Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2021 January 22

= January 22 =

07:45:09, 22 January 2021 review of submission by Dailogian
My article reference to the journal that has been published on international Journal Could you give me some advice regarding which part of my article that should be deleted so that it does not look like an advertisement?

Dailogian (talk) 07:45, 22 January 2021 (UTC)
 * The draft has been rejected, meaning that it will not be considered further. There is nothing that you can do to change that. 331dot (talk) 11:29, 22 January 2021 (UTC)

11:23:02, 22 January 2021 review of submission by Intern Communication
Good morning, I am writing because my draft was rejected because the text I entered did not contain citations of sources. I would therefore like to ask you whether it is necessary for a text to cite sources in order to be approved or whether it is possible to insert a text, in my case the biography of a journalist, freely, without the need to use external sources.

Intern Communication (talk) 11:23, 22 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Wikipedia is an encyclopedia that summarizes what independent reliable sources state about a subject, in this case, a person, showing how they meet the special Wikipedia definition of a notable person. All information in an article must be sourced, especially in an article about a living person, which has its own special rules.  Wikipedia is not a place like social media to just tell about a person.
 * If you are associated with this person, you must review conflict of interest and paid editing. I would also suggest that you change your username to be more individualistic(your real name is not required) and not that of a position.  I've posted how you can do that on your user talk page.  331dot (talk) 11:26, 22 January 2021 (UTC)

13:04:58, 22 January 2021 review of draft by Nilabh Shivam Thakur 2
Nilabh Shivam Thakur 2 (talk) 13:04, 22 January 2021 (UTC)
 * You don't ask a question. You have submitted your draft and it is pending review.  This may take some time. 331dot (talk) 13:08, 22 January 2021 (UTC)

16:19:09, 22 January 2021 review of submission by Rk2515
why my articla is not appoved. ? i have already follow all your WP:NFILM notability. and my film is in pre production film and is also listed in the international film database(imdb) you can check this link(riturn ticket) too. and star cast is already in wikipidia. plz accept this. Rk2515 (talk) 16:19, 22 January 2021 (UTC)
 * I don't think you read all of WP:NFILM, because one portion of it, found at WP:NFF says: "Films that have not been confirmed by reliable sources to have commenced principal photography should not have their own articles, as budget issues, scripting issues and casting issues can interfere with a project well ahead of its intended filming date. The assumption should also not be made that because a film is likely to be a high-profile release it will be immune to setbacks—there is no "sure thing" production."
 * Thus, you shouldn't be submitting an article about a film if you can't prove that filming began. "Pre-production" doesn't matter to us. Cyphoidbomb (talk) 17:31, 22 January 2021 (UTC)

16:20:28, 22 January 2021 review of draft by Dsalerno
Dsalerno (talk) 16:20, 22 January 2021 (UTC)

Hi,

I'm trying to get feedback on a recently submitted page. My impression is that I would do well to use the sandbox before re-submitting the page for re-review. You can find a link to the page below:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Rose_Matsui_Ochi

Is the sandbox the appropriate venue to request help with the page, or would this 'help desk' be able to review the page prior before I resubmit it?

Well wishes.
 * Due to how recently they passed, this article would fall under biographical protections, and as such the presence of unsourced claims is going to result in a decline. A reviewer has also noted it's not neutrally written. —A little blue Bori  v^_^v  Takes a strong man to deny... 18:50, 22 January 2021 (UTC)

16:56:38, 22 January 2021 review of draft by Rk2515
why you remove my image its my own work if not belive you can find in intire internat. Rk2515 (talk) 16:56, 22 January 2021 (UTC)
 * You didn't specify what image you're talking about, so it's hard to help you. Cyphoidbomb (talk) 17:28, 22 January 2021 (UTC)
 * I assume you refer to c:File:Return Ticket (2021).jpg. FYI, the argument that an Image is yours because it appears on the entire internet is a particular bad one, as this makes OTRS permission nearly required. Hence, I have a question: Are you realy the creator of that movie poster? Victor Schmidt (talk) 18:01, 22 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Even if they were, I find it unlikely that the studio wouldn't have made them give up their rights as a work-for-hire. Also, Rk2515 should be aware that if that was their own work, they are effectively releasing that high resolution image into the Creative Commons. Cyphoidbomb (talk) 19:24, 22 January 2021 (UTC)

19:52:29, 22 January 2021 review of submission by Martymcflys
Hello, Can I edit more notable information on her article? Martymcflys (talk) 19:52, 22 January 2021 (UTC)
 * The draft has been rejected, meaning that it will not be considered further. 331dot (talk) 19:54, 22 January 2021 (UTC)
 * It's written in a highly promotional tone and contains strange statements, like that she has "five combined" children. Are they strapped together, or did she use glue to combine them? I'm guessing she used glue, since her education is in "collage". Cyphoidbomb (talk) 19:59, 22 January 2021 (UTC)

23:50:21, 22 January 2021 review of submission by JoshKaine
I'm requesting a re-review because I've added more reference's for the subject. JoshKaine (talk) 23:50, 22 January 2021 (UTC)
 * All you've added are paid for spam sources. Those are not acceptable CUPIDICAE💕  23:56, 22 January 2021 (UTC)
 * I added more references to the subject
 * JoshKaine (talk) 01:35, 23 January 2021 (UTC)
 * You didn't add any new references since you opened this help request. Thus, your question has already been answered. Note also my comments on your talk page, since your multiple help requests are beginning to be disruptive. Cyphoidbomb (talk) 01:43, 23 January 2021 (UTC)