Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2021 September 20

= September 20 =

04:48:08, 20 September 2021 review of submission by Pradeeprwt
Pradeeprwt (talk) 04:48, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
 * No sources, no article, no debate. —A little blue Bori  v^_^v  Jéské Couriano 06:29, 20 September 2021 (UTC)

06:11:34, 20 September 2021 review of submission by ThopazProductions
ThopazProductions (talk) 06:11, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
 * This article is hideously undersourced. I also very strongly suggest you change your username to one that doesn't imply shared/official use. —A little blue Bori  v^_^v  Jéské Couriano 06:31, 20 September 2021 (UTC)

06:18:12, 20 September 2021 review of submission by Vjayakumarp
Vjayakumarp (talk) 06:18, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Sam Sailor is dead on - If those are the best sources you have (both are too sparse), then there's no way we would be able to have an article from either a notability or content standpoint. —A little blue Bori  v^_^v  Jéské Couriano 06:34, 20 September 2021 (UTC)

07:06:49, 20 September 2021 review of submission by Vjayakumarp
Vjayakumarp (talk) 07:06, 20 September 2021 (UTC) As aravinda prakash article must be published i wished to take a review of submission
 * What is your connexion to Prakash? Also, none of the sources on this draft are any good either: One's missing a byline, another is from an outlet which doesn't seem to have an editor-in-chief listed, a third is a contextless photo, and the last was discussed and dismissed in the section immediately above. —A little blue Bori  v^_^v  Jéské Couriano 07:16, 20 September 2021 (UTC)

18:55:47, 20 September 2021 review of draft by Blacktezza
I have publish my first not sure what to do next — Preceding unsigned comment added by 	Blacktezza (talk • contribs)
 * Note:Original Signature has been lost as somebody else forgot to properly escape a &lt;ref>-Tag, causing the signature not to parse until I fixed the &lt;ref>-Tag Victor Schmidt (talk) 18:58, 20 September 2021 (UTC)

15:42:20, 20 September 2021 review of draft by CharlesSmith87
Hi there! I'm newer to editing wikipedia pages and want to make sure I am doing the best I can with the most correct information. I saw the ability to create the Brooks Rehabilitation Hospital page as I was going through the Florida Hospital page to provide more context for users. This page could also be submitted as a stub page. Please let me know if there's anything I can do to help improve the submission. Thank you CharlesSmith87 (talk) 15:42, 20 September 2021 (UTC) CharlesSmith87 (talk) 15:42, 20 September 2021 (UTC)

16:08:40, 20 September 2021 review of submission by Ameh Abraham
Hello, I need some assistance please. My last edited article on Babafemi Badejo, which has been approved, is not constantly visible on a search. Search results does not bring it out for readers. Please is there something I'm not doing rightly or that I need to do? Ameh Abraham (talk) 16:08, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
 * There is a 30-day or NPP grace period on when a page becomes eligible for indexing, whichever comes first. This is to help discourage attempts to use Wikipedia for SEO purposes. —A little blue Bori  v^_^v  Jéské Couriano 18:14, 20 September 2021 (UTC)

Request on 16:55:21, 20 September 2021 for assistance on AfC submission by Romanstuff
Hello, This artist is notable and the sources i have provided have not been mere mentions they are articles about him and his work. Can i please get a more detailed description of what exactly needs to be removed in order to get this approved? The article is for Shawn Theodore. Romanstuff (talk) 16:55, 20 September 2021 (UTC) Romanstuff

Romanstuff (talk) 16:55, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Most of the interviews have substantial ledes that make them usable, if borderline, but https://www.artsy.net/artwork/shawn-theodore-mnemosyne-afrolinquistica-a-portrait-of-poet-laureate-amanda-s-gorman and https://contemporaryand.com/exhibition/prizm-art-fair-2020/ aren't useful sources and should be scrapped. The "He has collaborated on commercial projects..." line also needs to go; it's at best extraneous and at worst an attempt at notability-by-osmosis. Most of the statements in the last paragraph also require attribution. —A little blue Bori  v^_^v  Jéské Couriano 18:08, 20 September 2021 (UTC)

Thank you so MUCH! This is very helpful. I will make those changes and get more sources that are suitable. Romanstuff (talk) 21:21, 21 September 2021 (UTC)romanstuff


 * Hello again -

I made new edits. Is it possible to get feedback and if it needs more work to get help on the second paragraph?Romanstuff (talk) 02:14, 26 September 2021 (UTC)Romanstuff

17:14:39, 20 September 2021 review of draft by Yomamajoy
I Want To Publish A Wikipedia Page On A YouTuber And Its Not Allowing

Yomamajoy (talk) 17:14, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Your sources are CNN's homepage and the subject's own YouTube channel. Neither are acceptable (The homepage for being a homepage and the YouTube channel for being a random YouTube channel). —A little blue Bori  v^_^v  Jéské Couriano 17:30, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Your sources are CNN's homepage and the subject's own YouTube channel. Neither are acceptable (The homepage for being a homepage and the YouTube channel for being a random YouTube channel). —A little blue Bori  v^_^v  Jéské Couriano 17:30, 20 September 2021 (UTC)

19:26:50, 20 September 2021 review of submission by Hildegaaard
Hello, I have completed the suggested changes. Is the article ready for publication? I have been waiting for additional feedback or publication for a little over a month. Thank you!

Hildegaaard (talk) 19:26, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
 * You have submitted the draft and it is pending, there are hundreds of drafts awaiting review by volunteers, please be patient. 331dot (talk) 19:29, 20 September 2021 (UTC)

22:19:14, 20 September 2021 review of submission by 100.2.125.237
100.2.125.237 (talk) 22:19, 20 September 2021 (UTC)

Request on 23:15:25, 20 September 2021 for assistance on AfC submission by 146.168.115.100
I want to create an article about my artist entity “TuTxTuT”. I want to show and prove the notability of his music.

146.168.115.100 (talk) 23:15, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
 * The only way you can prove it is by providing multiple strong third-party sources that discuss the subject at length. If those sources do not exist, then a Wikipedia article is out of the question. —<i style="color: #1E90FF;">A little blue Bori</i>  v^_^v  Jéské Couriano 06:19, 21 September 2021 (UTC)