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= July 24 =

00:01:44, 24 July 2020 review of submission by Simple sports
How do I change my Draft name from Basketball to The Origins Of Basketball? Simple sports (talk) 00:01, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Question asked and answered at Teahouse. David notMD (talk) 01:14, 24 July 2020 (UTC)

Request on 02:23:38, 24 July 2020 for assistance on AfC submission by Ms.kaur23
why my article is not approved. this is my first time publishing then maybe i did something wrong can u please help me out from this. thanks for appreciated it.

jaspreet kaur Aulakh (talk) 02:23, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) REDIRECT Target page name
 * , I can find no contributions by you that suggest an article. Fiddle   Faddle  10:38, 24 July 2020 (UTC)

04:53:30, 24 July 2020 review of submission by Bloodisblood
My name is Jordan Moll-Vigrass and I am the Founder of a US Non-profit called Blood is Blood based in Buffalo, NY. Since 2015 Founder of Blood is Blood, Jordan Moll-Vigrass's Advocacy for Change has encouraged the FDA to change their MSM Blood Ban from a once Indefinite, 12-Month and now 3 Month Deferral period by Remaining Abstinent for a whole year so he could donate, to holding 5 Blood Drives(Buffalo, NY), 2 Blood Drives(Virginia Beach, VA) saving over 597 lives and I feel our advocacy deserves notice and present merit, however, I have no idea how to write a Wikipedia and I also feel I might be biased.

Can you or someone help me create this Wikipedia page?

There are many articles and newstories on this including advocate.com, hornet.com He referred to in this Wikipedia page below: Under: History of calls to change the policy Blood donation restrictions on men who have sex with men

[https://www.advocate.com/hiv/2018/7/26/gay-man-stays-celibate-order-donate-blood#:~:text=Jordan%20Moll%2DVigrass%2C%20who%20donated,of%20the%20discriminatory%20FDA%20policy.&text=A%20gay%20man%20in%20Buffalo,months%20before%20donating%20blood%20Wednesday.&text=Prior%20to%202015%2C%20the%20FDA,gay%20and%20bisexual%20men%20altogether. Gay Man Stays Celibite in order to Donate Blood Advocate.com ] Gay man stays celibate to donate blood news.WBFO.com Meet the Gay Man Who Remained Celibate for an Entire Year Just So He Could Donate Blood Hornet.com Gay Man Fights for Right to Donate Blood WKBW.com Supporters of the “Blood is Blood” organization fight for right to donate blood WIVB.com Seeing Red over Continued Blood Donation Discrimination https://thehumanist.com/ New guidelines on blood donations from gay men draws mixed reviews northcountrypublicradio.org Congressmen Brian Higgins Press Release

Bloodisblood (talk) 04:53, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
 * , The best help we can give is either for you to suggest it at Requested articles or to have a crack at it yourself to go to WP:AFC, and scroll down to the big blue box that says "Click here to start a new article" and to work steadily though the process Fiddle   Faddle  10:35, 24 July 2020 (UTC)

09:35:25, 24 July 2020 review of submission by Kavyansh.Singh
I have edited my article on Chandrakant Devtale ("https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Chandrakant_Devtale") further and added more information and citations. Kindly review it. Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 09:35, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Your draft is in the queue again, so someone will review it eventually. — HELL KNOWZ   ▎TALK 10:02, 24 July 2020 (UTC)

10:06:03, 24 July 2020 review of submission by Harmander.singh.brar
Harmander.singh.brar (talk) 10:06, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
 * , I have looked at both drafts in your contributions list. One is a test edit and has been, the other is an advertisement for you and your instagram account and has been and offered for speedy deletion. Wikipedia is not a web host, it s for serious articles only. You are welcome to contribute to Wikipedia, but please try to avoid writing about yourself  Fiddle   Faddle  10:30, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Account has been indef blocked for sockpuppetry.  Java Hurricane  04:38, 25 July 2020 (UTC)

15:51:30, 24 July 2020 review of submission by Harmander brar
Harmander brar (talk) 15:51, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
 * , Please see the section just above this one where I reply to your blocked prior account. My reply is very similar. Fiddle   Faddle  17:03, 24 July 2020 (UTC)

16:23:11, 24 July 2020 review of draft by Iamsouravrana
Iamsouravrana (talk) 16:23, 24 July 2020 (UTC)

Is the Draft Draft:Priya Shah is ready for submission? Iamsouravrana (talk) 16:23, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
 * , It is in a submittable state. If I reviewed it now I would push it back to you for better referencing with this message: For a living person we have a high standard of referencing. Every substantive fact you assert, especially one that is susceptible to potential challenge, requires a citation with a reference that is about them, and is independent of them, and is in WP:RS, and is significant coverage. Please also see WP:PRIMARY which details the limited permitted usage of primary sources and WP:SELFPUB which has clear limitations on self published sources. Providing sufficient references, ideally one per fact cited, that meet these tough criteria is likely to make this draft a clear acceptance (0.9 probability). Lack of them or an inability to find them is likely to mean that the person is not suitable for inclusion, certainly today. Fiddle   Faddle  17:01, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
 * , not unexpectedly, with the rationale above  Fiddle   Faddle  12:51, 25 July 2020 (UTC)

19:14:30, 24 July 2020 review of submission by 2409:4065:D9E:CA45:7B3D:39F6:8B62:E739
2409:4065:D9E:CA45:7B3D:39F6:8B62:E739 (talk) 19:14, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
 * You don't ask a question, but your draft had no independent reliable sources with significant coverage of this organization, showing how it meets the special Wikipedia definition of a notable organization. 331dot (talk) 15:28, 25 July 2020 (UTC)

22:42:25, 24 July 2020 review of submission by Jadelsb1
Jadelsb1 (talk) 22:42, 24 July 2020 (UTC)

I have edited this to include many of the changes that were suggested to me from the previous edits. Please assist me with what else I may need to include to have this article submitted. Thank you.


 * , I cannot see how the gentleman passes any of our thresholds of notability at this stage in his career. Perhaps writing an article about him when his career has developed would be more appropriate Fiddle   Faddle  12:55, 25 July 2020 (UTC)