Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2021 August 30

= August 30 =

03:10:20, 30 August 2021 review of submission by Marquettb
Marquettb (talk) 03:10, 30 August 2021 (UTC)

I am a fan of a youtuber called Marquett Davon Burton who is a multimillionaire business man and author but the page I created got deleted. There is no button to 'contest deletion', how do I: A) Contest Deletion B) Write a better article.


 * Hi . Wikipedia may not be used for any type of advertising, promotion, or public relations. Draft:Marquett Davon Burton was deleted because it was egregiously promotional. Please see: Why was the page I created deleted?, and if you feel the deletion was an error, please discuss this with the.
 * Help:Your first article and Writing better articles contain general advice, but Burton does not appear to be notable (suitable for inclusion in the encyclopedia), so you would need to pick a different topic to write about. --Worldbruce (talk) 13:44, 30 August 2021 (UTC)

10:38:24, 30 August 2021 review of submission by Abm1994
I am ready to fix .My source for the article is I google about it. You can accept it, I am ready to fix the issue. Abm1994 (talk) 10:38, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
 * The draft was rejected, and will not be considered further. If you have new information that addresses the reasons for rejection, you must contact the last reviewer and tell them what has changed. 331dot (talk) 10:49, 30 August 2021 (UTC)

I have given the references in the reference list.I connected with reference list.

22:11:03, 30 August 2021 review of draft by Jebandgus
I have written 2 drafts today and I got one back saying that the draft was blank; I rewrote the submission, but can't tell if it has been properly submitted. It's not in my contributions folder. Could someone please tell me if my draft has been submitted and is being reviewed? Thanks so much.

Jebandgus (talk) 22:11, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
 * Your submission was declined on August 30. There are several things you can do to improve your chances of success, before resubmitting. Most importantly is to make the draft less promotional.  It reads like a brochure.  You don't need to tell about the challenges to male fertility in the article.  We have male infertility for that. The third paragraph of the lead section can be clipped.  Don't start the history section with the award - go in chronological order. What year was the company founded? Not there. You'll also want to reorganize the information.  You have info about mailing in sperm in the history section - that makes more sense being in a services section. On a lesser note, there are syntax issues.  The ref code goes after the punctuation, and there are no spaces between the punctuation and first ref bracket. Sections are sentence case, not title case. You should also disclose your conflict of interest on your talk page, per WP:COI. Good luck! TechnoTalk (talk) 20:45, 3 September 2021 (UTC)