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= January 29 =

01:05:12, 29 January 2021 review of submission by Redbettie7
Wondering any specific edits that can be made to my draft. Is there anything that stands out within the article that is keeping it from being approved? What makes it seem like a test edit and not worthy for inclusion? Redbettie7 (talk) 01:05, 29 January 2021 (UTC)


 * Hi . If you're asking about Draft:The Rogue Initiative, you've made your question difficult to answer by deleting the draft. That means most people can't see it anymore to evaluate it. Creating a new article is one of the most difficult, frustrating, and time consuming tasks a novice editor can undertake, and is vastly overrated. If you were trying to write about an extant business, the best advice is don't. Not, at least, until you have much more experience with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. It's much easier and more useful to start by improving existing articles. We have over six million to choose from. See Task Center for how to help. --Worldbruce (talk) 05:20, 29 January 2021 (UTC)

Hi, I have put the article in my sandbox. Wondering if someone can help me with these questions previously asked. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Redbettie7 (talk • contribs) 01:15, 3 February 2021 (UTC)

14:48:04, 29 January 2021 review of submission by Sky445
Hello everyone, I need your support regarding this submission, I noticed that this composer page keeps getting rejected even though he is one of the most reputable singers and composers in the middle east. Please advise why it is being rejected and how we can succeed in publishing a page about him.

Sky445 (talk) 14:48, 29 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Amazon and Allmusic are not reliable sources, the Billboard link doesn't go anywhere and the topic fails WP:NMUSICIAN. Theroadislong (talk) 15:10, 29 January 2021 (UTC)

15:30:22, 29 January 2021 review of submission by Nargizyl
I cannot see the reason why this page is not being approved. I am neither being paid nor an employee. I just want to share some info about local company. Could someone please help? Nargizyl (talk) 15:30, 29 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Your draft was rejected because the topic is not sufficiently notable for inclusion in Wikipedia, you removing that rejection doesn't alter the fact, the draft will not be re-considered. Theroadislong (talk) 15:34, 29 January 2021 (UTC)

16:32:09, 29 January 2021 review of draft by Apos gk
Hi, i want to make a page about a director but my submission is rejected. Can anyone help me?

Apos gk (talk) 16:32, 29 January 2021 (UTC)
 * It was only declined, not rejected. You have resubmitted it. 331dot (talk) 18:05, 29 January 2021 (UTC)

17:06:07, 29 January 2021 review of submission by Vikulgupta17031986
Hi I have updated my whole page, Can you please review now. Vikulgupta17031986 (talk) 17:06, 29 January 2021 (UTC)
 * The draft was rejected, meaning that it will not be considered further, and no amount of editing can change that. 331dot (talk) 18:03, 29 January 2021 (UTC)

17:39:18, 29 January 2021 review of submission by Mochgamen1
Mochgamen1 (talk) 17:39, 29 January 2021 (UTC)
 * You don't ask a question, but your draft was rejected, meaning that it will not be considered further. It appears that the band does not meet Wikipedia's special definition of a notable band. 331dot (talk) 18:01, 29 January 2021 (UTC)

18:47:47, 29 January 2021 review of submission by Sean Solie
My article was denied back in November due to a lack of credible sourcing. Since, I have submitted multiple requests to Wiki with no response. All of the sources that I used, aside from one, are news sources and I am having a hard time understanding without further direction what I can do to better source my article considering I referenced the most credible sources I can find. Are the mentions of Sean McCoshen's financial contributions the issue at hand? If I were to drop the dollar amounts and just list the entities, with the articles sourced, would that work? I have gone over the various tools in Wiki on sourcing and I'm not identifying anything that speaks to this.

Please advise.

Sean Solie (talk) 18:47, 29 January 2021 (UTC)
 * An issue is that the coverage barely mentions the subject or doesn't mention him at all. Also, large chunks of text have no citations. SL93 (talk) 18:56, 29 January 2021 (UTC)

18:53:20, 29 January 2021 review of draft by JBWPpw
Hello - I submitted a revision of this draft in November and it has been listed as submitted and awaiting review. Since no action has been taken I was wondering if I should do anything further at this point?

Thanks!

JBWPpw (talk) 18:53, 29 January 2021 (UTC)
 * , there is always value in continuing to improve the draft Fiddle   Faddle  16:01, 30 January 2021 (UTC)

19:56:10, 29 January 2021 review of submission by 104.4.164.242
I don't see a yellow box, re: "If you see a yellow box saying "Review waiting, please be patient", you have successfully submitted your draft for review." Please advise.

104.4.164.242 (talk) 19:56, 29 January 2021 (UTC)
 * I fixed it for you. SL93 (talk) 20:00, 29 January 2021 (UTC)