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= April 28 =

10:39:50, 28 April 2022 review of submission by Mookaloo
Hi I've used very few links to the subject's own website, so please help me understand what else I can/should link to. I've stated facts rather than opinions, so I similarly don't know what to do to make it read less like an advertisement.

Many thanks

Mookaloo (talk) 10:39, 28 April 2022 (UTC)
 * ' builds digital services that empower people living in poverty to improve their livelihoods" is just blatant marketing, do you have a connection to the company by any chance? Theroadislong (talk) 11:07, 28 April 2022 (UTC)

13:14:50, 28 April 2022 review of submission by Quasselstrippe
Hi. I proposed to add a foundation registered in the Netherlands, working currently in german-speaking countries or from poverty-affected people and raise awareness of poverty in Europe. It is basically a translation from the german Wiki and I also think it's important to have an English speaking entry either. What do you think is needed to get approval within the process? many thanks

Quasselstrippe (talk) 11:16, 28 April 2022 (UTC)

15:08:17, 28 April 2022 review of submission by 2409:4054:219B:3D14:9078:43F2:A629:FCB7
2409:4054:219B:3D14:9078:43F2:A629:FCB7 (talk) 15:08, 28 April 2022 (UTC)


 * The sources aren't about Mehmood specifically, being about his company - and even then they're trash for that purpose. Coverage of the company is not coverage of the person. —Jéské Couriano  v^&lowbar;^v  a little blue Bori 18:31, 28 April 2022 (UTC)

17:12:52, 28 April 2022 review of submission by 203.190.13.142
203.190.13.142 (talk) 17:12, 28 April 2022 (UTC)


 * The tone of this article is disjointed and almost conversational, with each paragraph just being a single sentence about a thing he said. I cannot speak to the sources (automated translation stumbles on South and East Asian languages); I'd ask WT:INDIA. —Jéské Couriano  v^&lowbar;^v  a little blue Bori 18:34, 28 April 2022 (UTC)

19:36:45, 28 April 2022 review of submission by MermaidDemon777
I am mixologest simply trying to get myself out on the bigger streets. MermaidDemon777 (talk) 19:36, 28 April 2022 (UTC)


 * That isn't our concern. Wikipedia is not a means of promotion. —Jéské Couriano  v^&lowbar;^v  a little blue Bori 22:04, 28 April 2022 (UTC)

20:16:03, 28 April 2022 review of draft by 185.12.222.174

 * "Hello. We have reviewed your comments on our drafts and followed the Wikipedia guidelines. That said, we submitted a new revised text more than a month ago. Can you please check it out? We thank you for your time. Best Regards."*

185.12.222.174 (talk) 20:16, 28 April 2022 (UTC)


 * @IP editor, did you personally take the picture that is in the draft? Nevermind, someone else (probably) uploaded it.

Apologies. 73.127.147.187 (talk) 11:23, 1 May 2022 (UTC)