Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2020 March 31

= March 31 =

01:52:45, 31 March 2020 review of submission by Alekh99
Alekh99 (talk) 01:52, 31 March 2020 (UTC)


 * Alekh99, you have already gotten plenty of feedback from other reviewers. Sam-2727 (talk) 14:53, 5 April 2020 (UTC)

05:40:41, 31 March 2020 review of submission by Lendale Johnson
Lendale Johnson 05:40, 31 March 2020 (UTC)

Lendale Johnson (born August 24, 1986) is an American professional tennis player, actor, model, celebrity tennis coach, and reality tv star. []

Johnson has an uncredited part in the pilot of Empire in 2015, where he can be seen briefly in a panning camera shot at a boat party.[]

He is also an ambassador for WalkOff, a social movement focused on driving racism out of sports and has previously commented on racism aimed against Serena Williams at the 2016 Australian Open. []

Lendale is to star in “Deuces And Love”, a reality tv series highlighting Hollywood star interviews and his acting, modeling, and tennis careers. []

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06:01:27, 31 March 2020 review of draft by Isaucier
Hello,

I am currently writing an article and my submission was rejected with the reason being The content of this submission includes material that does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations and to check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. There were no additional comments. I read the articles mentioned in the refusal message but it's still not clear to me which material in my article is lacking the reference(s). The visual editor has a notification that references are missing, but even if I did add them, it still appears.

I have added references to the article, but had IMDB as a reference and from other messages, I saw that this wasn't considered a reliable source in messages from Sulfurboy to other authors, so I removed it. I would like to understand what I am doing wrong so that I can correct it

Isaucier (talk) 06:01, 31 March 2020 (UTC)

09:11:52, 31 March 2020 review of draft by Александр Клепиков
Александр Клепиков (talk) 09:11, 31 March 2020 (UTC)

Прошу Вас отменить блокировку и удаление. Я сам написал текст статьи. и исправил первый абзац, на который Вы указали


 * это английская Википедия и эта страница помощи только для английской Википедии. Русская Википедия находится на https://ru.wikipedia.org/. У них другие правила создания статей, которые вам придется выяснить там. В любом случае, имейте в виду, что вы не можете копировать контент извне. — HELL KNOWZ   ▎TALK 10:16, 31 March 2020 (UTC)

10:24:00, 31 March 2020 review of submission by Tbiw
Tbiw (talk) 10:24, 31 March 2020 (UTC)

Tbiw, you requested deletion (I think it was you). You can request undeletion here. Also may I ask why your user page has a copied and pasted request for bureaucratship? Sam-2727 (talk) 15:33, 31 March 2020 (UTC)

10:33:15, 31 March 2020 review of draft by AraValatar
<I really want to have some in game information from skyrim on the Dwarves in that game accessible on the Alexa, and I have wikipedia on it. I use Wikipedia to get all info on stuff and put it into pen later.

Because I dont have time to edit this article in the full online, and have more time without it because of household rules, I was hoping someone can provide images and neccesary edits to make this page publishable.

Thank you very much

AraValatar AraValatar (talk) 10:33, 31 March 2020 (UTC)


 * Unfortunately, there isn't any editing we could do to make this publishable. Wikipedia relies on independent reliable in-depth secondary sources. All articles must have at least several such sources. This draft is what we would call WP:GAMECRUFT. — HELL KNOWZ   ▎TALK 11:58, 31 March 2020 (UTC)

14:56:11, 31 March 2020 review of submission by Kutuloncat3
, articles should be neutral and not written as promotions. Sam-2727 (talk) 18:25, 31 March 2020 (UTC)

16:03:39, 31 March 2020 review of submission by Exiledstranger
Exiledstranger (talk) 16:03, 31 March 2020 (UTC)
 * , Request to do so has been put in. Sulfurboy (talk) 16:07, 31 March 2020 (UTC)

delete this page sir

18:34:15, 31 March 2020 review of submission by Everyusernamesrtaken
Hi, I'm trying submit a page but it was declined, can you please kindly direct me of what needs to be corrected? Thanks! Everyusernamesrtaken (talk) 18:34, 31 March 2020 (UTC)
 * You were told what needed to be corrected in the decline message. You need independent reliable sources with significant coverage of this person. Wikipedia isn't interested in what an article subject says about themselves, only in what others say about them. 331dot (talk) 18:46, 31 March 2020 (UTC)
 * You have zero reliable sources, YouTube is not a suitable source and you have used it 10 times. Theroadislong (talk) 18:55, 31 March 2020 (UTC)

20:03:16, 31 March 2020 review of draft by Sargyle77
Hi there - I'm looking for some guidance on an article I submitted which has not been approved due to issues with reliable sources. It is for a non-profit think tank, and I looked to other non-profit think tank Wiki pages as a guide. I have 6 references including media and the U.S. Congress. I'm not sure why this isn't enough or what other sources I should cite. In a previous submission, I was told not to cite publications from the think tank.

