Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2021 May 14

= May 14 =

02:09:33, 14 May 2021 review of submission by Rushabhbokefode1998
Rushabhbokefode1998 (talk) 02:09, 14 May 2021 (UTC)
 * You don't ask a question, but Wikipedia is not social media where people tell the world about themselves. 331dot (talk) 07:38, 14 May 2021 (UTC)

10:15:06, 14 May 2021 review of draft by DeLilGwashoper
Learning how to add an association which appears not only online but in reports, books and research papers. I am trying hard to speak neutral and wanted to work on the page with other librarians during the #1Lib1Ref and #AfLibWk African Librarians week starting on the 17th-24th May, 2021. Kindly assist with guidance on how to set up a working template that will undergo edits during an event.

https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/courses/AfLIA/AfLIA_1Lib1Ref_African_Librarians_Week_2021_(May_-_June_2021)?enrolled=true

Dagwashopa 10:15, 14 May 2021 (UTC)

10:16:17, 14 May 2021 review of submission by Drashti R Joshi
Can you please help how to increase the encyclopedic value of the House of Hiranandani Projects page?

Drashti R Joshi (talk) 10:16, 14 May 2021 (UTC)
 * The company is just a routine property developer like millions of others, nothing to suggest they are notable. Theroadislong (talk) 10:44, 14 May 2021 (UTC)

11:00:51, 14 May 2021 review of submission by HannieBeen
Dear sir, madam, I am requesting a re-review. The subject of this article is a professional journalist: https://journa.com/denise-delgado. Also, a professional singer. She has performed often and in countries such as France, Belgium and The Netherlands. Furthermore, she is a public figure because she was a main character in a TV show. Her audience keeps on growing. In addition to all of this, she has her own business in content creation called ImContent (www.imcontent.nl). She is the role model for many, but especially for girls growing up. All the more reason to accept this article in Wikipedia.

Kind regards. HannieBeen (talk) 11:00, 14 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Re-reviewed, nothing you have said indicates that the person is notable in Wikipedia's terms. Having her own content creation business confers zero notability and being a role model is subjective, sorry. Theroadislong (talk) 11:11, 14 May 2021 (UTC)

11:29:52, 14 May 2021 review of draft by Vinod2608
I have recently joined Wikipedia and this article was my first post. I think it's fine if it has to be deleted if it doesn't meet the required standards. I had created this article about a school as I read somewhere that school articles are usually accepted. But I completely agree and respect your decision to delete it as otherwise a lot of wrong information can come to Wiki.

Can you share what else information, do I need to add to make this article acceptable? Can I add news links of Hindi website for adding creditability? I'm not sure if an news article written in Hindi can be added as reference. I intend to work on this draft to get it to acceptable standard and then publish it.

Thanks a lot for help.

Vinod2608 (talk) 11:29, 14 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Sources may be in any language. English helps, but is not required. 331dot (talk) 12:25, 14 May 2021 (UTC)

13:45:36, 14 May 2021 review of draft by 71.187.40.39
My article (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Jeff_Burger) was rejected because it supposedly reads like an advertisement and doesn't quote independent reliable sources. But it consists solely of facts and is written from an objective point of view, and it cites such sources as Who's Who in America and the New Yorker. I am at a loss as to how to improve this entry and would be grateful for any specific suggestions. 71.187.40.39 (talk) 13:45, 14 May 2021 (UTC)


 * The draft was declined, which allows improvement and resubmission, not rejected, which is final. Who's Who in America is considered generally unreliable. Most of its content is provided by the person concerned, so editors generally treat it analogous to a self-published source. There is a broad consensus that it cannot be used to establish notability. The New Yorker article merely quotes Burger briefly. That does nothing to help establish notability. Try to make better use of independent sources that contain significant coverage of Burger, and minimize non-independent sources. --Worldbruce (talk) 15:42, 14 May 2021 (UTC)

16:34:47, 14 May 2021 review of submission by 2603:8000:2D01:EDAB:8DE1:E940:621E:34DC
Because I'm curious to see how much military occupations the United States has done. 2603:8000:2D01:EDAB:8DE1:E940:621E:34DC (talk) 16:34, 14 May 2021 (UTC)
 * No page is specified, and I can't suss one out from your contributions. Are you sure you're in the right place? —A little blue Bori  v^_^v  Jéské Couriano 10:54, 15 May 2021 (UTC)

17:03:14, 14 May 2021 review of draft by Afrah4483
This personal is a notable individual in the health sector of Maldives and Maldives Army (Maldives National Defense Force. Wo also received National Award of Honour and National Award of Recognition from President Yameen (former President of Maldives). Since Maldives Army is small force colonel is a third most senior rank. Please refer to the credible sources such as the web sites of presidents office along with ministry websites and websites of local news for verification. Please help me improve this article and publish it in Wikipedia.

Thanks

Afrah4483 (talk) 17:03, 14 May 2021 (UTC)

18:23:54, 14 May 2021 review of submission by Gigara
Contents updated. Gigara (talk) 18:23, 14 May 2021 (UTC)


 * @Gigara You do not ask a question but your draft had been rejected, meaning it will not be considered any further. CommanderWaterford (talk) 10:27, 15 May 2021 (UTC)

22:58:47, 14 May 2021 review of submission by Nabil1992
Nabil1992 (talk) 22:58, 14 May 2021 (UTC)


 * @Nabil1992 You do not ask a question but your draft has been rejected, meaning it will not be considered any further. CommanderWaterford (talk) 10:26, 15 May 2021 (UTC)

23:09:40, 14 May 2021 review of submission by Indyplant
Hi commander Waterford, thank you for the feedback, i didn't realise my draft might read as an advertisement as I mainly quoted independent sources like scientific articles. I have rewritten it, i hope this version is better!

Indyplant (talk) 23:09, 14 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Little or no wiki-linking, too many assertions sourced to primary sources. -- Orange Mike &#124;  Talk  00:13, 15 May 2021 (UTC)