Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2020 May 12

= May 12 =

Request on 06:39:19, 12 May 2020 for assistance on AfC submission by BelleRetouch
So, If I don't have any external articles written about my business I am not notable? I'm a sole proprietor. I work solo since 2006 with my business. Not sure what else I can do to fix this.

BelleRetouch (talk) 06:39, 12 May 2020 (UTC)
 * , I'm afraid that is how it works. We only write about subjects that have received significant coverage in multiple reliable sources. Generally, that means at least 3 newspapers or similar sources have written an article about said business. Wikipedia is not for promotion or advertising. If you'd like that, you should get in touch with an ad agency. CaptainEek  Edits Ho Cap'n!⚓ 07:37, 12 May 2020 (UTC)

08:39:34, 12 May 2020 review of draft by Alanisantamarina
Helo Admin, Greetings!

I am creating a web page named by Alani Santamarina which was declined by your review editors. So i need help to become live this page. Please send me further instruction.

Alanisantamarina (talk) 08:39, 12 May 2020 (UTC)
 * This user was assisted on the live help IRC channel. The user was requested to change their username as they are not Alani Santamarina and also advised on WP:N, WP:BLPRS and WP:PSCOI - - Rich T&#124;C&#124;E-Mail 09:08, 12 May 2020 (UTC)

09:45:49, 12 May 2020 review of submission by Vinod ingle
Vinod ingle (talk) 09:45, 12 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Assuming this is about User:Vinod ingle/Sandbox, please don't write an article about yourself. Wikipedia is an Encyclopedia, not a social media site like Facebook etc. Victor Schmidt (talk) 12:15, 12 May 2020 (UTC)

10:25:07, 12 May 2020 review of submission by Premkumar7092
Premkumar7092 (talk) 10:25, 12 May 2020 (UTC)

10:31:06, 12 May 2020 review of submission by Rashidhosseini3
Rashidhosseini3 (talk) 10:31, 12 May 2020 (UTC)

10:34:03, 12 May 2020 review of submission by Rashidhosseini3
Rashidhosseini3 (talk) 10:34, 12 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Please see The answer to life, the universe, and everything. Victor Schmidt (talk) 12:12, 12 May 2020 (UTC)

10:47:42, 12 May 2020 review of draft by 지금행복한가영
I'm trying to add some discography information for Draft:Hello Ga-Young. One of her song "For to be strangers" changed its name to "Estranged" when it was included into her first studio album. However, the only source that is still accessible is an album description on Spotify. Will that website be a good reference in this case? Thank you for reading the question. :) Sorry, I've just noticed that I misplaced questions. Now I know I should go teahouse. Thanks a lot. 지금행복한가영 (talk) 10:47, 12 May 2020 (UTC)

11:14:11, 12 May 2020 review of submission by Pt8340
This is 54 year old company. It has more than 2.5 million customers in all over world. It has gained sufficiently significant attention by the world at large and over a period of time. I have taken all the information from independent, reliable and credible sources like Khaleej Times, Gulf News, Al Bawaba, Arabian Business, Emirates 24/7. All the words and sentences are written neutral point of view. This is following every policy and guidelines of Wikipedia. This should be live on Wikipedia

Pt8340 (talk) 11:14, 12 May 2020 (UTC)
 * what changed since the last time you asked here 5 days ago? Victor Schmidt (talk) 12:09, 12 May 2020 (UTC)

I feel this is following every policy and guidelines of Wikipedia. So there is no need of any change. If you feel any problem with this please tell me. I will improve that

11:57:10, 12 May 2020 review of submission by Arumugam pk
I'm requesting an re review because unwanted external link has been removed and better proof citation is added

Arumugam pk (talk) 11:57, 12 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Your draft was rejected, Facebook and YouTube are not reliable sources. Theroadislong (talk) 12:02, 12 May 2020 (UTC)

12:21:37, 12 May 2020 review of submission by Djkrav
I am working on dj remix. And people do not know much about my work and I want people to know more about my work, so I am trying for a review. Djkrav (talk) 12:21, 12 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Wikipedia is not for things made up one day. You may also want to read about The answer to life, the universe, and everything. Victor Schmidt (talk) 13:43, 12 May 2020 (UTC)