Sargyle77 (talk) 20:03, 31 March 2020 (UTC)


 * Hi Sargyle77, let me see if I can give you some advice. First off, Wikipedia shouldn't be used as a source. It isn't considered a reliable source (plus, you could in theory write a fact into one article then cite it in another and then cite that article in the other article, creating a hopelessly unverifiable loop). I assume you know the notability guidelines. If not, in brief your article must be supported by multiple (at least three) reliable independent sources that mention the subject significantly (so no trivial coverage). while perhaps a reliable source, is only trivial coverage as it mentions the nonprofit in passing. Your sixth source is just the homepage of the washington times, so I can't verify anything there, but I will warn you that the Washington Times has a track record of misinformation.  is again trivial coverage.  is trivial coverage.  might barely count as signficant coverage, although this is up to debate.  isn't considered independent because the person giving the testimony works at the nonprofit. Finally,  is not independent. Hope this helps! Sam-2727 (talk) 22:23, 31 March 2020 (UTC)

20:57:31, 31 March 2020 review of draft by Sunvidal
I don't understand how to unmerge the Congressional Hispanic Caucus page and the CHCI page. They operate separately CHC is a political entity and CHCI is used as a nonprofit for education. CHCI is listed on Guidestar as a nonprofit that is for educational. https://www.guidestar.org/profile/52-1114225 When I tried editing the CHC page a couple of weeks ago with the correct info, they were deleted with a comment of "C'mon". Apologies, but I'm confused as to what is needed to add facts or get the pages submerged. Many thanks for any help you can extend.

Sunvidal (talk) 20:57, 31 March 2020 (UTC)
 * , It hasn't been merged, instead a merger has been proposed. If you wish to argue against that then you would need to post to the linked page in the merger notice. Sulfurboy (talk) 22:59, 31 March 2020 (UTC)

22:27:29, 31 March 2020 review of submission by AH FITness
22:27:29, 31 March 2020 review of submission by AH FITness AH FITness (talk) 22:27, 31 March 2020 (UTC)
 * , Did you have a question? Sulfurboy (talk) 22:59, 31 March 2020 (UTC)

22:54:07, 31 March 2020 review of submission by Sy331
I am new to Wikipedia, although a good friend with a social media company is trying to help me. I own a PR firm and am trying to get a page up for an important client. I have indicated I am being paid for the page. I revised the text (which was required from the first editor) to remove all the adjectives, and it now reads like an encyclopdia entry; The next editor said the media links were inadequate, so I added a huge feature profile of my client published in Wall Street Journal, along with stand alone reporter-written (not press release) articles in Austin Statesman and Los Angeles Business Journal, among others; next, an editor said that I needed to show that I am being paid for this submission, and my friend helped me achieve that disclaimer (although another editor reviewed my submission and said that I didn't have the disclaimer - although I most certainly did. My client is a billionaire, and the son of a multi billionaire (an original investor in Apple).  I would appreciate it greatly if someone could work with me on this page, as my client is quite deserving of a Wikipedia page and I am clearly in need of assistance! Thanks, Steve Sy331 (talk) 22:54, 31 March 2020 (UTC)
 * , The article has been rejected which means it will not be considered further. Being a billionaire does not make you notable. Sulfurboy (talk) 22:57, 31 March 2020 (UTC)

23:27:05, 31 March 2020 review of submission by Sy331
My client is a leading private equity investor. He has investments in scores of companies across multiple industries and his activities have been reported on by major media, including (as I mentioned previously) the Wall Street Journal which profiled his massive auto collection. I respectfully ask for the opportunity to prepare a page that more effectively shares his current business investments, charitable associations and auto collection. Thank you. Sy331 (talk) 23:27, 31 March 2020 (UTC)
 * , This has already been answered above. Sulfurboy (talk) 00:12, 1 April 2020 (UTC)