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= March 16 =

02:35:30, 16 March 2021 review of submission by Mrbusye
Sir I want to publish myself in wikipedia for public.Anyone can found me and know about me and my attitude towards public. Mrbusye (talk) 02:35, 16 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Wikipedia is not a social media outlet, and there is no evidence that you are sufficiently notable to have an article here. -- Kinu t/c 05:23, 16 March 2021 (UTC)

09:00:05, 16 March 2021 review of submission by Madhusmitabishoi
I have added articles fully dedicated on Sanjana Ganesan. She hosted a number of events like the Indian Super League(ISL), Badminton Premier League(BPL) and, Indian Premier League(IPL), similar to Mayanti Langer. She won ‘Femina Officially Gorgeous’ and even was the Femina Miss India 2014 Pune competition finalist. In 2014, Sanjana participated in the seventh season of MTV Splitsvilla, hosted by Sunny Leone and Nikhil Chinapa. Then how come Mayanti Langer page stays on Wikipedia and not Sanajan Ganesan?? Madhusmitabishoi (talk) 09:00, 16 March 2021 (UTC)

09:11:52, 16 March 2021 review of submission by Moravice
Not sure what is missing for this subject to be considered noteworthy. He was named European Skier of the Year 2019, as shown in one of the references. Is it the number of references or their significance that is considered inadequate? Moravice (talk) 09:11, 16 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Most reviewers look for at least three reliable sources with significant coverage of the subject. 331dot (talk)
 * Ok. Thanks. I'll add another reference and resubmit. Moravice (talk)

09:17, 16 March 2021 (UTC)

09:33:07, 16 March 2021 review of submission by Jasimriz
I need your assistance because I want to update this article with the correct information.

Firstly article's name is Indus Hospital and Health Network not Indus Hospitals please correct this. Also, the content is not an updated version so I've edited a newly updated content with correct information. so please help me out and replace the new content with the previous one.

Thanks

Jasimriz (talk) 09:33, 16 March 2021 (UTC)
 * , This is a live article and has been for many years. You are entitled to edit the live article unless oyu have a conflict of interest, and your draft is not going to be accepted (0.99 probability) because there is a live article. You may also have made the requisite number of edits to move the article to a correct title. I suggest you build consensus for this act using Requested move
 * My view is that neither the extant article nor your draft are is not particularly useful in that they are it is a great list s of unreferenced "stuff". Fiddle   Faddle  10:49, 16 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I see you decided not to await advice but went ahead and copied and pasted your work and replace the entire article. I have reverted your edit and left you a message on your talk page about disruptive editing. I will leave you a further message shortly about a perceived conflict of interest Fiddle   Faddle  11:09, 16 March 2021 (UTC)
 * , what is really missing in Wikitext is a "Thumbs up" ... ;-) CommanderWaterford (talk) 11:36, 16 March 2021 (UTC)
 * , 👍 Fiddle   Faddle  12:56, 16 March 2021 (UTC)
 * ,👍👍 CommanderWaterford (talk) 13:19, 16 March 2021 (UTC)

Jasimriz (talk) 08:41, 17 March 2021 (UTC)

Dear editor, I am employed by Indus Hospital and Health Network in the digital team. As per my management, I have to edit and upload the organization's information on Wikipedia and replace the old content on Indus Hospitals with the new content. The name of the page has been changed to the new name i.e. Indus Hospital and Health Network, however, I am unable to edit the content of the page as per your Wiki's community standards. I want to replace the old content on the page https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Indus_Hospital_and_Health_Network with the new and updated content i.e https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jasimriz/sandbox. Please let me know how can I replace the old content with the new content? I have already uploaded a draft with new content in my account's sandbox link has mentioned above. As per your queries about being paid about editing the content and having a "financial stake", I am an employee of Indus Hospital and Health Network and it is my job description to update the organization's Wikipedia page. Here is the link to our website - https://indushospital.org.pk/ Links to out publications where we have all the information about our organization - https://indushospital.org.pk/annual-report/ or https://indushospital.org.pk/annual-report-2019-20/

Please let me know how I can replace the content on the page Indus Hospital and Health Network Thank you.
 * You should make the paid declaration on your user page, not here. The content that you posted in your sandbox is just a promotional text that has no place as a Wikipedia article. I think that you and perhaps your company have a common misunderstanding as to the purpose of Wikipedia.  Wikipedia is not a place for companies to tell the world about themselves like social media or their own website is.  This is an encyclopedia, and as an an encyclopedia Wikipedia summarizes what independent reliable sources with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about a subject, showing how it meets (in this case) the special Wikipedia definition of a notable organization.  Wikipedia is not interested in what a company wants to say about itself, only in what others unconnected with the company say about it.
 * Because of that, articles do not necessarily state what the company might want them to say- because they can say what they wish about themselves on their own website. Article subjects have no special rights to the article- they actually have less, since they shouldn't make edits themselves. See WP:OWN. Wikipedia has no interest in what your employer has tasked you with doing, we are just here to summarize what independent sources state.  If there are specific errors in the article, or specific additions that you feel are needed, and those can be sourced to reliable sources, preferably independent sources, you may propose them on the article talk page, Talk:Indus Hospital and Health Network, in the form of an edit request(click for instructions).  331dot (talk) 08:54, 17 March 2021 (UTC)

Request on 10:38:27, 16 March 2021 for assistance on AfC submission by General electric p30ch
How I can enter a reference into a word;--General electric p30ch (talk) 10:39, 16 March 2021 (UTC)

General electric p30ch (talk) 10:38, 16 March 2021 (UTC)
 * , while not entirely sure of the meaning of your question, most general referencing answers can be found in WP:CITE and WP:REFB Fiddle   Faddle  10:42, 16 March 2021 (UTC)

13:28:49, 16 March 2021 review of submission by Dev Chhikara 05
Why my article was cancelled?

Dev Chhikara 05 (talk) 13:28, 16 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Because Wikipedia does not host personal profile pages. We need information from independent unbiased sources and you cannot provide that for yourself. — HELL KNOWZ   ▎TALK 13:33, 16 March 2021 (UTC)

17:17:08, 16 March 2021 review of draft by TerryBG
Hi, this draft was reviewed by Kashmorwiki, and declined with the stated reasons of (1) references do not demonstrate significant coverage in reliable independent sources, and (2) NPOV.

Here is a list of 13 articles entirely about Fleming, in reliable independent (and non-interview) sources, plus two notable books by two notable authors which mention Fleming on dozens of pages:

Articles:



Books:

They clearly meet WP:GNG and WP:BASIC.

In terms of the NPOV rationale, I have read through the article carefully again and I personally can spot no instances of NPOV violation, nor any peacock words. The only adjective I see is "aggressively", and that is because all of the reporting on that particular activity used that word and/or described the activity as such in so many words.

Can someone review the list of significant coverage links above, and also review the draft for language and tone and specify what if anything is non-neutral?

Thanks very much for your time.

TerryBG (talk) 17:17, 16 March 2021 (UTC)
 * , I have left you a full comment on the draft itself. I hope you find it of use. Fiddle   Faddle  07:58, 19 March 2021 (UTC)

18:19:19, 16 March 2021 review of submission by Saroj k86
Please help me to improve this Article. Saroj k86 (talk) 18:19, 16 March 2021 (UTC)
 * , your draft has been rejected and will not be considered any further. CommanderWaterford (talk) 18:22, 16 March 2021 (UTC)

20:51:07, 16 March 2021 review of submission by 172.218.161.164
172.218.161.164 (talk) 20:51, 16 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Do you have a question about this rejected draft? 331dot (talk) 21:03, 16 March 2021 (UTC)