Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2020 February 22

= February 22 =

00:14:16, 22 February 2020 review of draft by Iwalters
Iwalters (talk) 00:14, 22 February 2020 (UTC)

This article was refused due to inadequate sources

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Mission_of_the_Shark:_The_Saga_of_the_U.S.S._Indianapolis

So is IMDB no longer a reliable source or do I just need to add more sources?

does Wikipedia no longer have stub articles and if so couldn't this article be made one rather than deleted?
 * IMDB has never generally been considered a reliable source on Wikipedia as it is user-editable. Reliable sources must have editorial control and a reputation of fact checking. Wikipedia needs significant coverage in independent reliable sources. 331dot (talk) 11:19, 22 February 2020 (UTC)

03:16:20, 22 February 2020 review of submission by Anastasia Belotskaya
Anastasia Belotskaya (talk) 03:16, 22 February 2020 (UTC)
 * See Sockpuppet investigations/AlekK19. This is UPE. Cabayi (talk) 05:52, 22 February 2020 (UTC)

03:18:39, 22 February 2020 review of submission by Anastasia Belotskaya
hii, i just want to create this page. it is not an promotional page because this model is already very famous and she just need an wikipedia identity so that people can know abut her with the help of thiswebsite. hope you understand my thoughts. i am wwaiting for your positive response.

Anastasia Belotskaya (talk) 03:18, 22 February 2020 (UTC)
 * See Sockpuppet investigations/AlekK19. This is UPE. Cabayi (talk) 05:52, 22 February 2020 (UTC)

06:25:31, 22 February 2020 review of submission by Franklin187
Hi everyone, thanks for your input but I don't understand why you are still not accepting this article. Every time I adjusted exactly what you told me before you are giving new reasons why you can't approve it. Benjamin played critical roles in multiple productions as stated in the article, won awards which is proven by the published accredited articles of high level newspapers, magazines and press in general.

Pls review this article again.

Thanks in advance.

Franklin187 (talk) 06:25, 22 February 2020 (UTC)
 * You have been given extensive commentary about your draft on it- what about it do you not understand? 331dot (talk) 11:16, 22 February 2020 (UTC)

09:40:42, 22 February 2020 review of submission by Thecorrector21
i have given you reference or source directly from the pakistan navy website why did you still decline.

Thecorrector21 (talk) 09:40, 22 February 2020 (UTC)
 * You were given the reason for the decline in the draft. Wikipedia requires significant coverage of a subject in independent reliable sources. 331dot (talk) 11:15, 22 February 2020 (UTC)

11:24:16, 22 February 2020 review of draft by Georget2004
My article was declined as lacking sources confirming the contents of the article, but if you check I added two credible sources including Kirkus Review which is a gold standard in literature reviews... Could you explain what else should be added to confirm the short synopsis of the novel? Thank you.

Georget2004 (talk) 11:24, 22 February 2020 (UTC)
 * Generally, more than two independent reliable sources with significant coverage are needed. Most reviewers like to see at least three. The draft does little more than tell of the book's existence- the article must do more, indicating how it meets the Wikipedia definition of a notable book. 331dot (talk) 11:26, 22 February 2020 (UTC)

15:07:17, 22 February 2020 review of submission by PinkElixir
Draft:Vartan Melkonian

Hi, I'd appreciate some help on resubmitting my article. I created a draft on Vartan Melkonian, conductor of the Royal Philharmonic Orchestra. As you can see, my draft was declined for mainly lack of notability. I've added some sources and removed ones which seem connected to the man himself. In addition, my article was denied because of advertising language, but I'm not sure which language specifically seems like advertising language. I'm open to any feedback that helps improve the article so it can get approved when I resubmit. Thanks in advance! PinkElixir (talk) 15:07, 22 February 2020 (UTC)