Writerforfuture14 (talk) 10:18, 29 December 2020 (UTC)
 * Is you friend the same person that wrote https://www.eye-book.com/2020/10/a-chat-with-pedro-da-silva/? If he is, that article is unsiutable for Wikipedia. Interviews and other primary sources are of limited use. The given text is overly promotional. If your friend isn't the person that wrote that, we have a real problem. Either way, based on the source text, the (deleted) revisions are not acceptable for Wikipedia. That does not mean an article cannot be created, however, any new attempt will have to start from a blank page. There are steps for article attempts avaliable here, here or here. Victor Schmidt (talk) 12:11, 29 December 2020 (UTC)

14:32:18, 29 December 2020 review of submission by Tech306
Hi there,

I submitted the article below from a different page (which now is deleted since the name North Star Systems Inc. didn’t meet Wikipedia requirements) and it got declined due to these reasons:

"1. This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies. 2. Blatant advertising and copy-pasting of mission statements including trademark symbols"

Please provide any specific feedback you can to improve this article so it hopefully doesn't get declined again. 1. If I don't have to include trademarks, I won't. I just thought I had to since their product is trademarked. 2. I also tried to change a lot of words so its not copy-paste but there are some words I just can't change because it will change the whole sentence and might also misinterpret what this company believes in.. 3. I provided all possible references that exist about this company to back up the information I'd like to contribute to Wikipedia.

Your help is appreciated.

Sincerely, Tech306

[draft removed; as you were advised last time, please don't add any article text or references to this page]

Tech306 (talk) 14:32, 29 December 2020 (UTC)


 * The draft was located at Draft:North Star Systems Inc.. Any administrator can see it (I'm not one, but there are several admins who frequent this page). The best person to ask about a deleted page, if you don't get responses here, is the administrator who performed the deletion. You'll see who that is if you click on the red link to the deleted draft. Regards, --bonadea contributions talk 14:48, 29 December 2020 (UTC)

Request on 15:45:54, 29 December 2020 for assistance on AfC submission by Samirkhan.0
Samirkhan.0 (talk) 15:45, 29 December 2020 (UTC)
 * You didn't ask a question. The current draft is unferifyable, and doesn't appear to meet WP:GNG. If this draft is about you, please have a look at WP:AUTOBIO. Victor Schmidt (talk) 15:48, 29 December 2020 (UTC)

16:56:23, 29 December 2020 review of submission by Siriandstuffs
I want this page to be re reviewed ~ the page was last reviewed 11 months back ~ the topic has done more credible and notable work in the meantime ~ the article has been updated thoroughly Siriandstuffs (talk) 16:56, 29 December 2020 (UTC)
 * You rejected in January. Do you have an opinion on the current draft? (changes since January 28th, 17:05). Victor Schmidt (talk) 17:05, 29 December 2020 (UTC)
 * No "please"? Cyphoidbomb (talk) 19:24, 29 December 2020 (UTC)

21:28:38, 29 December 2020 review of draft by MI Americas
I would like to save changes I've made to a draft page, but I do not get the option to save changes, I only get the option to publish changes, which I am not ready to do yet. MI Americas (talk) 21:28, 29 December 2020 (UTC)
 * "Publish changes" should be interpreted to simply mean "save changes", it does not mean "publish this to the encyclopedia ". It used to say save changes, but legal reasons necessitated a change. 331dot (talk) 22:11, 29 December 2020 (UTC)
 * If "MI Americas" is the name of an organization, you will need to change your username and review conflict of interest and paid editing. 331dot (talk) 22:12, 29 December 2020 (UTC)

how do I change my username?
 * You may visit either Special:GlobalRenameRequest or WP:CHUS to make a username change request. You will also need to read conflict of interest and paid editing and make the required disclosures. 331dot (talk) 08:04, 30 December 2020 (UTC)