Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2022 April 22

= April 22 =

01:28:31, 22 April 2022 review of submission by Integrityrules17
I believe my article about Sameer Wankhede has all the necessary sources and references still reviewers are not approving my article. The references I have given are reputed world over, the reason that reviewers are citing that "nothing has changed" after review- my reason is that I have changed reference section with all the independent world class secondary sources. The article has most of the basic details and it doesn't require any more change as of now I believe. Since, Wikipedia is not for promotion, I am not adding about his achievements to sound as if I am promoting him. I am very much neuatral in my approach.

And, when it comes to the question of, does this article needs a Wikipedia page or not - it's needed. Sameer Wankhede is a popular figure. You can find so many government officers Wikipedia page and those are not even necessary because they were not even popular for taking actions. I don't know why you guys are repeatedly rejecting the article. I thing a neutral decision is not taken whne reviewing my article. Please ensure you take a neutral decision.Integrityrules17 (talk) 01:28, 22 April 2022 (UTC)
 * You are a single purpose account, you have edited here for two days, and now you question the neutrality of experienced reviewers. Your draft has been rejected, it will not be considered further. Theroadislong (talk) 07:05, 22 April 2022 (UTC)

07:41:08, 22 April 2022 review of draft by Pathologix
I can't seem to get my categories to appear properly in a Categories box. What am I doing wrong? Help! (Thank you! 😄) Pathologix (talk) 07:41, 22 April 2022 (UTC)

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:PropertyGuru has now been rejected for advertising, and I don't understand why 😢. I've asked the reviewer to clarify, and the Treehouse for help, and would love any other help and feedback to get the article over the bar.

Thank you!! Pathologix (talk) 10:28, 22 April 2022 (UTC)

Pathologix (talk) 07:41, 22 April 2022 (UTC)


 * On Categories: Drafts should not appear in categories, so the categories have been disabled by adding ":" to each one. When the article moves to mainspace, remove the colons and all will be well.
 * On the general issue: I don't think it reads like an advert, but like a thoroughly-researched and well-sourced article. But I'm not an AfC regular. Pam  D  11:57, 22 April 2022 (UTC) ( - forgot to "ping".  Pam  D  11:58, 22 April 2022 (UTC))
 * @PamD Thank you for the advice on categories and logos, and the extremely nice note about the article! I think I probably need to entice some experienced editors to help finish the draft, as I think I'm in over my head in terms of AfC approval... Pathologix (talk) 17:34, 22 April 2022 (UTC)

07:42:25, 22 April 2022 review of submission by Shadysbook
The website is having notable presence and prominence on onlines, magazines and PR. Check the links below: •https://www.outlookindia.com/newsscroll/oasis-fertility-sets-its-goal-be-the-numero-uno-in-theindian-fertility-industry/2159684 •https://www.theweek.in/wire-updates/business/2021/09/14/pwr22-oasis-fertility.html •https://www.dailyflashnews.com/oasis-fertility-sets-its-goal-be-the-numero-uno-in-the-indian-fertility-industry/ •https://www.theweek.in/wire-updates/business/2021/09/14/pwr22-oasis-fertility.html •https://www.freepressjournal.in/business/oasis-fertility-forays-into-karnataka-with-its-ivf-clinics-in-bengaluru •https://www.biospectrumindia.com/news/77/19856/oasis-fertility-opens-centre-in-bengaluru.html •https://www.expresshealthcare.in/news/oasis-fertility-forays-into-karnataka-with-its-ivf-clinics-in-bengaluru/431858/ •https://www.indianpharmapost.com/hospitals/oasis-fertility-forays-into-karnataka-plans-10-more-centres-10538 •https://thisweekindia.news/oasis-fertility-forays-into-karnataka-with-its-state-of-the-art-ivf-clinics-in-bengaluru/ •https://theindianpractitioner.com/2021/10/28/oasis-fertility-forays-into-karnataka-with-its-state-of-the-art-ivf-clinics-in-bengaluru/ •https://www.deccanherald.com/city/top-bengaluru-stories/fertility-rate-falls-in-bengaluru-urban-areas-1045212.html •https://kannada.news18.com/news/state/bengaluru-urban-fertility-rates-in-bangalore-urban-comes-down-stg-sesr-653615.html •https://www.timesnownews.com/videos/mirror-now/society/oasis-fertility-sets-up-its-largest-chain-of-fertility-clinic-in-bengaluru/113450 •https://indiaeducationdiary.in/oasis-fertility-conferred-the-best-employer-brand-award-by-asia-pacific-hrm-congress/ •https://www.prittleprattlenews.com/health/oasis-fertility-conferred-the-best-employer-brand-award-by-asia-pacific-hrm-congress/ •https://lifecarenews.in/oasis-fertility-conferred-the-best-employer-brand-award-by-asia-pacific-hrm-congress/ •https://www.apnnews.com/oasis-fertility-conferred-the-best-employer-brand-award-by-asia-pacific-hrm-congress/ •http://businessnewsthisweek.com/health/oasis-fertility-conferred-the-best-employer-brand-award-by-asia-pacific-hrm-congress/ •http://mediabulletins.com/health/oasis-fertility-conferred-the-best-employer-brand-award-by-asia-pacific-hrm-congress/ •https://digitalmedia9.com/health/oasis-fertility-conferred-the-best-employer-brand-award-by-asia-pacific-hrm-congress/ •https://www.nyoooz.com/features/health/tips-from-the-nutritionist-from-oasis-fertility-for-national-nutrition-week-2021.html/6406/ •https://health-reporter.news/national-nutrition-week-top-6-herbs-and-fruits-to-enhance-your-daily-diet-the-weather-channel-articles-from-the-weather-channel/ •https://www.firstshowz.com/2021/09/national-nutrition-week-2021-tips-for-right-nutrition%20-for-pregnant-women.html •https://www.newindianexpress.com/lifestyle/health/2021/sep/08/all-you-need-to-know-about-fertility-diet-2355659.html •https://lifeandmore.in/guest-post/diet-boost-fertility-levels/ •https://hotnewsexpress.com/2021/09/03/tips-from-the-nutritionist-from-oasis-fertility-for-national-nutrition-week-2021/ •https://www.apnnews.com/tips-from-the-nutritionist-oasis-fertility-for-national-nutrition-week-2021/ •tips-from-the-nutritionist-from-oasis-fertility-for-national-nutrition-week-2021/ •http://businessnewsthisweek.com/health/national-nutrition-week-2021-tips-from-the-nutritionist-from-oasis-fertility-for-national-nutrition-week-2021/

Shadysbook (talk) 07:42, 22 April 2022 (UTC)
 * The draft was rejected, and will not be considered further. None of this massive list of sources is appropriate for establishing that the hospital meets the special Wikipedia definition of a notable organization.  Fewer high quality sources are much better than a large number of poor quality sources.  The awards or survey rankings are unremarkable and subjective, unless the award merits an article itself(such as Academy Award). 331dot (talk) 09:01, 22 April 2022 (UTC)

12:57:03, 22 April 2022 review of draft by Tushar3011
Hello Admins, Can you tell me the draft article ready for submit. Can I submit this and get approved.  Tushar  (talk)  12:57, 22 April 2022 (UTC)
 * Just noting that anyone can comment on and review a draft, not just admins. 331dot (talk) 13:06, 22 April 2022 (UTC)
 * Unsourced biographical claims need to either get sourced or get tossed, per WP:Biographies of living persons. —Jéské Couriano  v^&lowbar;^v  a little blue Bori 19:10, 22 April 2022 (UTC)