Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2020 November 5

= November 5 =

00:37:19, 5 November 2020 review of submission by 2603:8081:500:F700:B99B:D01D:FF3D:8494
2603:8081:500:F700:B99B:D01D:FF3D:8494 (talk) 00:37, 5 November 2020 (UTC)

04:35:59, 5 November 2020 review of submission by 136.185.194.236
Please let me know what makes this article contrary to the Wikipedia policies. And suggest any edits. 136.185.194.236 (talk) 04:35, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
 * This reads like an advertisement. What is your connexion to KEN? —A little blue Bori  v^_^v  Takes a strong man to deny... 05:05, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
 * It reads like a corporate brochure and you've provided no references that would suggest it is notable in any way. See WP:GNG and WP:CORP. Cyphoidbomb (talk) 17:13, 5 November 2020 (UTC)

06:53:19, 5 November 2020 review of draft by Rishibankim
I did not submit any article for publication in wikipedia as an independent article. My submission is a series of review of the original article titled "Mahatma Gandhi". I want my submission to be talked by wikifamily. Anyway, how do I submit my review and comments on an existing article ? RISHIBANKIM Rishibankim (talk) 06:53, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
 * To propose changes to an existing article, you should use that article's associated talk page. To increase the chances other editors will see your request, you should add a formal edit request tag to it(click for instructions). 331dot (talk) 09:41, 5 November 2020 (UTC)

09:32:49, 5 November 2020 review of submission by 31.182.61.2
31.182.61.2 (talk) 09:32, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
 * You don't ask a question, but the draft was rejected, meaning that it will not be considered further. 331dot (talk) 09:40, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Their question was also answered in the discussion they opened above. Cyphoidbomb (talk) 18:30, 5 November 2020 (UTC)

12:44:18, 5 November 2020 review of submission by Aassaf2020
Aassaf2020 (talk) 12:44, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
 * You don't ask a question, but your draft was rejected, meaning that it will not be considered further; I have deleted it as blatant promotion. Please read Your First Article for more information, and if you are associated with the person you wrote about, please review conflict of interest. 331dot (talk) 12:48, 5 November 2020 (UTC)

Request on 14:26:21, 5 November 2020 for assistance on AfC submission by 24.102.77.7
I keep getting rejected for peacock terms and non-neutral language. Having reviewed this on Wikipedia's terms page I am still unclear as to what I am doing wrong.

24.102.77.7 (talk) 14:26, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Ever heard of promotion-by-overdetail? We don't need laundry lists of everything and everyone he works with or has done, just the most relevant ones. —A little blue Bori  v^_^v  Takes a strong man to deny... 18:14, 5 November 2020 (UTC)

22:07:46, 5 November 2020 review of submission by Mdainko
I resubmitted a revised version 2 months ago. I made an attempt to remove all of the "Press Release" language. Do we know if it's being reviewed again already? If so, any idea when I may receive an answer? Or, do I need to do something further to trigger a new evaluation?

Please let me know.

Thanks, Matt

Mdainko (talk) 22:07, 5 November 2020 (UTC)