12:45:43, 12 May 2020 review of submission by Farzam.iman
Farzam.iman (talk) 12:45, 12 May 2020 (UTC) hi dears if you could please help us to create our wikipedia page, we are company holding on turkey named ECOHOS
 * Okay, I see a bunch of problems here


 * Since it's aparently your company, you have to disclose your status per WP:PAID, which is a Terms of Use requirement.
 * Wikipedia accounts cannot be shared between multiple individuals, see WP:NOSHARE.
 * None of the sources on the sandbox are currently reliable and independent on the subject. You may want to read The answer to life, the universe, and everything.
 * the sandbox currently reads more like an advertisement than an encyclopedic article. When you going to rewrite this, avoid puffery words. Victor Schmidt (talk) 13:41, 12 May 2020 (UTC)

14:03:26, 12 May 2020 review of submission by Nerdbird89
Hello! The draft in question keeps getting denied for sounding too promotional, so I wanted to ask your advice on what parts sound promotional and what I can do to fix it. I drafted the page because I'm interested in Russian tech developments, and sourced my info from media reports and publicly available info. I also included criticisms of the company and allegations that it may be collecting user data, and am happy to expand on the topic.

Thanks in advance for your help! Nerdbird89 (talk) 14:03, 12 May 2020 (UTC)

15:48:24, 12 May 2020 review of submission by Vinoth Kumar Murthy
S. Siva Kumar (Siva Kumar/Siva) is a sound engineer from India and known for his work with the Indian Musician A R Rahman, Harris Jayaraj, Anirudh Ravichander and other composers of south India.

Siva Kumar is the Chief Audio Engineer at Panchathan Record Inn and AM Studios Chennai.

REFERENCE: 1: 2: 3: 4:

This page was created by huge fan of him. Vinoth Kumar Murthy (talk) 15:48, 12 May 2020 (UTC)

18:30:14, 12 May 2020 review of submission by Qtd1103
Hello, I would really appreciate if you could help me point out what I need to work on this draft to make it better.

Thank you,

Qtd1103 (talk) 18:30, 12 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Hi . There are a few issues with this draft. For one, it is not written in an encyclopedic tone, as described at WP:TONE. It is written in an essay-like style, and addresses the reader in second person, as in Therefore, if you are taking Ca supplements and eating calcium-fortified foods, you may get more Ca than what you need. It also gives the reader medical advice, like check the label and consult your doctor first to determine which form of Calcium supplement is more appropriate for your health condition, which is something Wikipedia should not do under any circumstances: see WP:NOMEDICALADVICE. Finally, much of the information in this draft is already covered in other articles, like Calcium_in_biology, Calcium metabolism, and Calcium metabolism disorders. If you are interested in these topics, I think it would be better to improve articles that already exist than to create a new one that contains a lot of the same information. You can check out WP:WikiProject Medicine for advice on writing medical articles. WP:MEDHOW and WP:MEDRS are very helpful. SpicyMilkBoy (talk) 02:19, 14 May 2020 (UTC)

21:31:02, 12 May 2020 review of draft by Ekkie101
I would like this article to be accepted so I am trying to improve this article. The reviewer said I need to cite sources for the article. I need help with citations. I don't know how to attach a citation to a name or subject mentioned in the article.

Ekkie101 (talk) 21:31, 12 May 2020 (UTC)

22:08:07, 12 May 2020 review of submission by 2605:E000:1529:8653:C849:BEF4:9480:552F
Please reconsider. The stated reason is at best capricious, especially considering he is cross-referenced in other entries. 2605:E000:1529:8653:C849:BEF4:9480:552F (talk) 22:08, 12 May 2020 (UTC)

22:35:16, 12 May 2020 review of draft by Chrisc5234
Chrisc5234 (talk) 22:35, 12 May 2020 (UTC)

I have several sources describing coverage of the organization in question, one a long read from the independent, a long established newspaper from the UK, a Huffington Post article, along with others. Not sure why this doesn't meet Wikipedia's notability requirements.