Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2020 September 20

= September 20 =

06:24:35, 20 September 2020 review of submission by Iychapur
I am unable to understand, which type of changes are required in same subject matter. I have read the five pillars polices of Wikipedia and I have on the point that there is no contrary impact on the article. Kindly please guided me

Iychapur (talk) 06:31, 20 September 2020 (UTC)

06:30:32, 20 September 2020 review of submission by Iychapur
I am unable to understand, which type of changes are required in same subject matter. I have read the five pillars polices of Wikipedia and I have on the point that there is no contrary impact on the article. Kindly please guided me

Iychapur (talk) 06:30, 20 September 2020 (UTC)

10:17:36, 20 September 2020 review of submission by ಆಶಾ ನಾಯಕ
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:%E0%B2%86%E0%B2%B6%E0%B2%BE_%E0%B2%A8%E0%B2%BE%E0%B2%AF%E0%B2%95/sandbox

My wiki article on LaxmiBai Kelkar, the founder of Rashtra Sevika Samiti is declined. Like many social workers and reformers, there is not much information available on the internet about her. The available sources are tagged in the article. This wikipedia article can help many in the future to further study and create content about her. Kindly guide to improve and approve this page.

ಆಶಾ ನಾಯಕ (talk) 10:17, 20 September 2020 (UTC)

15:59:15, 20 September 2020 review of draft by SynellGaming
SynellGaming (talk) 15:59, 20 September 2020 (UTC)

19:33:19, 20 September 2020 review of draft by Ctorella
hi just wondering if my 2nd draft has been cued for review - i've not heard anything back from my 2nd edit? my first edit was reviewed almost instantly - that's why im asking? thanks in advance.. chris Chris Torella (talk) 19:33, 20 September 2020 (UTC)
 * , By examining it you can see the banner that appears when it is submitted but nt yet reviewed. This means it is awaiting attention. Please continue to work on it while awaiting review Fiddle   Faddle  19:43, 20 September 2020 (UTC)
 * , You need to look at the files you've uploaded to Commons. Each of them is technically likely to be out of scope for Commons, and you may need to visit the helpdesk there on Commons for advice. Fiddle   Faddle  19:53, 20 September 2020 (UTC)

22:26:16, 20 September 2020 review of submission by Jediwriter1975
Hello! I'm looking to add this article to Wikipedia, and am sincerely trying to keep within the guidelines. I'd love some direction and help with submitting the appropriate COI form, as I know this person. I'm a ghostwriter and editor for ForbesBooks, and am trying to add articles of some of the industries newest movers and shakers. I also need to upload a photo of Lance Tyson, and have a release from the photog. Not sure how the language in the article sounds like a press release as the reviewer indicated... I tried to imitate similar copy used in articles like Tony Robbins and others...

Any assistance would be greatly appreciated! I love Wiki and am looking forward to becoming a valued contributor! Chip Jediwriter1975 (talk) 22:26, 20 September 2020 (UTC)
 * Hi, I agree with the reviewer that the article is too promotional in tone. The best example of this is probably the sentence Under his leadership, Tyson built the largest and most successful Dale Carnegie sales operation in the western hemisphere., which is sourced to an interview with the subject himself. Additionally the sources in the article are insufficient to establish that he is adequately notable. I'll put some more comments about the sources at Draft_Talk:Lance_Tyson so as not to clutter the page up here Pi (Talk to me!)  23:38, 20 September 2020 (UTC)

23:23:15, 20 September 2020 review of submission by 2606:A000:111A:C12D:FD4C:8A36:3766:7E73
2606:A000:111A:C12D:FD4C:8A36:3766:7E73 (talk) 23:23, 20 September 2020 (UTC)


 * By neither creating an account nor stating a question when you post at this help desk, you're setting yourself up for failure on Wikipedia. I've left a comment on Draft:NGC 4033 suggesting ways you could move forward. --Worldbruce (talk) 00:14, 21 September 2020 (UTC)
 * If the galaxy was discovered by William Herschel, then he would have published an account of it, and there have been many works written recently about his work. If the galaxy has a number in NGC, which it apparently does, then that is itself a published work.  We agree that the galaxy exists, but what astronomers have documented that?  Robert McClenon (talk) 20:51, 21 September 2020 (UTC)