Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2021 February 17

= February 17 =

10:59:45, 17 February 2021 review of submission by Rajinder singh bali
Rajinder singh bali (talk) 10:59, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
 * You don't ask a question, but Wikipedia is not social media for people to tell the world about themselves. Please see the autobiography policy.  Wikipedia is interested in what others say about you, not what you want to say about yourself. 331dot (talk) 11:02, 17 February 2021 (UTC)

14:22:03, 17 February 2021 review of submission by Zenameer
Hi Robert,

Thanks for pinpointing where I went wrong. I have removed the line that was promotional and also made edits to the remaining part of that section.

Should I continue building this page?

Zenameer (talk) 14:22, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
 * No, since the draft was rejected, it won't be considered further at this time. 331dot (talk) 14:35, 17 February 2021 (UTC)

16:42:32, 17 February 2021 review of submission by Hilltoppernhs
While I know my topic does not seem to have national significance, I think that it is important enough to garner a Wikipedia article solely to aid with the confusion that many townspeople of Needham (and surrounding towns) may feel. With the recent pandemic and rise of digital news, as well as the rise of alarming current events in the town, it has become increasingly important for the town to be aware of what is happening. And, more and more, the town is looking at the High School to see how they are managing the coronavirus, and what sorts of precautions they are taking; but also a symbol of hope for the return of normalcy as student's continue with classes and extracurriculars. However, Needham's students newspaper is affectionately dubbed "the Hilltopper", a name that leads to confusion among many of the older residents of Needham, especially when articles or editions are mentioned in Needham's facebook group. To this end, the creation of a wikipedia page elucidating what exactly "The Hilltopper" is should be helpful in ending their confusion, and allowing the town to be on the same page, and understand the information that is coming to them from and about their high school. Hilltoppernhs (talk) 16:42, 17 February 2021 (UTC)

16:47:27, 17 February 2021 review of draft by Kristina Van Prooyen
Hello. I am trying to resubmit an article but it seems to show as a duplicate. How do I move it so it is the resubmission of the original article rather than a duplicate? Thank you!

Kristina Van Prooyen (talk) 16:47, 17 February 2021 (UTC)Kristina Van Prooyen

Kristina Van Prooyen (talk) 16:47, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
 * Simply make the changes you made in your sandbox to the version of your draft that is in draft space(Draft:Jeff H. Greenwald), and submit that page. 331dot (talk) 17:00, 17 February 2021 (UTC)

17:51:39, 17 February 2021 review of submission by KodiakBP
Hi! Thanks for reviewing my article.

I'd love to know what I can do to get the submission approved.

As far as I understand, one of the main reasons is because it's not notable?

What is considered notable since a lot of other articles mention Kodiak Building Partners?

Would love to hear some input.

KodiakBP (talk) 17:51, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
 * User is blocked, draft deleted. 331dot (talk) 19:32, 17 February 2021 (UTC)

18:06:23, 17 February 2021 review of draft by Ovaryian
I received some feedback about how to improved the entry for Shari Diamond. I didn't understand this comment "Several sections are outsourced. Source them or remove them." Can you give more clarification as to what "outsourced" means in this context? is it in reference to the quotations, which have citations? Should I remove those? Thank you for your help!

Ovaryian (talk) 18:06, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
 * Hi . That's a typo for "unsourced". Sections "Teaching, Workshops & Lectures" and "Cooperative & Membership Galleries", possibly other sections, and certainly portions of sections, cite no sources. Everything must be verifiable in reliable, published sources. If you can't cite such a source for a statement, it shouldn't be included. --Worldbruce (talk) 21:11, 17 February 2021 (UTC)